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    Just One Dance

    Story written on October 9, 2006 by Lamentamini.
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    Bette/Tina – “When the Stars Go Blue”

    Laughing with your pretty mouth
    Laughing with your broken eyes
    Laughing with your lover’s tongue
    In a lullaby

    Where do you go when you’re lonely
    Where do you go when you’re blue
    Where do you go when you’re lonely
    I’ll follow you
    When the stars go blue

    The two former lovers ceased all movement and remained locked in an embrace of the arms and eyes. Bette, as always, revealed her soul to Tina through her eyes as while Tina listened to the lyrics as if they were Bette’s own words, saying everything she needed to know. Tina gingerly lifted her right hand to Bette’s left cheek, revelling in the smoothness that had always existed there which caused Bette to press Tina as closely to her as possible. As the final chords of the song played on, unknown to either of the two women, their lips softly pressed together in not a fiery passionate kiss, but a kiss of purity, love, and remembrance.

    Suddenly the beginning of "Real Good Man" blared over the sound system and shattered the tender moment. Both women were clearly shaken up at the realization of where the dance had taken them.

    "I have to go," Tina said with a tremble in her voice.

    "I’m sorry. I swear that wasn’t…"

    "I know," Tina said as she placed her hand over Bette’s lips to silence her.

    "Well I guess I should go before someone calls the law on us for disturbing the peace, huh?" Bette said with a weak laugh. Tina nodded.

    Bette and Tina stood staring at each other awkwardly for a moment before meeting for a gentle hug. When they separated they gave each other a little shy smile.

    "You better get inside. You’re already soaked to the bone and stand a good chance at catching a cold," Bette said. Again, Tina nodded then turned to walk toward her front door as Bette ran to the driver side door and jerked it open to turn down the volume before climbing inside.

    Tina turned back around. "Bette!"

    Bette stopped and stood back up. "Yes?"

    "I’ll follow you, too."

    Bette smiled at Tina and nodded. Tina started once again for the front door then turned again for a final time.

    "Oh, and Bette?"

    "Yeah?"

    "I’ll call you tomorrow," Tina said with a smile then blushed.

    Bette’s smile grew even wider. "Okay. Goodnight, Tina!"

    "Goodnight!"

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    5. Biased, that’s kinda the point. I hadn’t intended to make this an actual story. That doesn’t mean I won’t though. I just preferred to leave it open at the end for the dreamers out there. :)

    7. Great story Lamentamini. I hope you will reconsider and write more chaps ? It was heartfelt, sad and promising. I felt like there might be hope for the two of them still ? Maybe you could help them to reconnect because I don’t think S4 will help in that department. Thanks for the post.

    10. Now I know that you love Tina and we all know that Tina belongs with Bette, so I do hope that when Tina calls Bette tomorrow that she is going to say that I am following you and not him come take me home. I am looking forward to a next chapter of this little story.

    11. “…for two women who were only meant to be friends at best”…yeah right…I ain’t buying that and hopefully when you continue this story (hint…hint) you won’t buy into it either. Lamentamini…you have done it again…you are such the writer you…I hope you continue this story and give us a happy ending.

    12. Ok, so what do you mean it’s meant to be a stand-alone ? This is just not possible, Lament. Not only is it very good, but it’s also very promising, you can’t just stop here. Ok, so what can we do to make you change your mind and keep on writing ? Pleeeeaaaase Lamentamini, don’t stop !

    17. Very, very nice, Lament! You can write a touching love story–ya got range, kid! Tugged at my TiBette heartstrings, most certainly. It was so very telling that Tina never directly said she was in love with “Bacne”! I’d love to see you continue this, and very soon!

    18. Great, great, great!!! I usually don’t read fanfics that take place after season 3, but this is one of the few exceptions! I loved it, I think precisely because of what’s left unsaid! You gave us the most important, and the rest is, as you said, left to the reader’s imagination. And mine is going wild! Thanks, Lament!

    19. that was great Lament! so beautifully written. If I may request additional chapters, that would be good. ut i do agree that some things are better left unsaid.

    22. We could fill in the blanks but I hate that. Were visual people and need to read that it actually happened. So in other words we need the rest of the story with the happy ending we’ve all just produced in our heads. Loved it, you could just imagine those two dancing in the rain. Why doesn’t this stuff happen on the show?

    23. Aw…. that’s kinda painful. See, I WANT to see a happy ending, but I think my dreamer’s eye have been affected by that damn IC because I only see Tina and Henry. ::shudder:: However, I think it’s safe to guess this makes for a happier ending. Hope you consider continuing ’cause this is freakin’ amazing.

    25. I love Ryan Adams’ version, too. I also play it in a loop. This chapter has potential to be expanded. Can they get together? They have that connection. Very heartfelt. PPS.

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