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I’ve Got You Under My Skin – Chapter 2
Tina: “Oh, my God. I am soooo sorry. I wasn’t paying attention to where I was walking. I apologize. Can I help you get cleaned up?”
Woman: “Why don’t you go back to the farm, country girl? You might be able to wallow in the mud with pigs there, but you’re in West Hollywood. You need to watch out where you are going!”
Tina: “Ma’am, I am so sorry. I would be glad to pay to have your suit cleaned.”
Woman: “Well, no thanks. A little bar of soap and a wash board isn’t going to take this out. Christ! This suit is ruined. Go jump on your cow and ride home. “
Tina was speechless. She couldn’t believe that someone could be so upset over something that she didn’t do intentionally. What a contrast to the people she just met. Tina just looked at the tall, sophisicated woman and couldn’t believe what she just heard.
Woman: (going back to her cell phone): “Hello? Peggy are you still there? Peggy, can you hear me? *****! She hung up! *****!”
Tina just walked away shunned at the interaction that just happened with a complete stranger. She couldn’t believe how one could be so kind (Kit) and the other so rude.
BACK AT THE PLANET
Kit: “Tina seems like such a nice girl. She could really use some family and friends. I think she could fit into our family quite nicely.”
Alice: “Yeah, me too. I would really like to get to know her better. Maybe I could do a story on her. Hmmmm.”
Shane: “Al, leave her alone. She needs a family and some friends right now, not someone trying to play mack daddy.”
Dana: “Yeah, Al. We don’t even know if she is *****.”
Alice: “Excuse me, Miss Crispy, but I hate to inform you once again that you still don’t have gaydar.”
Shane: (laughing) “Dane, what are we going to do with you?”
Kit: “Dana, I even knew she was ***** and I am not down with the team!”
Dana: “Kit, how could you have gaydar? Is there something from your wild days on the road we don’t know about?”
Kit: “There is a lot about my wild days on the road that you don’t know about, but being with a woman isn’t one of them. I happen to know that she is ***** because she told me.”
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(65 votes, average: 3.85 out of 5)
ohh Bette you dont know yet but you will regret for all the rude words you said to Tina when you fall in love for her..lol..that was great go on please
OMG! Did someone say BITCH!! I’m sorry, but I would have tossed the rest of the smoothie on her!!
K
I love this story. Great start, can’t wait to see where you go with this. Hope you continue soon.
Great story, I can’t wait for Bette to be introduced to Tina. Post soon I realy like this one.
Hey that was so great I Love it Please continue post soon.
hey portard, love you name almost as much as I like your story. Looking forward to when Bette meets the “farm girl” again…
Damn Bette is so mean, poor Tina. Ok let see Bette and Tina see each other again on next time. Post soon please, thanks!
I like this story!!! Keep going!!!
Great couple of chapters. I can’t wait for b & t to meet up again. Funny! Please continue.
Read the first 2 chapters great start it will be interesting to see where it goes from here post soon!!!
hahaha CROO, i’m with you. bette ain’t that bad.
poor tina bette lay into her without listening to her. cant wait for tehm ot meet again. should be fireworks lol
Oh no, we have the ‘can’t see what’s in front of her’ Bette. It’s going to take a miracle to get Tina to give her an chance, no matter what kind of connection they might feel, at some point. Feels like a looooonnnnggggroad ahead before
something sparks between country girl and city slicker!
damm bette could you be anymore of an ass
OMG!! did Bette have to be so mean! damn this is going to take some drastic event to get these two together.
hmm…Bette is juz so mean sometimes..
love this hilarious story…love humorous stories on this site they are so wonderfully written and do brighten my day. pls continue…i read ch 1 before going to bed, and was a pleasant surprise when ch2 showed up this am
Ok, my girl, Bette, is a straight-up Biatch! But, I still love her. =)I can’t wait to see how they both react when Kit finally introduces them. LOL Talk about sparks flying…
Bette was a total cunt.Nice beginning.
CROO – im with you. what an ass. i would have thrown the rest of the smoothie on her also, snQQpy. shes gonna have alot of splaining to do. with that start it should be hard to see how they can get together. first impressions, ya know. and HELLNO already, jeez.
Hope Bette has a passionate apology because the next time she see’s Tina, she’ll have her suit knocked right off of her………….right??? :-)
nice story, please post soon can’t wait for the next one, this looks like it’s going to be an intresting story, farm girl, that’s kind of funny
damn can Bette BE any more mean!!!!! But she is soon to eat those words….LOL POST SOON!!!!