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I’ve Got You Under My Skin – Chapter 2
Tina: “It was really nice meeting all of you, but I need to get back to my apartment so I can get ready for work.”
Shane: “Tina, do you live in the neighborhood?”
Tina: “I live just a couple blocks away. I have a condo at Westwinds.”
Dana: “Seriously? I live at Westwinds. What is your number? I am 206.”
Tina: “I live in in 114.”
Dana: “Wow, we are neighbors. If you ever need anything please drop by. Heck, drop by when you don’t need anything.”
Tina: “Thanks. I will remember that.”
Kit: “Tina, let me get my keys and I will give you a lift home.”
Tina: “No, Kit, really it’s okay. You have done so much for me already this morning.”
Alice: “I can give you a ride if you would like.”
Dana to Shane: “Yeah, I bet she would like to ride her.”
Tina: “No, that’s okay. My leg has stiffened up and I need to walk it out. I will be okay to walk home. It’s just a few blocks. But, thank you, both of you, for the offer.”
Alice: “Hey, anytime. So . . . where should I bring your magazines? I could bring them to your apartment or by your work?”
Tina: “Actually, Kit says that y’all are here all the time. I am sure I will be spending lots of time here. I will get them from you . . . I am sure soon enough.”
Alice: (feeling a little shot down) “Oh, okay. Really, it isn’t a problem.”
Tina: “Thanks. Well, it was great meeting you.”
Everyone: “Nice to meet you. Welcome.”
Kit: “Tina, remember what I said, ‘you’ve got family here.’”
Tina: “I will. Thanks Kit. Y’all have a wonderful day. Bye!”
Tina walks out of the Planet with her smoothie in hand. She looks down to her elbow and knees that are scaraped from her fall. As she comes around the corner, still looking down at her fresh wounds, she runs smack into a beautiful woman dressed in a designer suit as she is talking on the phone.
Woman: “*****! What the ***** are you doing?”
Tina looks up from her gaze and realizes that she has not only run into someone, but in the process has spilled her mango smoothie all over this person’s designer suit.
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(65 votes, average: 3.85 out of 5)
ohh Bette you dont know yet but you will regret for all the rude words you said to Tina when you fall in love for her..lol..that was great go on please
OMG! Did someone say BITCH!! I’m sorry, but I would have tossed the rest of the smoothie on her!!
K
I love this story. Great start, can’t wait to see where you go with this. Hope you continue soon.
Great story, I can’t wait for Bette to be introduced to Tina. Post soon I realy like this one.
Hey that was so great I Love it Please continue post soon.
hey portard, love you name almost as much as I like your story. Looking forward to when Bette meets the “farm girl” again…
Damn Bette is so mean, poor Tina. Ok let see Bette and Tina see each other again on next time. Post soon please, thanks!
I like this story!!! Keep going!!!
Great couple of chapters. I can’t wait for b & t to meet up again. Funny! Please continue.
Read the first 2 chapters great start it will be interesting to see where it goes from here post soon!!!
hahaha CROO, i’m with you. bette ain’t that bad.
poor tina bette lay into her without listening to her. cant wait for tehm ot meet again. should be fireworks lol
Oh no, we have the ‘can’t see what’s in front of her’ Bette. It’s going to take a miracle to get Tina to give her an chance, no matter what kind of connection they might feel, at some point. Feels like a looooonnnnggggroad ahead before
something sparks between country girl and city slicker!
damm bette could you be anymore of an ass
OMG!! did Bette have to be so mean! damn this is going to take some drastic event to get these two together.
hmm…Bette is juz so mean sometimes..
love this hilarious story…love humorous stories on this site they are so wonderfully written and do brighten my day. pls continue…i read ch 1 before going to bed, and was a pleasant surprise when ch2 showed up this am
Ok, my girl, Bette, is a straight-up Biatch! But, I still love her. =)I can’t wait to see how they both react when Kit finally introduces them. LOL Talk about sparks flying…
Bette was a total cunt.Nice beginning.
CROO – im with you. what an ass. i would have thrown the rest of the smoothie on her also, snQQpy. shes gonna have alot of splaining to do. with that start it should be hard to see how they can get together. first impressions, ya know. and HELLNO already, jeez.
Hope Bette has a passionate apology because the next time she see’s Tina, she’ll have her suit knocked right off of her………….right??? :-)
nice story, please post soon can’t wait for the next one, this looks like it’s going to be an intresting story, farm girl, that’s kind of funny
damn can Bette BE any more mean!!!!! But she is soon to eat those words….LOL POST SOON!!!!