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In Transition 12
Well not exactlyCome on. Before they even took a step, Wait, Shane looked at MJ, close your eyes first. At MJs skeptical look, Its a surprise. Trust me.
Reluctantly, she closed her eyes. Shane took her hand and steered her toward the elevator. MJ jumped when the elevator dinged and the door slid open.
Slowly nowthere are a few steps.
Shane hurriedly opened the door and walked MJ through. All right stand right here for a sec. I will be right back. She hurriedly went and plugged in the lights. Shane looked around the roof, a last minute inspection. She took a deep breath before turning to MJ. You can look now.
MJ slowly opened her eyes and gasped in wonder. A canopy of sparkling lights, thousands it seemed, lighted the roof and beyond was the picturesque background of the city. She slowly turned, couldnt believe her eyes. When her gaze landed on Shane, she ran toward her. Thank you, she whispered against her cheek. Its so beautiful.
Shane held MJs face in her hand, brushing back her hair lovingly. I wanted to do something special for you.
You did.
Shane looked down at the ground self-consciously. Uh, I have to shut the lights off soon or the neighbors will call the cops or something.
MJ laughed. Thats okay because I will always have a picture of it in my head.
She watched as Shane pulled the plug, bathing the rooftop in intimate shadows once more except for the candlelit area where Shane has prepared for them.
A large blanket covered the ground. The plates were set along with a pair of glasses. MJ sat down and took a sip. Sparkling cider?
Judith helped a little and well she wouldnt give me champagne so next best thing.
MJ laughed. Its perfect.
Shane took an arrayed of finger food out of the basket and served MJ. My favorite.
I know. Shane winked at her.
They finished eating quickly. Shane licked her finger in obvious satisfaction. All the planning and nervousness had made her hungry.
Do you have any napkin?
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Does Aly have anything to do with Shane. MJ how could she let anyone Kiss her after Shane? You are really driving us mad. Make my heart skip a beat,(I had a EKG today) so know its just your writing, thanks
My computer crashed for about a week, and I wasent able to read youre chapters, but now I have read them and I think this story has turned out to be one of the best in the fan fiction arcive. I really hope you get an award cause you shure deserve it! Really really great mrave. Please keep the chapters coming:) Thanks.
IT helped reading that again ^__^ Where the hell did ALy come from, and did she have something to do with Shane’s disappearance??? Thanks for updating!!
DAMN!I HAD YOU BLUSHING? Well, that was nothing on state you have me in. Apart from the fact that I can’t breathe, the windows are all fogged up and all. Ok, I can’t breathe because of the flu mainly, but I seemed to be doing ok, before I read this, so you have to take some of the responsibilty too. This was a GREAT chapter, and I look forward to the next. So glad Shane and MJ got together.
Where is Shane? You’re driving us mad with this perspective thing… Oh… seen Mulholland Drive… That’s one funky movie… I got most of it except for one thing… Can anyone tell me who the Bob Marley lookalike was?