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Insight. Ch8
Bette drew away and started kissing her neck, kissing her breasts and running her tongue deliciously around them. Enjoying the fact that Helena was giving her everything she had, irrespective of the fact her hands were tied fast behind her head.
“Now …” Helena mumbled, nodding hard. Bette intensified her efforts, watching silently as Helena’s face grew tense and focussed, telling her she was close.
Helena raised her arms and slipped them around Bette’s neck, imprisoning her close as she came, crying out loudly,
“Ohhhhhh … Yesssssssss!!!!!”
She lay with her head breathlessly back against the couch, Bette’s head against her chest as they both recovered.
“Don’t ever leave me?” Helena whispered, unable to see Bette’s eyes as she spoke.
Bette answered without thinking, “I won’t …”
~
They lay in bed several hours later, their evening of lovemaking over as Bette watched Helena sleep, recovering from an ever-intensifying run of thrill seeking orgasms.
She ran her hand down the other woman’s spine, hoping not to wake her. They made love over and over again, hoping to erase the chilling words that Helena spoke, pausing only to order Chinese food which Bette paid for in her robe and which, in the end, neither of them really ate. She felt Helena stirring against her hand and smiled, watching as she turned around.
“Stay the night?” Bette whispered, watching her lover wake up,
Helena opened her eyes and stared back at her, knowing that from just one look Bette would know.
“I can’t.”
“Why not?” Bette asked, feeling herself grow petulant and sad, “I want to wake up with you in the morning,”
Helena smiled back at her and smoothed a stray lock of hair from her forehead, “You know why …”
~
“I don’t think she’s coming,” Dana stated, voicing aloud the one thing they were all reluctant to say as The Planet rapidly approached closing time.
Shane nodded, staring at Alice, “Third time this week …”
“I know!” Alice mumbled, as worried for her friend as she was annoyed, “it’s not like Bette,”
All three of them glanced over at Marina; busy tidying up behind the counter, and for a second, one pair of eyes met an entire table looking back at her.
“Google Marina,” said Shane in a hushed voice, as they quickly turned away again. She pushed Alice’s hand towards the lid of her laptop, “Go on … do it!”
Alice tapped away for a few seconds then looked up, “Just stuff to do with The Planet,” she stated, a little disappointed.
Shane took it from her and scrolled down, seeing nothing exciting she refined their search to include Helena and gave it back to Alice, “Look, here’s something,”
Dana stared at them both, frustrated, as Alice read aloud from the LA Times article, “Planet plays host to the stars at the after party premiere of the critically acclaimed ‘Southern States’ …”
“What?” Dana questioned, as they both continued to skim read,
“Planet café bar owner Marina Ferrer opened the doors to her talented younger sister, Evangeline, this week for the premiere of her first major film as director.” It then went on to say, “Southern States is a haunting portrayal of poverty and reclamation in the deep south, adapted from the two times nominated screenplay by Helena Peabody.”
Alice swung it around for Dana to read and sat back, looking to Shane,
“Weird.”
“What’s this?” Dana asked, turning it back again and pointing to the list of related articles at the side,
Alice clicked on it and read, “A bright star goes out in Hollywood. Mourners from stage and screen gathered today at West Hollywood Park to pay tribute to Evangeline Ferrer who died tragically at the weekend from a drug overdose …”
Alice snapped the lid shut and pushed her laptop away, “Holy shit, poor Marina.”
tbc …..
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(29 votes, average: 3.83 out of 5)
Dr. Kennard’s not an enforcer for the Church of Scientology or anything like that, is she? She’s beginning to creep me out. Or maybe she’s just an agent, an extension of Peggy’s long reach. God, this is getting noirier and noirier.
Do we get to meet Evangeline, as a ghost, flashback or at the grave??? After funnyone’s comment, I’m envisioning Tina as an enforcer in black leather, boots and a riding crop in hand. Tell me your fears, *smack*. LOL, Okay, maybe I should have had one less frozen alcoholic beverage today.
Still haven’t gotten my work done but couldn’t resist this story. now why can’t Helena spend the night? Who is Evangelina
Weird, wonderful and wild.
this story reminds me of a song by blue rodeo…it’s not so much film noir, this song, as it is somehow a reflection of a relationship which itself is a reflection of an introspective landscape..the song is called 5 days in May…the part where helena tells bette not to leave her, there’s something very profound about that, though at quick glance it may seem too much too soon, it really isn’t, it fits the story and gives the characters this sort of intensity…hmmm…anyhoo, i like:) the sex scene made such perfect perfect sense and it was so cosmically and physically yummy. more more? more? mwah mwah mwah
This story is great. Was Helena partying with Evangeline and gave her the drugs that she overdosed on? She’s now all screwed up and feels responsible for Evangeline’s death. Tina being Evangeline’s ex was obvious effected and Marina blames Helena for her sister’s death and Tina for not looking out for her.
Ok I caved just now to say that this is one story here I totally buy Bette and Helena.Sofa keep the twists coming.
how the plot thickens…you gotta love google!!
O.K., time for some more guessing. Helena and Evageline are tied through a Hollywood connection. Helena feels responsible in some way for her overdose. Marina blames Helena in some way for her death. Evageline and Tina are tied through their relationship. Now, why if Tina was personally involved is she treating Helena. Oh crap, this is getting to me. I guess I’ll just wait until tomorrow…when at some point I have to start getting some answers to my questions. You have slipped this in under my nose…it is a Belina story!
HOLY SHIT!!!!! Poor Dr Kennard…how come she’s the only one got it together? or has she?
I loved this chapter. There was something really profound between Bette and Helena’s love scene. I can’t wait to find out more about what happened between all of them. More and PPS
very intruiging Sofa, Is that laptop and those three girls going to go crashing through into Bett’s apartment with a ton of questions or are they going to be quite friends in this story? Thank you. Md
I love a good mystery and this certainly fit the bill. Great story! It’s dark, it’s deep and very well written. Oh yeah I almost forgot the sex is good too! Excellent update!!
Great, intriguing, mysterious, suspenseful…and sexy. Love this new fic, you’re doing a great job. Looking forward to more! soon maybe?
Can’t you type any faster, couch? Gawwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwd! I’m just soooo enthralled with this story! Love it love it love it love it love it love it love it… :)
I’m not goin to try to figure it out,going to let you do that for me. thanks