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    In Too Deep Ch. 2

     

    “I’m Carmen Morales, and this is my partner Helena Peabody. We run a major load of drugs back in Miami, basically we own that fuckin’ town.” Shane smiled and nodded. “We’ve heard of you through some people, and we want in on your operation.”

     

    “How do I know you two are good for it? How can I trust you?”

     

    “As my father told me—don’t trust anybody.”

     

    Shane looked at Carmen and smiled. “I like that, you can’t trust anybody in this business.” She leaned over to Alice and whispered something in her ear. Alice nodded and walked off. “Do you ladies want any drinks?”

     

    “I’ll have a beer.”

     

    “I’ll have one too.” Helena chimed in. Shane whistled for the bartender, and she walked over. Shane told her two beers and stuffed some money in her bra. The bartender smiled and walked off.

     

    “So tell me something about your business.”

     

    “My father ran the business back in the eighties, and I took over when he died.” Carmen entwined her fingers and looked at Shane. “Helena came in later to help with the money and shipments. We run cocaine, meth, acid, ecstasy, you name it—we got it.”

     

    “Why did you come out here to Los Angeles?”

     

    “We wanted to venture off and make partners in the major cities.” Shane nodded at Helena. The bartender came back with the beers. She handed them to Carmen and Helena, and they took a drink. Shane’s phone rang, and she answered it.

     

    “Talk to me,” Shane looked at the two women.

     

    “Hey, they’re both clean.” Shane nodded. “Carmen de la Pica Morales—listen to this, she was the daughter of the infamous Jose de la Pica Morales. He was a big drug lord in Miami, but he was killed in a drug bust. Miss Morales has been busted for battery with a concealed weapon, theft, assaults and drugs, she went to jail for a couple of years. She took over her father’s business when she got out.” Shane continued to stare at the two women as they enjoyed their beers. “Helena Peabody—she’s the daughter of Peggy Peabody.”

     

    “Who’s she?”

     

    “She’s a fuckin’ bitch—I’ve met her before. Helena here is from a rich British family, but she isn’t a saint. She’s been arrested for battery, burglary and drugs. She spent three years in jail and after, she went under Miss Morales’ wing as her partner. You should keep them, they’re legit.”

     

    “All right,” Shane hung up the phone. She smiled at the two women. “We’re in business ladies.” She clapped her hands together. “Meet me at 1640 St. Lawrence Street at eleven o’clock. Don’t be late.” Shane got up and walked away. As Shane walked away, she kept her eyes on Carmen, and Carmen saw her. Shane winked at Carmen, and Carmen looked away. Helena got closer to Carmen and sighed.

     

    “We’re in,” Carmen wiped the sweat from her forehead.

     

    “That was too easy.” Jenny watched the two women as they got up. She walked up to Shane as they walked out of the club.

     

    “I don’t trust them Shane.”

     

    Shane shrugged. “Alice checked them out too—they’re legit.” She put a cigarette to her mouth and lit it.

     

    “I don’t know what it is, but I have a funny feeling about them.”

     

    Shane exhaled. “If it makes you feel any better, keep an eye on ‘em all right.” They both climbed into the back of the Denali and pulled away from the club.  

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    Comments

    1. LOL is it just me or does Jenny seem 100% in character here heehee. Aww way to go ruin my lovely mental image of Bette and Dana, however no one rocks a power suit like Bette. I’m hoping for a highly illegal danish hookup though ;)

    2. Another great installment you have ACB :). The relationship that you have with Shane and Carmen in this fic is really great and I agree with TMAJO that Shane’s attitude in this fic is very similar to Tony Montana (one of the greatest characters in movie history) I look foward to your next installment.

    3. I cannot stop grinning. I love the plot so far. And Jenny soooo fits the part of the paranoid (though instinctively accurate) killer-sidekick. LMAO. And Shane’s coolness reminds me of Tony Montana from Scarface (I liked how she introduced Pamela to all her 10 lil’ friends…or was it just one?) LMAO. I love it! Alice is hilarious….”They’re legit”..huhuh with that long rap sheet. XD Oh yea, I’m digging this story. PPS! Shane seems very eager to mix business with pleasure…without Jenny to keep her in killer-mode check…things could get nasty :p I love how Alice ‘talks business’ :snicker: I tell ya, I’m still grinning…

    4. yo akira! im sooo loving ur fic right now.. its freakin awesome!! Shane is a total badass/ruthless/no-mercy supa gangsta, i really liker her and i can rellly see jenny as the psychotic sidekick.. keep it up! PPS!!

    5. awesome awesome awesome – shall i say it again Awesome. :O)Its a great plot and the writing, makes you feel like you’ve actually watched it on tv. great stuff can not wait to read more.

    6. Well, well, well ACB, This is a fabulous departure from most of the stories on this site. And it is all the better for that. All the twisted and wicked actions of SHane and her crew will hopefully be paid back in full. Wonder if this Shane and Carmen will have the same sexual attraction as before? Will Helena and Alice have some fun or will Dana be all over that possibility? Will there be a bad gal Tina to balance the good cop Bette? You just have to answer some of these question. Puh-lease… Lvoing it as always. Mucho grats, Your Loyal Fan.

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