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    I’ve Got You Under My Skin – Chapter 5

    Story written on August 31, 2005 by hey_portard.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=56348
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    Tina and Bette finally meet one another face to face. What will happen?

    though everything around her is a blur, she can sense that things around her are beautiful . . . including the fuzzy brunette, Bette.  Tina thinks to herself, “I’ve got to find my
    glasses!  Okay, stop it Kennard!  Stop acting like a school girl with a school girl crush. 
    I just broke up with Erica . . . *****, I just met Bette, how could I be having those thoughts?”  Tina laughs to herself, “*****, I am as bad a Dana and Alice.”
     
    Alice:  “Come on Tina, jump on in!”
     
    Tina:  “You got to lead me to the water, I took my contacts out and I can’t see a thing!”
     
    Alice:  “You wear contacts?  Me too!”
     
    Tina:  “Yeah and I am so blind without them.  To top it off, I still haven’t found my
    glasses since I moved.  I know they are in my home somewhere!”
     
    Dana:  “Here, let me get out and lead you over to the steps.”
     
    Tina:  “Thanks Dana.”
     
    Alice:  “Aren’t you going to take your tank top and shorts off?  It’s okay, we are all
    friends.  *****, we all have the same parts . . . just in different shapes and sizes!”
     
    Tina:  “Um . . .okay . . . I guess.”
     
    As Tina starts to take her top off, Bette happens to glance out the window.  She is
    mesmerized by Tina’s chiseled body and perfect *****.  She stops paying attention to what Kit is saying and starts to daydream about the ***** blonde unclothing herself before her very eyes.
     
    Kit:  “So . . . what should I tell David? (long moment of silence)  Bette?  Bette!”
     
    Kit notices that her sister is in another world at the moment.  She smiles to herself and
    then says to Bette . . .
     
    Kit:  “Hey, my pootie chasing sister . . . H-E-L-L-O??”
     
    Bette:  “Yeah, um . . . (Bette looks back to Kit) so what did David say?”
     
    Kit:  “I already told you what David said.  I asked you what I should tell him!”
     
    Bette:  “Sorry, I was distracted for a moment.”
     
    Kit:  “Baby sis, I am going to say this once and I will never say it again.  You hurt that

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    2. I’ve just done the Eveyln Wood speed reading course catching up with this story. Love it, its so cute and refreshing. You’ve got the two bozos (Alice/Dana) down, and our two girls, hook up coming. I’m with the others, kinda was waiting for them both to realize they had bumped into each other before. Totally looking forward to your next update.

    4. Well that’s good, they got to know each other before jumping to a quick judgement, because of their little accident. Lucky for Bette, that’s for sure. It figures Bette didn’t recognize Tina from their morning run-in. Hope this smoothes things over some, before Tina realizes who Bette is. Great post. More, please.

    8. I really like your story and was excited to see your post tonight (I was just about to log off). I thought their first meeting would happen entirely different and wondered how they would ever get past their disgust for each other to like each other. So, this is an interesting turn although it is hard to believe that Bette did not recognize the farm girl’s voice, but that is infatuation (or love) for you.

      Anyway, remember to keep having fun with your writing and we will continue to have fun reading it!

    9. I like that Tina couldn’t see too well and got to know Bette’s heart a little. It’ll probably be a big shock for her when she sees Bette on Wednesday, huh? Hee, hee.

    12. i think bette was more angry than anything to really see who she was yelling at. to her it could have been anyone, something like blind rage. tina would more remember what she looked like. and remember when bette saw kit after she said that she should not have yelled at the woman and that she was already angry.
      anyway i love love love this story.

    13. LMAO @ Kit’s Miss Universe comment.

      Tina is blind as a fucking bat…this is too funny. This is the first story that I have read in which she cant see. I just look forward to when she finds out the her Monday morning bitch was Bette.

      What I dont get is why Bette didnt recognize Tina?

      Post again soon….

    15. i never expected this that tina would not see bette. i know bette would not recognize her because she was so mad she probably could not see straight. cannot wait for tina to see bette. sh*t is goint to hit the fan. lol

    17. I really like your story. The fact that Tina can’t see a thing without her contacts or glasses is sooo funny. I’m glad she got to know Bette alittle without seeing her…maybe once she “sees” her she won’t be too quick to judge her outburst. Can’t wait for the next chapter.

    18. yeah, porTARD why didnt bette recognize her. and tina saw her in the photos at her house. but being blind was slick. cant wait to see if they ever really recognize it was them. if they were in such embarassment (t) and anger (b) maybe they never really lookied. what to see whata you do with this. post soon.

    22. u r nothing but a tease, oh well, i just can’t wait for tina 2 c bette’s face and realize she was the one who so rudely insulted her and called her farm girl, please post soon.

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