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    In Too Deep Ch. 2

    Story written on January 18, 2007 by Akiracolorblind.
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    “I will kill you if you speak out of turn again. Do you want to keep your feeble life?”

     

    “What about my wife?”

     

    “Oh that—,” Shane rubbed her chin. “The bitch is staying with me. I can get her when I’m done with her.”

     

    Jenny laughed nastily. “Your lil’ piece of pussy is gone.” She pushed Paul out of Shane’s sight.

     

    ****

                    Carmen and Helena pulled into an empty parking lot as Lt. Porter and Dt. Fairbanks waited outside the vehicle. Carmen stopped the car, and Helena and her got out.

     

    “So what’s the plan?” Carmen leaned against the car.

     

    “Here’s your new backgrounds, but you’ll keep your names because they don’t know you work for us.” Dana handed them the folders. They looked them over, and Bette stepped in.

     

    “You’re meeting Shane at the Roxy tonight at ten. Don’t be late and keep your cool. Don’t fuck this up what so ever. Understood?” They both nodded. 

     

    “What do we do when we find the evidence?” Dana looked at Carmen.

     

    “You get a hold of us and tell us—and no one else. When we think that the evidence is good enough to bust McCutcheon for these three murders, we’ll tell you when to pull out.”

     

    “All right ladies, good luck.” Dana and Bette got back into the vehicle and pulled off. Carmen looked over her folder and sighed.

     

    “I don’t think I can do this Peabody.”

     

    “Carmen, don’t you do this to me. You’re going to do this damn it. You’re my partner, and I’m going to be there for you. Don’t let me down.” Carmen looked at Helena’s pleading face and sighed.

    “All right, I’m going to do this.”

     

    “All right, lets get ready.”

     

    ****

                    Shane took a drink of her beer and took a drag of her cigarette as she sat in the VIP area at the Roxy. Jenny grabbed a bottle of Christal and took a drink. Shane smiled at her best friend and partner as she partied. Alice took a look around and took a drink of her Cosmo. Shane pulled Pamela close to her and nibbled on her neck. Pamela squirmed at Shane’s touch, and Shane grabbed Pamela by her throat.

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    1. LOL is it just me or does Jenny seem 100% in character here heehee. Aww way to go ruin my lovely mental image of Bette and Dana, however no one rocks a power suit like Bette. I’m hoping for a highly illegal danish hookup though ;)

    2. Another great installment you have ACB :). The relationship that you have with Shane and Carmen in this fic is really great and I agree with TMAJO that Shane’s attitude in this fic is very similar to Tony Montana (one of the greatest characters in movie history) I look foward to your next installment.

    4. I cannot stop grinning. I love the plot so far. And Jenny soooo fits the part of the paranoid (though instinctively accurate) killer-sidekick. LMAO. And Shane’s coolness reminds me of Tony Montana from Scarface (I liked how she introduced Pamela to all her 10 lil’ friends…or was it just one?) LMAO. I love it! Alice is hilarious….”They’re legit”..huhuh with that long rap sheet. XD Oh yea, I’m digging this story. PPS! Shane seems very eager to mix business with pleasure…without Jenny to keep her in killer-mode check…things could get nasty :p I love how Alice ‘talks business’ :snicker: I tell ya, I’m still grinning…

    5. yo akira! im sooo loving ur fic right now.. its freakin awesome!! Shane is a total badass/ruthless/no-mercy supa gangsta, i really liker her and i can rellly see jenny as the psychotic sidekick.. keep it up! PPS!!

    6. awesome awesome awesome – shall i say it again Awesome. :O)Its a great plot and the writing, makes you feel like you’ve actually watched it on tv. great stuff can not wait to read more.

    7. Well, well, well ACB, This is a fabulous departure from most of the stories on this site. And it is all the better for that. All the twisted and wicked actions of SHane and her crew will hopefully be paid back in full. Wonder if this Shane and Carmen will have the same sexual attraction as before? Will Helena and Alice have some fun or will Dana be all over that possibility? Will there be a bad gal Tina to balance the good cop Bette? You just have to answer some of these question. Puh-lease… Lvoing it as always. Mucho grats, Your Loyal Fan.

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