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    Interview With a Killer part4

     

    Jenny and Carmen were on the bed naked and exhausted both looking up. Jenny was smiling and wiping the sweat of her face while on the other side of the bed, Carmen had a look of lost and sadness. Jenny turned to look at her but Carmen kept looking up. Jenny saw the sadness in Carmen’s eyes.

     

    “Come on, I wasn’t THAT bad” (Jenny said trying to change Carmen’s mood. Carmen laughed)

     

     

     

    “No you weren’t” (Carmen said turning to face Jenny. They looked at each other for a couple of seconds)

     

     

     

    “What really happened that day Carmen?” (Carmen turned to look another way, but then looked at Jenny again. Jenny could see tears forming on Carmen’s ayes)

     

     

     

     “Um… I… um I went out to the store one day… we couldn’t go together, because it would bring to much attention… and we had to stay lo-key so……..I was walking home…… (Carmen said between sniffs)

     

     

     

     

     

    F         L          A         S          H         B         A         C         K

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

    (Carmen was walking home with a bag on each hand, when she saw a black Ferrari parked in front of her brother’s house)

     

     

    Fuck… I better hide before they see me

     

     

    (Carmen was two houses away, so she went in to the neighbor’s backyard leaving the bags there. She jumped the fence that separated the two houses. When she was in the window she saw Julio on the floor of the living room with a bleeding hole in his head)

     

     

    JULIO!! (She went to open the window to go in but stopped when a man came from behind Julio carrying a bleeding and crying Shane and threw her on the floor) SHANE!! (She went to move again, she couldn’t just sit there and do nothing, but her eyes found Shane’s and Shane motion with her lips without talking ‘NO’ so Carmen stopped. Carmen was crying but had to stop so she could hear what the man was saying to Shane)

     

     

    “So are you going to tell us where the fuck is your little fucked up girlfriend?” (He had the gun pointed at Shane)

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    Comments

    1. oh come on shane can’t be dead.. great update.. i completely understand the hole ADD thing.. i have it too.. only i have ADHD..lol.. anyways love this story.. please continue soon if possible.. and i also like your new story.. :P

    2. PLS can u update…I hope you don’t get sick of this to the point that you will stop writing! Bring Shane back….maybe she’s not really dead! is there hope?

    3. Dude? Seriously? Come on . . . Shane ain’t dead . . . she can’t be, mane. This wuz a fuckin’ awesome update, SHORT, but still awesome all da’ same, Baby ~smirks~ So, umm, I totally understand da’ whole A.D.D. thang and all, chicka . . . but umm could you please try and update 4 me, Baby-girl ~puppy dog eyes~ PLEASE????!!! Whelp, just try to update as soon as possible at least 4 me . . . . Umm, like always from me, Baby-girl, LYLAS ;-p . . . HoLlA aT mE!!!! Stank . . . Da’ one and only, chicka!!

    4. First Carmenny, then Shane’s dead! No, no, no. This can’t be happening. I still have hope, since Carmen didn’t see Shane get shot and she never went to the funeral. (Yeah, the update was short, but at least now we know you haven’t forgotten about us. Thanks.)

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