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In The Army Now Part 19
5/20/07:Alice and Dana’s House-West Hollywood-9:00 A.M. (L.A. Time)
Alice woke up to the sound of the phone ringing. She remained still. It’ll stop eventually, she thought. After three more rings Alice finally got up and answered to phone. “Hello,” she lazily said into the receiver.
“Alice, come pick up your mom.”
“Shane? What are you talking about?”
“Your mom came over yesterday, made me, and I really mean made me, take her to pick up her car, followed me home and crashed out on my couch saying, ‘I’m drunk I can’t go all the way to Alice’s house’ even though you live ten minutes away. She’s a-”
“Shane? I need help putting my bra on,” Alice heard Lenore say in the back ground. She couldn’t help but chuckle.
“Alice!” Shane snapped.
“What? She’s old, she reach back there like we can.”
“Just come get her.”
“Uh, she has a car you know.”
“No, come over, distract her and make her leave. I don’t want Carman to-”
“Who’s Carmen?” Lenore called out.
“My girlfriend, I already told you that like fifty times.” Shane called back. Alice laughed even more.
“Well, looks like you’ve got your hand full. Bye.”
“Alice, don’t you dare hang up.”
“Shane, just ignore her. She has the attention span of a rat. She’ll leave when she’s bored.” Alice saw a piece of paper on the pillow next to her. “Ok, bye Shane.” Before Shane could respond, Alice hung up. Alice put the phone back and picked up the note.
Alice,
As cute as you are when you sleep, the snoring is too much. But it’s still cute. Call when you wake up or when you feel like it.
Vanessa
Alice let out a small smile. This one note let Alice know a lot about Vanessa. She was sweet, and shy. And, in a way, she was geeky. Alice was marveled at how much this woman reminded her of Dana and was wondering if that was the only reason she wanted to pursue something more with her. After reading the note two more times she picked up the phone and called Vanessa.
“Can I help you?”
“Hey you. You could’ve let me down easy that I snore.”
“Yeah, but you were asleep. So what are you doing?”
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wow – you really have been gone for awhile. good update. why can’t dana call alice and tell her she’s alive?
what the hell??? it’s been way to long…you need to update this story…it almost been a year?!
please finish this story!!! i think its amazing and one the the best origional stories on this site so please post again!
AHHHHHH!!! i was in the military i just HAVE to know what happens!! PLEASE POST AGAIN! This is an awesome story…i’ll help if you need just PLEASE give it a shot!