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Instinct part2
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“Yeah well it looked urgent… um Aliss or something like that from LA, she said something about a hospital” When she said does words I knew it was Shane… I just knew something was wrong with her… I don’t know how to respond…
“um Carm?”
“…di-did she tell you what was wrong?”
“No she left her number and she said to tell you to call her as soon as possible” shit shit shit I have to call her
“Gimme the number”
“564-8796”
“Thanks” I call…ring once… rings twice… maybe I shouldn’t
“hello?” oh.. I haven’t heard Alice in a while “Hello?”
“um… A-Alice is-“
“Carmen?”
“um… yeah… its me”
“Oh my god is good to hear your voice, how are you?” its hard to hear her voice… reminds me of so many good memories… witch in 90% involves Shane being there….. no so good
“y-yeah… what do you want Alice… you were calling” cold but… what am I suppose to do? I haven’t heard from them in years
“Yeah… look um… I know its hard but-.. ook its-“
“Alice just!… say it ok”
“Its Shane… she’s in the hospital, she um”
“Alice I don’t care really-“
“Carmen… it’s her heart…. She um… she needs a heart transplant… she’s not looking so good” my heart stopped I cant breath… I cant think… I feel like crying but I cant, so many fucking feelings but I do nothing “Carmen are you there?”
“….yes… Al, w-why are you saying this to me?”
“She want to see you…”
ok I take back what I’ve said before I don’t want her dead she’s not dead, god I feel so fucking bad I though that…. Why should I care? I’m over that, I passed that, I don’t want to go back to that… you know…
“Babe”
shit… why the fuck does she have to call now? Now that my life is finaly going well, that I actually have a life… a carrier…
“Carmen?”
fuck…. She cant die…. She just cant… no, no that’s not gonna happen… she’s… Shan I mean… she’s not the healthiest person, but she is never sick… or vener was sick, now I don’t know.….
“CARMEN?!” Nicky is in front of me trying to get my attention
“Oh sorry babe didn’t saw you there” she looks at me knowing something is off
“Whats wrong you look worried?”
“Nothing” I try to hide it with a smile
“Carm… what’s wrong?”
“nothing… is just”
“Babe is this about the VH1 thing for get it, they are losers and no one watches VH1, they watch MTV and you know how much they like you there”
“babe its not that, its just”
“oh… look if you didn’t feel like it last night it’s ok”
“No Nicky no” I laugh “its not about the sex… its just my ex…. Um my friend called and told me Shane was in the hospital”
“the one who left you in the altar?”
“Yeah, well…. um her heart is failing”
“Oh my god…”
“yes and… she wants to see me”
“oh… well…. baby go… she was a big part of your life you should go help her true this”
“She left me in the altar”
“I know?”
“you think I should go?”
“Yes”
“She left me in the fucking altar and we haven’t speak in 5 years and you think I should go?”
“Yes”
I had a dream… everyone has a dream that they want to fulfill.. and the dream is this… that we finally be happy when we reach our goals. When we get there and if we’re human, we immediately star dreaming of something else… because if this is the dream… then we would liked to wake up…. now please.
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Hey, chicka!! Fan-fuckin-tastic chap!!! I’m lovin’ dis fic to da fullest, babez!!! So, let me get dis scr8t . . . Carmen is now off drugz, married to dis Nicky chick, and livez in NY? Wow, a hell of a lot took place in ha five yearz . . . Okay, and my gurl Shane . . . She now haz lik a heart defect of sumthin? Iz she gonna’ die? I wonda watz gonna’ happen when those two set eyez on each other for da first time in five yurz . . . Now, da’tz gonna’ be interestin!!! Whelp, I’m gonna’ stop rambling now, and i hope u iz bout to updat like now cuz I need my fix :p Like alwayz from me, Baby-gurl, LYLAS :p Stank, da’ one and only, chicka :D Holla at me if ya need anything babez ;-)
Wuz dat a long enough comment? Lol!!
poor shane and carmen. sad to hear carmen erase everything about shane now. plz dont make shane die. carmen will be her magical med.
i have a thought perhaps carmen would donate her heart to shane???
woohaa! Did not see that coming! A new heart?! wuuut? Now u got me hooked! PPS! ^^
i love where this story is going. very well written.
oh gosh.. first carmen doing drugs and all that, now she’s married, to nicky?! gasppp.. and now shane needs a new heart? the story is filled with unexpected twists and turns.. my heart can’t take it.. okay, i’m gonna try and patiently wait for you to update!! don’t leave us hanging for too long!! can’t wait to read the next one!
Heart transplants are hard to come by. Just hope that Carman goes to see Shane. except her as she is. No regreats just friends to friend. thanks