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Interview With a Killer part2
“Well……. I woke her up”
F L A S H B A C K
(Shane was on the floor and Carmen kneeled beside her)
“Shane… Shane wake up…” (Shane woke up and when she opened her eyes she saw Carmen)
“Carmen?…” that was more like a whisper, but it felt so good. My name coming out of her mouth again.
“Yea baby it’s me” (Carmen had a huge smile on her face. Shane was surprise)
“You’re dead Carmen”
“Actually no…(She smiled) ” (Shane reached with her left hand and touched Carmen’s face)
“You really here” (Shane started smiling) she so sweet… how can you not fall in love with her.
“Yes”
“But how?… I though-“
“Shane, I’m too good too die in a place like that” (She smiled again)
“How did you escaped?”
“Well I swished places with a woman, and came running here… I had the feeling you where going to do something stupid”
(Shane sat down so she was now face to face with Carmen. Shane grabbed Carmen by the neck, pulled her towards her and started kissing her. The kiss started getting really passionate. Shane was desperate to feel Carmen)
“God, it feels like we haven’t done this in a hundred years” (Shane said in between kisses)
“I know” (Carmen said, pushing Shane down so they where on the floor. Carmen was on top of Shane. They where now looking at each other)
“I thought you where dead… I though I lost you Carmen”
“Why kill your self Shane?”
“….What was the point of living without you?…”
“… what if I was late?… and I didn’t come… or if I came and you had already pulled the trigger?”
“But you did Carmen… you came…that’s all that maters …”
(They looked at each other for a minute. Then Carmen pulled her t-shirt off, Shane did the same with her shirt and Carmen started kissing Shane. Shane grabbed Carmen’s ass pulling her closer to her. Carmen moaned) “GOD” (Shane melted with every sound Carmen made. Carmen couldn’t take it anymore, she stood up bringing Shane with her, and took off her pants. Shane saw Carmen and did the same. In 10 seconds they where only on their underwear and walking backwards to Shane’s room, kissing)
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perfect update.. i absolutely loved it.. please continue like now, i need more…thanks
ok this is the best update wow i loved it great story please keep it up
Ok, I like the whole disjointed mode of your writing but more detail would help it. No doubt Carmen as a killer and lanky Shane as a cop on her heels is interesting, but I still feel distracted when I cannot remember if Jenny and Carmen are siting down, having a drink or whatever. I know they’re talking, but I also want to know what the atmosphere is around Jenny and Carmen, that way I’ll be more inclined to read what Jenny is saying as opposed to scrolling to the next flashback. It’s a really good story and with a bit more poignant details, you could murder my laptop. *weg* good update!
Fantastic update!! I notice that while I’m reading, I can’t wait to find out what happens next. Can’t wait to find out more!! Update asap please.
I’m soo glad Julio was there for Carmen and Shane. Like Carmen said, “you can always count on family.”