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    I’ve Got You Under My Skin – Chapter 6

    Story written on September 1, 2005 by hey_portard.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=56366
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    Bette sends Tina a gift. Tina learns some bad news. Tina goes to Bette for comfort and discovers who Bette really is . . . I promise!

    Tina:  “What the *****!  Come on Kennard.”

    Tina quietly gets out of the car and starts to walk up onto Bette’s front porch.  In the back of her mind she thinks, “There is still time, you can leave and she will never know.”  She pushes past those fears and rings the door bell.

    Upon hearing the door bell, Bette jumps a little by the unexpected ring at this unexpected hour.  She walks towards the front door, flips the front porch light on and opens the door.

    Tina:  “Bet . . . (stops in mid sentence) WHAT THE *****!  OH, MY GOD!  IT’S YOU!  I AM SUCH A *****’ IDIOT.”

    Bette:  “Tina, what’s wrong?”

    Tina:  “What’s wrong?  (shouting)  WHAT’S WRONG???  YOU HAVE NO *****’ CLUE DO YOU?”

    Bette:  “Tina, calm down.  Come on in and let’s sit down.  You are really worrying me.”

    Tina:  “I really doubt that.  Why would you take the time to worry about a *****’ FARM GIRL who WALLOWS IN THE MUD WITH THE PIGS?

    Bette:  “*****.  Oh, my God.  That was you?”

    Tina:  “Yeah.  That’s what I get for being blind as a bat.  How could I be so stupid!?  How did I not know that I was in the home and talking to the woman who belittled me in public over a complete and innocent mistake.  I am such a loser!”

    Bette:  “Tina, I am so sorry.  Let me explain.”

    Tina:  “No, I really should be going . . . let me JUMP ON MY COW AND RIDE HOME, I have some laundry I need to finish up on the washboard.  I can’t *****’ believe this.”

    Bette:  “Tina . . . Tina . . .Tina!”

    Bette runs after Tina as she heads to her car.  Tina is now crying hysterically, feeling as if her heart was just ripped from her chest and stomped on by the one and only Bette Porter.
    Bette catches Tina by the arm and says . . .

    Bette:  “Will you please let me apologize and explain?”

    Tina:  “How could you even begin to explain such ugly behavior?”

    Bette:  “I know, there is no excuse.  Can we just talk about it?”

    Tina:  “Why?  There’s no point!  Why would I ever want to be involved with anyone as cold and heartless as you?  I thought you were different.  I thought there was something special happening between you and I.”

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    1. cool story portard, I just read all of your post, nice story. I got to say that this tina on this last post was mad as H***, i don’t know if i’m happy because she is fired up, but at the same time i feel sorry for bette, anyway thanks for the longer post, and you got your self a new reader and fan

    3. Most people would have been more gentle,Knowing both were at fault. Not our Bette, she just will say what she is thinking. The cow part was the crowning touch or was it the pig thing. She will learn at some point in her life that being nice is better than saying nasty things to people Pay back is a Bitch… thanks

    4. Wow I could see that coming. Bette needs to worke on Tina a little bit and eventualy she will come around,I hope. Don’t keep us waiting to long I realy like this story.

    5. Yup, I was kind of waiting for that to happen. I’m hoping that Tina can calm down and take the time to realize that Bette was truly sorry. She didn’t try to make excuses she totally admitted her less than ladylike behavior. I’m hoping they can work thru this and get to know each other. Post soon, please!

    9. payback is sure a bitch – erm guess bette deserves that and tina shud realise that ppl are not perfect – and bette is being sincere when apologising for the whole thing. however, i can understand why tina was on the warpath being worried for her friends etc but i am sure they find their way to each other again ;) – love ur story and u take care :D hve a nice weekend cant wait for the next post. erm, bette shuld learnt to eat humble pie !

    10. I just caught up with your story. You have an excellent beginning with these two. I can’t believe this is your first time at writing, because it sounds like you have been doing this for a long time. Great job! I will definitely keep reading this one. Kiitos (that’s thank you in Finnish).

    12. Oh, come on, Tina get back out of the car, and go back and talk to Bette. She was having a bad day when you bumped into her, and you well you just have a lot of shit going on, but Bette will make you feel better. Great story, love how Kit keeps threatening Bette, and Bette ever the romantic, getting dogwood that a hard flower to come by in California.

    13. jesus. i mean bette had a fit but dayum tina is right there with her. you say you didnt want us hanging welll you are girl. this is worse than not knowing who it would be when they met. tina needs to take a chill pill and go and apologize. maybe bette needs to talk to kit and have her talk to tina cuz whoa lots of screaming going on. better post soon. this is not the place to leave it. ;)

    14. K, so Bette has some work to do. this was a great chapter. Tina will need to realize the real Bette has slowly emerged when in Tina’s company and that raving Bitch that day was not the real Bette Porter. i love your story. can’t wait to see how B convinces T to give her a chance.

    15. Whoa, knew that was coming, but I thought they’d laugh about it….guess I was wrong!!!! Now T is gonna be off to be there 4 her friends, and miss her date with Bette. And Bette has sometime to think of the many ways she can make it up to Tina…..POST SOON!!!!!!!

    16. Hey I agree with kg LOL! Now it’s the time that Tina see real Bette OMG! payback is a bitch Bette your really deceived that LOL! go Tina Thanks Please continue post soon.

    18. Uhoh. . you’re not posting for a couple days? NOOOOOO!!! Please post again soon, I love this story! They can get over this, Tina just has a shit-load going through her head right now.

    19. OOh, that was sooooo good! I loved it!!! Thanks! I know Tina will eventually come around…but, I think it was great the way that she let Bette know what it’s like to be on the receiving end of a real biotch! LOL! CAn’t wait ’til your next post!!!!

    21. Can Tina get any more dramatic than this? Yes, Porter was an ass that day; but her actions since then has shown Tina just how soft and caring Bette can really be.

      Also, Tina wants to be mad that Bette didnt recognize her as the person that spilled the smoothie on her; yet its ok for her to use her eyesight as an excuse. Just because she couldnt see Bette clearly doesnt mean Bette’s voice had changed.

    24. What Bette did was cruel and inappropriate however, we all do and say things sometimes that do not reflect who we really are. Tina was a bit overboard. But then again….her stress level is elevated after hearing about Vanessa, much like Bette’s stress level was at the time of the accident. Maybe Tina should take that into consideration. Hope Tina gives her a second chance. Very good story.

    25. well i have to agree in part with Tina Bette deserve that her behavior was awful and terrible and if wasnt Tina it will be with someone else and that person will never get an “im sorry” Bette have to learn to respect somebody elses feeling BUT Tina was to tough too and hope they could talk and try to get through this mis­under­standing..great chapter as always please post soon!!!!

    28. Did I miss something? If I remember correctly, the chapter with everyone at Bette’s house already had them discovering who they were… when Tina was on her way to the bathroom and Bette was coming out of her bedroom, they nearly bumped into each other and said about crashing into one another one the street earlier that morning….? Have I missed something?
      That was quite some over-reaction from Tina! Christ! Anger management number on speed dial I think.

      -Dix

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