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I’ve Got You Under My Skin – Chapter 5
Story written on August 31, 2005 by hey_portard.
girls cheer them on. It seems at this moment everyone has forgotten about their awful
Monday.
Dana maneuvers herself around Bette and comes up from behind Bette. As she jumps on her back she reaches around and goes for the jugular when she gives Bette a good old titty twister.
Bette: “Ah! *****! Dana that hurts!”
Dana: “You were saying something about the need for me to be rescued.”
Bette: (laughing while still reeling in pain) “You don’t play nice Fairbanks! Ah, *****!”
Shane: “Hey Bette, do you have any beer?”
Bette: “Yeah, in the refrigerator. Help yourself.”
Shane: “Anyone else want one?”
Dana: “Bring it!”
Alice: “Me too.”
Shane: “Tina, Bette, Kit?”
Tina: “Ah, no thanks Shane, I’m fine.”
Bette: “None for me.”
Kit: “What do you think?”
Shane: “Sorry, I forgot . . . never mind. I’ll be right back.”
As the night wears on there are echoes of laughter and friendship that bellow from the
backyard. If someone didn’t know any better they would have thought Tina had been their
friend for years. Tina enjoyed getting to know everyone and everyone enjoyed getting to
know a little bit more about this sweet, North Carolinian’ girl. Bette continued to steal
glances at Tina all night long. She was actually enjoying the fact that Tina couldn’t see
her admiring her from a distance.
Bette looks over at her outdoor clock and sees that it is 11:30 p.m. It was just about an hour ago that Shane left for her evening fling and Kit got called into The Planet after a fight broke out between two drunk patrons. Bette couldn’t believe that an hour had already passed as she was enjoying the girl’s company, especially Tina’s. It was just a slightly
tipsy Dana and Alice, along with the very sober Bette and Tina. They were all enjoying
themselves and didn’t want the evening to end, but they knew that tomorrow was quickly
approaching and they would have to call it a night.
Bette: “I hate to do this, but I need to get to bed. I’ve got a lot to do this week before
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oh my i know Tinas was blind but Bette dosent how could she dosent know?..lol..camt wait to see the real meeting..lol..cant wait for more
I’ve just done the Eveyln Wood speed reading course catching up with this story. Love it, its so cute and refreshing. You’ve got the two bozos (Alice/Dana) down, and our two girls, hook up coming. I’m with the others, kinda was waiting for them both to realize they had bumped into each other before. Totally looking forward to your next update.
K
Excellent chapter, can’t wait til Tina really sees Bette. Love it.
Well that’s good, they got to know each other before jumping to a quick judgement, because of their little accident. Lucky for Bette, that’s for sure. It figures Bette didn’t recognize Tina from their morning run-in. Hope this smoothes things over some, before Tina realizes who Bette is. Great post. More, please.
Can’t wait for Tina to really see Bette. What will she do. will she still go with Bette? This is going to be so funny. Thanks
This chapter is funa and Tina is blind so cute and funny, can’t wait for Tina to see Bette. Post soon please, thanks!
Great chapter. Post soon! :)
I really like your story and was excited to see your post tonight (I was just about to log off). I thought their first meeting would happen entirely different and wondered how they would ever get past their disgust for each other to like each other. So, this is an interesting turn although it is hard to believe that Bette did not recognize the farm girl’s voice, but that is infatuation (or love) for you.
Anyway, remember to keep having fun with your writing and we will continue to have fun reading it!
I like that Tina couldn’t see too well and got to know Bette’s heart a little. It’ll probably be a big shock for her when she sees Bette on Wednesday, huh? Hee, hee.
but why dint Bette recognise Tina??? I must hve missed something?
this was too funny. wait until Tina actually puts her contacts in and actually sees Bette….
i think bette was more angry than anything to really see who she was yelling at. to her it could have been anyone, something like blind rage. tina would more remember what she looked like. and remember when bette saw kit after she said that she should not have yelled at the woman and that she was already angry.
anyway i love love love this story.
LMAO @ Kit’s Miss Universe comment.
Tina is blind as a fucking bat…this is too funny. This is the first story that I have read in which she cant see. I just look forward to when she finds out the her Monday morning bitch was Bette.
What I dont get is why Bette didnt recognize Tina?
Post again soon….
yea..more please. still loving it.
i never expected this that tina would not see bette. i know bette would not recognize her because she was so mad she probably could not see straight. cannot wait for tina to see bette. sh*t is goint to hit the fan. lol
I’m loving this story! Please keep goimg. I want to see Tina’s reaction when she realizes who Bette is. LOL. Good job,; it was a fun chapter to read.
I really like your story. The fact that Tina can’t see a thing without her contacts or glasses is sooo funny. I’m glad she got to know Bette alittle without seeing her…maybe once she “sees” her she won’t be too quick to judge her outburst. Can’t wait for the next chapter.
yeah, porTARD why didnt bette recognize her. and tina saw her in the photos at her house. but being blind was slick. cant wait to see if they ever really recognize it was them. if they were in such embarassment (t) and anger (b) maybe they never really lookied. what to see whata you do with this. post soon.
awww….waht a great story…hahah…if tina recognizes bette as the woman from earlier it will be great
Please keep it going..I got to get my ASS in a meeting comment more next time…THANKS
another great chapter, cant wait for the next
u r nothing but a tease, oh well, i just can’t wait for tina 2 c bette’s face and realize she was the one who so rudely insulted her and called her farm girl, please post soon.
Bette is like a fishing pole, rail it in, get them hook, time to eat…gotta love her charm and swagg damn she’s hot