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    In the Beginning……………Chapter 13……………….A Night to Remember

    Story written on August 16, 2005 by goldfish.
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    A B&T beginning……….my version

     

    She winked at Bette and watched Bette leave.   As she waved goodbye she started imagining and planning the nights events.the ones that would take place after the opening…the commitment she was ready to make, .the events that would show Bette she really loved her..the event she was so looking forward to.a time that would change both of their lives forever


     

     

    In the BeginningChapter 13.A Night to Remember

     

     

    The opening was going great.  People were impressed.  Several paintings and items had sold.

    Bette looked her usual tailored and gorgeous self in one of her black suits.  Tina looked sensational in a blue form fitting dress.  They had mingled and Bette had introduced her to several people as her girlfriend.  After getting over the initial shock of hearing her described as such she had loved it.

     

    Alice and Shane were there and they had brought along a new friend named Dana, Bette and Tina thought she was very nice. She fit in good with the group.

     

    Everything was a huge success.  Tina had been complimented all evening on the food.  A lot of people had asked for her card to book parties.

     

    The evening was winding down.  Tina, Allison and David were cleaning up.  After making sure everything was done Tina went to look for Bette.

     

    Bette saw her across the room and started walking towards her.  Tina smiled as Bette approached and then whispered in her ear.

     

    Bette: “I love you T, and you look fantastic in that dress.”

    Tina:  “I love you too baby and I’m so proud of you.  Tonight was so great.  Everyone loves the gallery.”

    Bette:  “And everyone loved the food.  Thank you, you did a wonderful job.”

     

    Tina:  “Wellhow about I go on home and after you get the rest of these people out of here, you come over and we’ll celebrate our success together.”

    Bette:  “That’s the best offer I’ve had tonight.”

    Tina:  “It better be the only offer you’ve had tonight”

    Bette:  “Well there was that one redhead that..”

    Tina cut her off in mid sentence.

    Tina:  “Not funny!  Besides you won’t get any better than this.”  Tina pulled her in and kissed her hard.

    Bette:  “Damn, you’re right, that was definitely the best I’ve had.”

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    1. That was great for the first time. I like how you blended in the feelings and their emotions. That’s real. For a first time as well I like the way you did your story over all. Keep it up gold. I like your stories. They are filled with so much love, affection, lust, determination, and promise. Please post soon

    4. Very nice. Always love how the first time Bette is so careful with T. I’m sure Tina picked it up very quickly, course look who her teacher is. Love this story, so sweet and sensitive.

    12. Hey goldfish WHOA! That was so Hot WooHoo! LOL! very Good I think I swallow a gold Fish LOL! I’m just kidding Hey It’s Awesome Story I Love it Please post soon.

    14. HOLY CANNOLLI!! Is that right – I don’t even know how to spell…this chapter has my brain spinning! LOVED it, goldfish – so realistic, so much true love portrayed, so incredible…and we have techgal singing away to boot! (ENCORE) I love this story, and I love to eat goldfish, and I hope you post soon!

    16. GOLDIE… hmmm very nice… i love bette the teacher and i’m also sure tina the student passed with flying colors… i hope you let us read her report card… beautiful..just beautiful… post soon

    18. Great job Gold. You made Bette & Tina’s first time hot, sexy, and loving. You conveyed their emotions and reactions beautifully. Wonderful job Gold. The first time will definitely be memorable for Tina and Bette. Please do continue.

    19. Love, let me know, let me know
      Love, let me know, let me know, let me know…

      I had to switch over to the Isley Brothers…

      This is so nice, so loving, so tender, so sweet…

      Thanks, Goldfish!

    23. Lovely as a ray of sun
      That touches me when the mornin’ comes
      Feels good to me yeah
      My love and me

      Smoother than a gentle breeze
      Flowin’ through my mind with ease
      Soft as can be
      When you’re lovin’ me
      When you’re lovin’ me

      I HAD to read it again.

      Go on, Isley Brothers.
      Go on, Goldfish! You get the gold star for today!
      I loved the many iterations of ‘love’coming from them both. Their expressions of love made it so much more erotic.

      Thanks!

    24. Ah, Goldfish, you truly are a delightful, exquisite romantic heart ! I love that so much…

      Through the sweet and tender love affair between an arts passionate and a master in cook, here you served us such a marvellous “first time”, as beautiful as a full-of-emotions painting and as delicious as the most carefully prepared menu possible…
      God, one never could dream about a most ideal first time than the one you just depicted with a very sensitive pencil of love, through the so lightful palette of feelings and sensations !
      That’s how I fully appreciate those famous and too often gratuitous NC-17 parts : not forgetting to do them as lovemakings, in the deepest sense of the word. Not only desire, lust and moans, but also true love, tenderness and hearts beats : a true beautiful love also has its own purely emotional – and not only physical – climaxes !

      Bravo, Goldfish, amazing work ! Thank you !

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