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    In Too Deep Ch. 3

    Story written on January 21, 2007 by Akiracolorblind.
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    Shane snapped her fingers, and Jenny appeared. “Jenny–she doesn’t think I’m professional.”

     

    “Ahh!” Carmen cried out as Shane tugged and pulled on her nipple. Shane pulled away from Carmen’s breast and stroked her lips. Shane smiled up at Carmen.

     

    “You’re fuckin’ wet—stupid bitch.” She shoved her two fingers inside of Carmen, and Carmen grunted. Shane thrust her fingers inside of Carmen’s pussy and violently rubbed her bud with her thumb. “You’re going to enjoy every fuckin’ second.” Carmen covered her chest with her arms as she laid there with tears streaming down her face. Shane continued to pump her fingers in and out of Carmen’s slippery hole. She stopped and pulled her fingers out. She kneeled on the bed and pulled Carmen by her hips. Shane spread Carmen’s legs and positioned herself between her legs. She slipped her rubber dick from the inside of her jeans. She stared down into Carmen’s eyes as she shoved the dick inside of Carmen. Carmen screamed as Shane violently thrust in and out of her.

     

    “Stop!” Shane didn’t listen and continued to fuck Carmen. She leaned forward and kissed her roughly. Carmen moaned against Shane’s lips, and Shane pulled away.

     

    “You fuckin’ like it.” Carmen looked away from Shane and closed her eyes. Shane pumped in and out faster and harder. She held herself up with her arms and her breathing became ragged. She bit her bottom lip as she fucked Carmen in her bed. The headboard was smacking the wall, and Carmen cried quietly as Shane fucked her. Carmen covered her face as she felt her climax coming. Her body shook under Shane, and Shane dropped on top of her. Shane continued to pump in and out of her and finally pulled out. She got up and put her dick back into her jeans. She buttoned them up and grabbed her shirt. Carmen rolled over and began to cry frenziedly. Shane looked down at her and felt something hit her in her heart. She felt ashamed for what she just did to Carmen and didn’t know why. She tried to shake the feeling away, but it was stuck there. She grabbed her pack of cigarettes and walked towards her balcony. She opened up the doors and took a step outside.

     

     

     

     

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    1. Damn this is bad. Poor Carmen, Shane is crazy bitch. Helena better careful or Jenny ganna kill her. Oh where is Tina, just wondering why she not in this story. Ok post soon please, thanks!

    2. I just caught up with this story and, even though I read 3 chapters in a row, I’m already jonesin’ for another update. I have one question, though. Are Helena and Carmen supposed to be working WITH Shane or FOR Shane? At first I thought they’d be working with Shane, since they own Miami (or so they claim) and working for someone else would be a big step down for them. But it looks like Helena and Carmen are just Shane’s little bitches. I understand that they would have to prove their loyalty and such, but Shane treats them like dirt, especially Carmen, and they take it. They don’t really command the respect of two women who run a city. Well, that’s the only question I had. Other than that, the story is intriguing (I’m hooked). As far as the rape scene. . . umm. . . I just kept thinking of Carmen crying while this was all happening to her. And how fucked up it is for her. But Jenny is awesome as a total psycho. Alice’s “I don’t mix pleasure with business” motto is cool; she’s fricken cool (probably one of the more sane members of the family). Great work. I’m looking forward to the next update.

    3. Okay I will admit ‘guiltily’ that this post was fucking hot. But I think it’s too early for Shane to start feeling guilty even though she just :raped: Carmen. Perhaps after a couple of days…then the guilt can set in. After all, Shane is psychotic ~eg~. I love Alice in this. And leave it to Helena to be so forward. She’ll get her fingers chopped off if she’s not careful. Jenny rocks like crazy…I love it. But back to Shane…should Carmen be in her bed this soon? Well,…can’t change that now except maybe turn it into a dream :p But still, I’m looking forward to more of this story and this update was hot as hell. PPS! Ah…poor Pam and Paul. muhahahahaha!!!….in light of the ‘evil’ of course.

    4. wow wow wow! what a smashing chapter ACB!! uhm yeah… that whole ‘rape’ scene was a bit full on but pretty… hot… :S anyway , i love alice and jenny!! jeny is just well… u know, fucking crazy and i love it!!… and alice is pretty damn cool too.. but maybe she needs more scenes??… pretty please?? hehe.. fantastic work!! PPS!!

    5. I’m still loving our evil trio! I agree Alice needs more screen time and so does Bette and Dana however this is so original and I think you’re doing an awesome job so far. PPS

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