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Insight. Ch7
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Alice and Bette chuckled,
“No …!” Shane stressed, returning their laughter with a menacing stare, “Jeez … you fuck a handful of women and suddenly that’s all you’re about!”
“A handful!!!” Bette splurted her coffee, she leant across the table and pulled Shane’s hands out from inside her sleeves, “how fucking big are your hands?”
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“I’m beginning to think you like my front doorstep more than you like me,” Bette stated, finding Helena sitting there in the sunshine smoking a cigarette upon her return.
“Not true,” Helena replied, as Bette approached through the gate, “I just like it better than my own, yours gets the sun,”
Bette shook her head, resisting the urge to be angry about where she’d been. Recognising that it just wasn’t in Helena’s nature to carry over her emotions from one day to the next, they went from platonic to BFF to passionate lovers and then back to platonic again, all in the matter of a week. It was starting to mess about with her confidence.
“Are you coming in then?” Bette asked, turning the key in the latch,
Helena shrugged, “Okay,”
Once inside Helena fixed herself a drink and went across to the patio doors, peering out through the glass and staring hauntingly back at her own apartment, sipping intermittently on her vodka lime as if it replaced the cigarette she just held in her hand moments before.
“It looks different from over here,” she muttered, not really caring if Bette happened to be listening or not,
Bette sat behind her on the couch, sensing a change in Helena’s vibrance. She wore her shades again, even indoors, which Bette presumed was meant to make her harder to read, not that that in itself had ever been a problem.
“Who’s Tina Kennard?” Bette asked, swilling the vodka in her own glass. It tasted raw like her words, and a little acerbic to swallow.
Helena’s shoulders tensed at the mere mention of her name and she turned, facing Bette’s relaxed composure.
“How do you know her name?”
“She was at The Planet today,” Bette replied, wondering how come she was suddenly the one in the spotlight, “talking to my friend Marina,”
“Marina Ferrer?” Helena shot back quickly, the rest of her vodka lime disappearing rapidly down her throat. She walked to the kitchen to fix herself another one, desperately avoiding Bette’s response.
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Ahhhgggg…Helena’s not the only one that won’t give straight answers. Well, now we at least know how Marina fits into the picture. Something happened with Evie and Helena feels in some way responsible. Oh well, I’ll have to wait until tomorrow for another piece of the puzzle!
Totally enjoying your story. You’ve got me completely intrigued.
Thank you for the lovely present, I’m touched and honored. You know, I like BettyV, but she’s gonna have to wait for her own birthday, I ain’t sharing! The flavor of this thing is far less A. Spelling than that of a couple of sinister romances that starred Barbara Stanwyck: Double Indemnity and The Strange Love of Martha Ivers. Both of them great films. I’m enjoying this.
ok, Ms. Sofasitte the way I figure it, it’s almost morning in your part of the world, and in my mind that means were close to getting another installment of this story, week-end and all maybe two, well anyway, Ms jigsaw I NEED MORE. Thank you. Md
oooooooh, i can’t wait to see you! i’m going to go outside and run around the block fifty times to burn off this crazy energy which is caused when i know that i’m going to see you soon. ok, i’m going to re-read this story…it really is good, and i like that things are unfolding in their own good time. brilliant love, seriously!
this chapter has left me more intrigued than ever. PPS!!
Mmm like a refreshing beverage this story works well on a Friday night.
(a referral may be needed)…Geezus, couch…you’re killing me here! I’ve had a really really really long and horrible day…so tired…and now drinking wine…and I’ve read this chapter like three times…And you’re effing killing me! YOU AREN’T ANSWERING ANY QUESTIONS!!!! You are stimulating more!! Dagnabit! You’re evil…severely evil! :) (But I love it…despite the fact that it makes me feel excruciatingly stupid)…Gawwwwwwwwwd! Did Tina have a fling with Hel…and Evie kill herself?…or…did…Uh…What’s that number of that shrink? And I don’t wanna see Dr. Kennard…she’s scaring me! Evil! Pure, unadulterated evil, you are! :) Keep it coming…UMMMMM…not that I like evil…me not like that…but…oh…couch…you just really better give me some answers soon…puhleeze!! (And tanks to you for posting daily…I’m always happily surprised that you do…quite an accomplishment!) :) :) :) You are really really frustrating me! pfffffffffft :P :)
Once again I just caught up.I am utterly perplexed how Tina fits into the story. Umm isn’t against ethics to counsel somebody you had a prior relationship with no matter what kind.
Intrigue is an understatement here. Love your writing. look4ward to more.
Riddle me this…riddle me that…you sure do weave a tangled web.
hhhhhhmm mysterious, plz post soon…love Dr Kennard’s signature fuck me blue heels…this sounds like a tragedy of romeo and juliet proportions…keep bette safe, she sounds so naive…again pps.
ack, what happened to Evangeline, what happened??? This history repeating itself, I hope it’s not cause for serious worry… but whatever happened, it made Helena a chain-smoking recluse and Marina unforgiving. If it repeats itself, I fear for everyone involved… great, sofa, love the story. ta
hooked!!!!! looking forward to the update.
Very, very mysterious story… Just brilliant! When I started to read this chapter I was full of hope to get some answers to all those questions. And you know what? Now I have even more questions than I had before! You could throw in some answers every now and then, before we’re going to die from to much suspense! :-D And yes, you make my day every day you post ;-) Keep up the good work. More and PPS!
i love this storrrry…why didn’t my comment last night stick? i commented. grrr…anyway, i think this is sheer brilliant brilliance! i want to read more and i’ll wait patiently for it. reading this while watching Adaptation is a jolly good and mind bending thing to do. xoxox baby *smile*