“What’s wrong” Rosa said

“Que pasa!?” Julio said

“Shhhhhhhhhhhh!…, papa told me we should hide”

“But why …. Por que?”

“Shut Up… Callense” and someone walk into the room, I could see two big man holding my dad and another one staring  at my mom sleeping body

“Soo…. This is were you spend my money”

“Listen Madox, I needed it, She was going to die, I needed that money” that was the first time I saw papa crying and the first time I heard Dad saying mama was going to die..

“So you spend a 150 grand of MY MONEY, to save this old fucking bitch” I was scared of what was going to happened, so I took a blanket that was on the closet and I cover my brother and sister so they couldn’t see anything. They were covering each other mouth, silently crying. Me… I was fixed without emotion, I couldn’t cry, I couldn’t move, I was paralyzed.

“Listen Madox (crying).. I was gonna pay you back, and I will… just give me some time”

“I’m tired of waiting… time is up!” ( BANG!,) at that time I closed my eyes and I couldn’t hear anything, two minute later my brother started crying out loud, so I opened the closet door, and I saw my father kneeled on the foot of the bed holding my mother’s bleeding body!, I stared crying, but no tears came out, my  siblings went to the bed and started crying surrounding my mom’s body.

“DON’T TOUCH HER!, DON’T FUCKING TOUCH HER!, GET OUT!” they walked out of the room. Papa took a red rose from my mother night table and put it between her hands “I’m sorry !  Please forgive me……”

“Daddy.. is she ok?”

“No…, she’s dead.. she’s fucking dead!….” tears finally came

“…..No…” (whispered)

“Give me the gun!” I give it to him

“GET OUT!”

“No!” and he grabbed me and pushed me out of the room, and closed the door.

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“So your Dad….?”

“ He killed himself” (Carmen was crying and Jenny was tearful too)

“I’m sorry”

“…Me too…”

“What happened to you and your siblings?”

“To make the long story short, my brother and sisters went to live with relatives… I got send to a foster home"

“So that’s why you kill people… revenge”

“No…, I will get revenge when I kill Madox Pantwan, I kill cause it’s the right thing to do, bad people doesn’t deserve to live”

“So you gonna kill Madox?… Carmen!, they have him under surveillance, you go there.. and it’s the end of you”

“I know”

“Why you want to die, Carmen?”

“There’s nothing left for me here…”

“You mean Shane right?”

“Yea”

“So what happened?, I mean, I know the hole story between you two, until a year ago… You were given death sentence, and you-”

“Well, I escape…, First, my job here isn’t done, and now you know why I mean, second Shane was gonna kill herself because of me”

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“BANG!”, I kick the door open, and Shane was there, crying, with a gun pointed to her head, and looking at me like I was a ghost.

“What the fuck you doing Shane!?!?!, leave… the gun… alone…” (Shane had her eyed wide open)

(Whispered) “Shit” (And then she fell to the floor unconscious)

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(Jenny was laughing)

 “She fainted!” (Carmen laugh)

“Yes she did”

“So what happened…”

“Well………………..

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