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Insight. Ch8
“What are you going to do with that?” Helena asked, her voice slightly strained with an element of tension.
“Ssh … relax,” Bette assured, as she slid the scarf out from Helena’s hair. She took Helena’s hands and put them up behind her head, tying them at the wrists with the scarf.
“Bette …” Helena’s voice displayed her distrust.
“I’m just showing you that I’m not afraid,” Bette replied, continuing to tie her hands tightly.
She stepped away from the sofa and wandered through to the kitchen, returning with a glass in hand,
“Sober isn’t the same as Scotch …” Bette stated, resuming her position on Helena’s lap. She sat with her legs either side and took a sip, leaning in to kiss Helena as the taste of the finest single malt mingled between their lips.
Helena moaned, and for the first time Bette felt her relaxing into it. She put down the glass on the cabinet behind and moved her hands to Helena’s pants, slowly unfastening.
Helena raised her hips and leant back, letting Bette pull them from her, before she sat back down unabashed, totally comfortable with her nakedness.
“You’re really beautiful,” Bette exhaled, she knelt before Helena on the floor and began kissing her inner thighs, enjoying the sounds of Helena moaning and writhing, her arms restricted which stopped her from touching Bette back.
“Please …” Helena pleaded, “I need you …”
She opened her legs and silently begged Bette with her eyes, admitting right there and then that Bette was totally the one in control, and that she could handle that.
Bette saw it, wasting no time in touching Helena. She slid one hand between her thighs, seeing they were headed towards a quick fuck.
Helena whimpered, her mouth half open as Bette’s fingers teased her gently, running through wet warmth and teasing Helena’s clit, tempting, because she came close to starting something properly, then tantalizingly pulled away again.
“Argh …!” Helena cried out in frustration, staring at Bette imploringly, her sobriety making it harder to hold herself back as her buzz from before started to wear off.
Bette took the hint and returned to her side, straddling one leg as she kissed Helena ferociously, her tongue matching the pace of her fingers inside. Helena struggled to kiss her back, the sensations of Bette’s fingers drumming against her pushing her harder and faster towards the edge.
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(29 votes, average: 3.83 out of 5)
Dr. Kennard’s not an enforcer for the Church of Scientology or anything like that, is she? She’s beginning to creep me out. Or maybe she’s just an agent, an extension of Peggy’s long reach. God, this is getting noirier and noirier.
Do we get to meet Evangeline, as a ghost, flashback or at the grave??? After funnyone’s comment, I’m envisioning Tina as an enforcer in black leather, boots and a riding crop in hand. Tell me your fears, *smack*. LOL, Okay, maybe I should have had one less frozen alcoholic beverage today.
Still haven’t gotten my work done but couldn’t resist this story. now why can’t Helena spend the night? Who is Evangelina
Weird, wonderful and wild.
this story reminds me of a song by blue rodeo…it’s not so much film noir, this song, as it is somehow a reflection of a relationship which itself is a reflection of an introspective landscape..the song is called 5 days in May…the part where helena tells bette not to leave her, there’s something very profound about that, though at quick glance it may seem too much too soon, it really isn’t, it fits the story and gives the characters this sort of intensity…hmmm…anyhoo, i like:) the sex scene made such perfect perfect sense and it was so cosmically and physically yummy. more more? more? mwah mwah mwah
This story is great. Was Helena partying with Evangeline and gave her the drugs that she overdosed on? She’s now all screwed up and feels responsible for Evangeline’s death. Tina being Evangeline’s ex was obvious effected and Marina blames Helena for her sister’s death and Tina for not looking out for her.
Ok I caved just now to say that this is one story here I totally buy Bette and Helena.Sofa keep the twists coming.
how the plot thickens…you gotta love google!!
O.K., time for some more guessing. Helena and Evageline are tied through a Hollywood connection. Helena feels responsible in some way for her overdose. Marina blames Helena in some way for her death. Evageline and Tina are tied through their relationship. Now, why if Tina was personally involved is she treating Helena. Oh crap, this is getting to me. I guess I’ll just wait until tomorrow…when at some point I have to start getting some answers to my questions. You have slipped this in under my nose…it is a Belina story!
HOLY SHIT!!!!! Poor Dr Kennard…how come she’s the only one got it together? or has she?
I loved this chapter. There was something really profound between Bette and Helena’s love scene. I can’t wait to find out more about what happened between all of them. More and PPS
very intruiging Sofa, Is that laptop and those three girls going to go crashing through into Bett’s apartment with a ton of questions or are they going to be quite friends in this story? Thank you. Md
I love a good mystery and this certainly fit the bill. Great story! It’s dark, it’s deep and very well written. Oh yeah I almost forgot the sex is good too! Excellent update!!
Great, intriguing, mysterious, suspenseful…and sexy. Love this new fic, you’re doing a great job. Looking forward to more! soon maybe?
Can’t you type any faster, couch? Gawwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwd! I’m just soooo enthralled with this story! Love it love it love it love it love it love it love it… :)
I’m not goin to try to figure it out,going to let you do that for me. thanks