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Interview With a Killer part4
“I told you… I don’t know…” (She said spiting blood. Carmen saw the bleeding hole on Shane’s shoulder. The man kicked Shane on the ribs)
Shit, shit, shit!!!!
“What the fuck do you want!?!?!?!… if you’re going to arrest me, just do it already!! ”
“Do I look like I want to arrest you Shane?… I have better plans for you….you have no idea who I am right?”
“No”
“I work for Madox”
Madox… shit … I can’t believe this is happening!! Not now!! FUCK!!
“The girlfriend told you the story huh?… well we had trouble finding her but she had no trouble finding us… she has killed 6 of our man… one last week”
Shit… Shane is going to be pissed I didn’t tell her about that
“I didn’t know that”
“Well now you know… so are you going to tell us where she is, or we can kill you now?” (Then the man’s phone rang)
“Yea?……..ok”
What do I fucking do!!?!!?!!!?
“I guess I don’t need your help anymore” (Carmen was confused, Shane was scared. The man smiled and then turn to the window were Carmen was)
“CARMEN RUN!!!!” (Shane screamed from the top of her longs and Carmen jumped up and saw two men on her right running towards her. She looked at Shane one last time, Shane was crying) “RUN!!!”
I felt like I couldn’t move at first… Everything went in slow motion… Shane looking at me with does sad eyes… me running to the back of the house… opening the secret door that lead to a garage with my car… then I heard it… a gun shot… and I knew… I knew he shot her… I froze… she was dead… dead… then the engine of my car turned and the passenger seat flew open. When I looked inside there was Alice
“We have to go, come on jump in”
I still couldn’t move… I was in shock… Shane is dead… not even tear came to me (Then Alice screamed)
“MOVE!!!” (Carmen got in)
E N D F L A S H B A C K
“It was Madox?”
“Yea… He took everything from me…and made me responsible for it… I have nothing…” (Carmen was crying)
“….. I saw it on the news…. They blame you…the police…” (Carmen laughed)
“Yea… how was it they said?… ‘Psycho killer kills her brother and partner slash girlfriend slash policeman’……… I couldn’t even go to their funeral…”.
“….So what now?….”
“Well I told my story….Now I turn my self in… but first I got to do one last thing”
“Madox….”
“Bingo”
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I’m sorry for not updating this story for a long time its just i have ADD lol seriously and i get sick of thing very fast lol
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Tell me what you think!!!!!!
I think I like to beg too lol
love you and i hope you all had a great CHRISTMAS
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(25 votes, average: 3.36 out of 5)
oh come on shane can’t be dead.. great update.. i completely understand the hole ADD thing.. i have it too.. only i have ADHD..lol.. anyways love this story.. please continue soon if possible.. and i also like your new story.. :P
PLS can u update…I hope you don’t get sick of this to the point that you will stop writing! Bring Shane back….maybe she’s not really dead! is there hope?
Dude? Seriously? Come on . . . Shane ain’t dead . . . she can’t be, mane. This wuz a fuckin’ awesome update, SHORT, but still awesome all da’ same, Baby ~smirks~ So, umm, I totally understand da’ whole A.D.D. thang and all, chicka . . . but umm could you please try and update 4 me, Baby-girl ~puppy dog eyes~ PLEASE????!!! Whelp, just try to update as soon as possible at least 4 me . . . . Umm, like always from me, Baby-girl, LYLAS ;-p . . . HoLlA aT mE!!!! Stank . . . Da’ one and only, chicka!!
First Carmenny, then Shane’s dead! No, no, no. This can’t be happening. I still have hope, since Carmen didn’t see Shane get shot and she never went to the funeral. (Yeah, the update was short, but at least now we know you haven’t forgotten about us. Thanks.)