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    In Transition 12

    Story written on February 9, 2005 by mrave.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=52008
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    Fogging up the night

    They moved closer to one another, lips seeking its mate. Shane touched her lips against MJs and it was like coming home. She sank into that kiss, giving up herself into that kiss, and MJ responded in the same manner. Tongue entered, teased. MJ whimpered impatiently at Shane, wanting more. She smiled and finally allowed her tongue to come into full contact with MJs. One caressing each other, entering into the dance of life, a duel of passion.

    When the desperate need for oxygen finally overwhelmed, they break apart. Their breath fogged up the chilled night air. Its raining.

    MJ smiled, Yeah, seems like it.

    My clothes are getting wet.

    Mine too. Maybe we should take them off. MJ pulled Shanes shirt off of her and then her before she loose her courage.

    Shane groaned deep in her throat and kissed MJ passionately. Lie back. I want to look at you.

    The light rain has slowed down into a drizzle, forming beads of water on her perfect skin. Shane watched as a drop slowly made it way down between the valley of her breast. She leaned down and with her tongue tracing the path of that raindrop trying to catch up.

    The contrast of pure heat against the cool rain was a shock to MJs system, sending it on a tailspin. She gasped as Shane swirled her tongue around her belly button.

    Her hand traveled downward twining itself into that patch of silk. Tugging playfully while MJ squirmed in heat. It was long moments more before her lips moved further down to join her hand, flicking her tongue against that swollen ***** causing MJ to gasp in shock.

    MJ buried her hands into Shanes hair, half pushing her away not sure if she could withstand the intense sensations, while keeping her there, not wanting it to ever stop.

    Shane used her teeth to scrape over the hard nub and then her tongue to soothe. She ran her tongue over MJs opening up to her *****, sucking on it gently, effectively sending MJ over the edge.

    She looked up at MJs face, wet from the rain. The city lights created a translucent glow, a glistening of skin. You are so beautiful.

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    Comments

    1. Does Aly have anything to do with Shane. MJ how could she let anyone Kiss her after Shane? You are really driving us mad. Make my heart skip a beat,(I had a EKG today) so know its just your writing, thanks

    2. My computer crashed for about a week, and I wasent able to read youre chapters, but now I have read them and I think this story has turned out to be one of the best in the fan fiction arcive. I really hope you get an award cause you shure deserve it! Really really great mrave. Please keep the chapters coming:) Thanks.

    3. IT helped reading that again ^__^ Where the hell did ALy come from, and did she have something to do with Shane’s disappearance??? Thanks for updating!!

    4. DAMN!I HAD YOU BLUSHING? Well, that was nothing on state you have me in. Apart from the fact that I can’t breathe, the windows are all fogged up and all. Ok, I can’t breathe because of the flu mainly, but I seemed to be doing ok, before I read this, so you have to take some of the responsibilty too. This was a GREAT chapter, and I look forward to the next. So glad Shane and MJ got together.

    5. Where is Shane? You’re driving us mad with this perspective thing… Oh… seen Mulholland Drive… That’s one funky movie… I got most of it except for one thing… Can anyone tell me who the Bob Marley lookalike was?

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