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In the Beginning……………Chapter 13……………….A Night to Remember
Tina: “Yes baby, you did it. It was perfect.”
Bette: “By the way you looked beautiful tonight, I was so proud to have you as my date.”
She leaned in and kissed Tina.
Tina: “I’m sorry I didn’t wait till you got here to change, I just wanted to get comfy.”
Bette: “No it’s fine, I’m glad you did. And you still look beautiful.”
Tina kissed Bette again. They broke the kiss and finished their glass of champagne.
Tina: “Baby can we talk?”
Bette: “Sure T, what’s wrong?”
Tina: “Nothing’s wrong, I just want you to know how much I love you.”
Bette: “I love you too T.”
Tina stood up and held out her hand to Bette. Bette took it and stood.
Tina: “Come with me.”
Tina led them to the bedroom. Bette saw the candles all lit. Then she heard the music in the back ground. She looked at Tina with a question in her eyes.
Tina: “Bette it’s time.”
Bette: “Time? Time for what T?”
Tina: “It’s our time, time for us to make love.”
Bette: “Are you saying?”
Tina took off the robe and let it fall to the floor. Bette stood mesmerized at the vision in front of her.
Tina: “I’m ready for us to love each other. I want you to make love to me.”
Bette took a step towards her.
Bette: “T, are you sure?”
Tina: “I’ve never been more sure of anything in my life.”
Bette held Tina’s face in her hands. She gently kissed her while looking in her eyes.
Bette: “I love you Tina.”
Bette held her close. They were kissing slowly.
Tina started taking off Bette’s jacket and blouse. Bette laid Tina down on the bed. She took off her own slacks and panties as she lay down beside Tina. She kept kissing her as her hands moved up and down Tina’s sides. The kisses she was placing were moving down Tina’s neck now to her collar bone.
Bette was caressing Tina’s ***** thru the thin fabric; she reached under it then and pulled it up over Tina’s head. Her mouth was placing a trail of kisses between Tina’s *****. As she kneaded one breast with her hand, her mouth took in the other. Tina gasped. Bette’s tongue circled her nipple.
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(43 votes, average: 3.86 out of 5)
That was great for the first time. I like how you blended in the feelings and their emotions. That’s real. For a first time as well I like the way you did your story over all. Keep it up gold. I like your stories. They are filled with so much love, affection, lust, determination, and promise. Please post soon
Very nice gold….very nice!!
Alright then!!!!! The Goldfish gets down with the NC-17! I can’t wait!
I’ll be right back after I read this chapter…
Very nice. Always love how the first time Bette is so careful with T. I’m sure Tina picked it up very quickly, course look who her teacher is. Love this story, so sweet and sensitive.
nicely done- so much so that you should do it much more often, write it that is…
WOW..just WOW..for fisrt time was really nice now bring it on Bettes payback time i want see how fast learn Tina is..lol..amazing fucking HOT!!!
Love and lust great combo!!!!!!!!! post soon
Nice, very nice indeed!!!!
Hot, Hot super hot!!!
gold..that was wonderful! You made us feel how much they love each other..I can’t wait for the next chapter..soon I hope
Wow that’s hot and beautiful, love it. Post soon, thanks!
Hey goldfish WHOA! That was so Hot WooHoo! LOL! very Good I think I swallow a gold Fish LOL! I’m just kidding Hey It’s Awesome Story I Love it Please post soon.
That was great for a first time i read it twice!!!
HOLY CANNOLLI!! Is that right – I don’t even know how to spell…this chapter has my brain spinning! LOVED it, goldfish – so realistic, so much true love portrayed, so incredible…and we have techgal singing away to boot! (ENCORE) I love this story, and I love to eat goldfish, and I hope you post soon!
All the anticipation was definitely worth it. You did a great job! Kiitos! I have to say I’m blushing a little bit myself =)
GOLDIE… hmmm very nice… i love bette the teacher and i’m also sure tina the student passed with flying colors… i hope you let us read her report card… beautiful..just beautiful… post soon
Good stuff goldfish. Now let’s see what Tina does for Bette. Please post soon.
Great job Gold. You made Bette & Tina’s first time hot, sexy, and loving. You conveyed their emotions and reactions beautifully. Wonderful job Gold. The first time will definitely be memorable for Tina and Bette. Please do continue.
Love, let me know, let me know
Love, let me know, let me know, let me know…
I had to switch over to the Isley Brothers…
This is so nice, so loving, so tender, so sweet…
Thanks, Goldfish!
I’m gonna queue up ‘Sexual Healing’ on the I-Tunes before I read:
Baaaby, I’m hot just like an oven…
Yeah!!!
K
Excellent chapter, loved the emotions with the sex. Very sexy and hot. Love it.
so loving and hot!
Lovely as a ray of sun
That touches me when the mornin’ comes
Feels good to me yeah
My love and me
Smoother than a gentle breeze
Flowin’ through my mind with ease
Soft as can be
When you’re lovin’ me
When you’re lovin’ me
I HAD to read it again.
Go on, Isley Brothers.
Go on, Goldfish! You get the gold star for today!
I loved the many iterations of ‘love’coming from them both. Their expressions of love made it so much more erotic.
Thanks!
Ah, Goldfish, you truly are a delightful, exquisite romantic heart ! I love that so much…
Through the sweet and tender love affair between an arts passionate and a master in cook, here you served us such a marvellous “first time”, as beautiful as a full-of-emotions painting and as delicious as the most carefully prepared menu possible…
God, one never could dream about a most ideal first time than the one you just depicted with a very sensitive pencil of love, through the so lightful palette of feelings and sensations !
That’s how I fully appreciate those famous and too often gratuitous NC-17 parts : not forgetting to do them as lovemakings, in the deepest sense of the word. Not only desire, lust and moans, but also true love, tenderness and hearts beats : a true beautiful love also has its own purely emotional – and not only physical – climaxes !
Bravo, Goldfish, amazing work ! Thank you !
Nicely don! Great chapter looking forward to more.
OMG Goldie, this was an amazingly beautiful first time. Loved it. Just be sure to keep them coming!
*Wipes sweat off brow* Sheesh, definitely no disappointments here, goldie!!
very sexy and very sweet … thank you – very dam good !