“Perfect!!!” (Shane said pretty confident at her score. Julio came in the room)

“Pretty good for a cop” (Julio said)

“Not perfect, but good”

“Carmen this is how perfection looks like, ok babe. I mean look at it… its almost perfect”

“If you say so” (She turned to leave but Shane grabbed her hand to stop her)

“No you’re not going anywhere… if you’re so good then, you do it” (Shane gave the gun to Carmen. Carmen looked at Julio and he smiled)

“Ok then” (she pushed the start button and the matching got ready)

“Ok Carmen… 3, 2, 1” (Then Carmen pointed and without looking shot 10 times. When she was done she pulled the results back. You couldn’t see the red dot anymore, just a big hole on it. Perfect. All the shots went on the middle except for one)

“Oh, I missed one….Well… that Shane… is almost perfect” (She smiled and went out the room. Leaving a shocked Shane and a smiling Julio)

“She just-“

“I know… she’s good man”

“But she didn’t-“

“I know”

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“I’ve never shot something before… I’ve never even grabbed a gun” (Jenny smiled)

“Are you for real?”

“yea” (Carmen stood up and grabbed a bag that was on the couch behind them and pulled a gun out of it)

“here” (she gave it to Jenny) “now you have a gun in your hands for the first time. Now you need to shoot”

“no I mean… here I don’t really want to”

“come on Jenny don’t be a pussy”

“but what do you want me to shoot?”

“I don’t know… come on lets go to the balcony”

“What?…” (Carmen grabbed Jenny by the hand and went out the balcony)

“Now point at something and shoot”

“What if I shoot someone?”

“Jenny we are in the middle of no where right know, you are not going to shoot someone” (everything outside was dark and you couldn’t see a thing)

“But I cant see anything”

“Can you see that trashcan right there?” (she pointed to the middle of the view, like 200 feet from where they were)

“Yes”

“well aim and shoot”

“I cant I don’t know how” (Carmen rolled her eyes and went behind Jenny and grabbed Jenny’s hands holding the gun and pointed. They were really close to each other. Carmen face in Jenny’s shoulders)

“ok you have to close one eye… then look thru the middle of the gun and point to your target” (Jenny  felt Carmen so close to her it made her nervous. Carmen looked at her.Her lips, almost touching Jenny’s cheek. Jenny could feel Carmen’s breath on her face) “you think you could do it?”

“um… yea” (Then Carmen let go of her hands and put them on Jenny’s hips)

“When I say 3 ok?…” (Jenny nodded) “1…2…3” (Carmen whispered the 3 on Jenny’s ear and Jenny shot) “BANG!!” (Jenny didn’t shoot the trashcan but was really close. Carmen let go of Jenny and went back inside, leaving Jenny out side confused and shocked because she actually shot a gun)

“Shit!!!”

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