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Intervention – Chpt 18
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“Where’s your Dora plate, Sweetpea? I’ve got your French toast almost finished,” Helena smiled, turning around and giving Angelica a kiss on the cheek.
Bette reached into the cabinet and gave Helena Angelica’s favorite plate.
“Well, looky here, darling. I’ve got your Dora plate. Who is this with her?” Helena playfully asked, holding the plate in front of Angelica to see.
“Dats Swiper and Boots,” Angelica grinned, reaching to help hold the plate on each side with her little hands. She craned her neck to look at Helena.
Bette leaned back against the counter, folding her arms and admiring the interaction.
“Which one is which?” Helena asked.
“Dats Swiper,” Angelica said, pointing to the fox. “And dats Boots! Me wikes him!” she said excitedly, pointing to the monkey.
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Alice walked up to the Planet and started to go inside. Thinking better of the idea, she stopped and turned around to sit on the patio out front. But it was too late. Kit had espied her from where she was standing behind the counter inside, facing the door.
Kit hurried outdoors.
“Good heavens, girl! What have you got on your back!” Kit exclaimed.
Alice laughed, turning to kiss her new monkey on the lips. She grabbed his long-fingered paw and held it out to Kit.
“Kit, meet Harry! Harry, this is Kit,” Alice introduced them.
Kit stood agog as Alice grinned and continued to hold Harry’s hand out for Kit to shake.
“Alice, I ain’t shakin’ no hands with a monkey!” Kit protested.
The chimp shook it’s head violently and chattered. Then it stopped abruptly and pursed its lips to throw a kiss at Kit.
“He likes you, Kit. Shake or you’ll hurt his feelings,” Alice said, grabbing for Kit’s hand.
“I don’t think so,” Kit said, pulling her arm back and stepping away.
Harry chirped and and sang, crawling down from Alice’s back. He quickly climbed up Kit’s leg and torso and kissed her on the cheek, wrapping his arms around her neck.
Kit turned her head and scrunched up her face. “Alice, get this ape offa me before I kill you and throw you outta here!”
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Z! Whee! (: That was so funny. OMG. The banana milkshake and banana bread part made me laugh so hard! (: Brilliant, as always. ((: Angie is too adorable in your story. I love her sweet innocence! ((: PPS! xoxo
“Alice, I ain’t shakin’ no hands with a monkey!” hahahahahaha….whoo, shit, that made my day…i can’t believe alice actually brought him home, what a pair! tina is crazy, but thats always fun right? Crazy as baby mommas = good times…pps
Clever and cute as always! Can’t wait for more…the talk should be interesting…
“He quickly climbed up Kit’s leg and torso and kissed her on the cheek” Yeah, I had to read that one again, I missed the bit about the torso and wasn’t sure which of Kit’s cheeks Harry kissed. I think I’ve had enough wine. Cue the music, cue Kit, and let’s hear her sing “One Monkey Don’t Stop No Show”. Although she might take all banana related items off the menu now.
Oh, busted. I can so see Alice with a chimp, the chimp and the imp can be the name of the story when you get ready to write it.
I did forget to add that had Harry climbed up ME I would be freaking out, I don’t do monkeys, so I admire Kit’s composure, and there would be NO monkeykissing! I too had to reread, as I thought Alice took the monkey inside the Planet, which probably would not be the best idea…but on the other hand, he did let tina have it good and proper, so he IS a discerning monkey! Should funnyone ever surface to any communicating realm other than these hit and runs, it would be nice! I misses her.
Oh my gosh babe this was a wondrful way to start my day. The part of Alice & her chimp with Kit made my laugh so hard I got tears in my eyes. Tina sure is acting crazy and I don’t think Dirty Harry is doing any good LOL. I love the interaction between Gel’s & Angies, it”s so adorable. I hope the talk won’t be bad news though. Can’t wait to read more.Laughs at funnyone’s comment about the part where she missed the torso that almost made me spit my drink LOL.
Love it!!!!!!!!! PPS
This was great!I just love the interaction between Alice and her little hairy friend. And I agree with Harry, Tina does need to cool off. And lastly Bette & Helena do need to talk. Because the fireworks are just begining. Jealousy is about to show it’s little blond head.
Z what can I say that it was just so funny with Al and Dirth Harry, and with Kit in the interaction was awesome, I loved it!! Then when Harry throws the shake at Tina Brilliant and Alice saying you made my day was even funnier. Angie is adorable and I liked how you ended with Helena saying they needed to talk, wonderful Z!!!
Love Dirty Harry, One mad Mommy is on the loose. Should she be mad,No. She let Bette go so finder keeper.Helena is the finder. thanks
I knew I liked that monkey! Tina got just what she deserved. I don’t know what she thinks she is doing, hanging up on people and going around screaming at them, but She. Let. Bette Go. SHE did it, and now Bette and Helena are together, and happy. Tina has no right to be doing this enraged victim crap at all, and I hope someone stands up to her, besides Dirty Harry, and tells her to STFU. I love Angie when she is behaving, and soon, more loving with B and H, please, soon?
Gee Zheese Hi, am I the only one that saw how nervous Bette got when Angie was on the cell phone? As for the rest, so funny & cute, loved dirty Harry and Al. If I were Tina, I would have had to laugh at myself though. Thank you, Md
Z!!! That just made my day!!! Tina needs to pull her head out of her ASS!!! Alice and her monkey gotta love it!!!! Thank you PPS