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    Just The Girl 2.0 – Chapter Nine (based loosely on HYD: Returns)

    CHAPTER NINE: Secrets, Lies and Deception

     

     

    Previously..

     

    Successfully pressing the send button, Bette looked up from her hiding her cell phone inside her purse and came face to face with the newest arrival. Her brows jumped to her forehead in surprise, she wasn’t expecting to see a looker tonight. No offense to the man who was supposed to be TPR Hotels’ savior, but he surely didn’t look like someone who would have the right genes to be responsible for the beauty gliding towards the seat across from her. The girl looked to be about her age with big green eyes and silky red hair that cascaded down to her shoulders like a fiery ocean. Though Tina would always be her standard for beauty, this girl was a stunner, she would have to admit. Realizing that she must be gawking judging from the amused expression on the redhead’s face, she cleared her throat and flashed one of her dazzling smiles – trying to cover up for her momentary lapse.

     

    “Hi, I’m Bette Porter.” She extended a hand over the bread basket and the glasses of wine between them.

     

    “Jill Grisham.” The girl smiled back and took Bette’s hand in hers for a brief yet firm handshake. “It’s been a long time. Its nice to finally see you again..”

     

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    “Again?” Bette brows met in a frown, showcasing her cluelessness to the full. She didn’t even know that they had met before – damn, and she prided herself on having a sharp memory too. “Have we met?”

     

    “Yes, we have.. a couple of times in the past actually..” Jill answered slowly, studying the brunette’s face to check if she was pulling her leg and feigning ignorance. She was expecting the heiress to break out into a playful grin, but she was met with a look of pure confusion instead. “You really don’t remember me?” She asked a second later, tilting her head to the side, a small smile tugging her lips upward in a mixture bewilderment and slight disbelief.

     

    Should I? Bette gave a lopsided grin which, in her opinion, might’ve resembled a grimace. Oh God, please don’t tell me that you were one of my victims in Redwind.. she gulped uncomfortably and fidgeted on her seat. If Jill was anything like what Kelly Wentworth was to her in her past, then this deal with Genesis was destined to end up in the shitter too. “No.. I’m sorry..” She answered after a moment when her mind drew a blank. No Jill Grisham stored in her memory banks, unfortunately. She couldn’t even ask her father for a subtle hint – he was too busy talking business with William to clue her in.

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    1. Exactly how did Eric Walker die? Is he the body that went flying out the window a few post earlier? I feel sorry for both Bette and Tina. Bette is doing what her father wanted while she is with Jill, but on the other hand she is keeping her therapy meetings from Tina. Tina is working herself silly trying to do something nice for her girlfriend. So, in the next post Tina will become jealous over Jill. Please don’t let them break up. Good luck with the studying and test.

    2. love this story… and i agree with pattifloatn… i hope both bette and tina come clean and tell each other what is going on… and don’t let them break up… love alice… i hope tina doesn’t really spill something hot on her… pps

    3. “She knows Bette will kill us if she finds out that we didn’t erase all the copies we’ve made of that video.” That was great! Had me rolflmao! I understand the only way to introduce drama into a story like this is to create a flaw in the characters that would lead to it, and the “keeping things from each” is the best way to do it. As for the gibson, it can be expensive but I think I would have cried over any guitar. I’m not the best musician, but playing is so theraputic. If you play an intrument you know what I’m talking about. Okay I’m getting outta control with the novel of a comment. Thanks for the post, classic as always.

    4. Okay, first, your hiatus leaves me fidgeting, as in ;) Second, this has drama written all over it. Cant imagine how Tina after working very hard will react to seeing Bette with Jill. And Bettes hiding thing no matter how insignificant they are, its not a good recipe for any relationship.

    5. First of all good luck with your exams! I know the feeling. Mine are in the middle of June and I am very nervous. The chapter was amazing. I love your humor! But I still worry about Sam and Tina’ s reaction to Bette’ s secrets. Anyway… I adore your story very much and I’ m glad that you won’ t mess with their relationship (like IC did) as you said. Have a nice week. Kisses

    6. Whoa. It’s a really unfortunate coincidence about Jill’s deceased husband. Bette has absolutely got to let Tina and her friends in on what’s troubling her. Everything is going to start unraveling unless she does. Small misunderstandings have a way of spiraling out of control… Tina is going to totally earn those tips tonight, but I wonder if she’ll actually accept the money, or start plotting revenge on 3/4 of F4? Great chapter (missed the boxing as it was pay per view and I’m cheap, and after all the non-stop hype about Hatton, I think they didn’t have much to say about him losing.), thanks for 25 pages of great storytelling. (I love long chaps!) Good luck with studying, I’m sure you’ll ace the exams. Post when you can. Cheers!

    7. Oh friend…Well, first off GOOD LUCK and enjoy Canada if you can! O the selfish side, hiatus means :(..hmmm”…”And this drama UGH…so good!!! YO know I can’t wait..the confrontation now thats goota happen with Sam & Bette..and OMG Tina & Jill!! Tina will eat her ALIVE…back to rehab for her!And if Bette thinks she’s stressed out now……As always this had that great balance of humor and drama..thank you and stay in touch..

    8. OMG, this is not going to end well. Tina’s secret is fine and she has a good reason. Bette, well she’s in trouble and deserves it for not coming clean to Tina…if she loves her like she says she does then a secret that huge would/should be told/shared!!!

    9. I’m sorry. So very very sorry. I did a fan fic Rip Von Winkle. Anyway— NO, I love YOUR stories MORE!!!!!!!!!!! I still have no ide how you manage to pull me in. C’mon. I’ve spent my entire life avoiding people like F4. I might not mind bullies if they were as clever, entertaining, and imaginative as the bullies you have created for your story. Back to the subject. I don’t know how you can so easily blend absurdity, intrigue, humor, and poignancy. Watching Bette cope with consequences of her past behavior is touching. I love your Bette and I feel so badly that she bears her burdens alone. As for you, good luck with your studies. I know an insider and have learned that your test will have an essay question: analyze the most effective drugs that can be given to treat a fictional character. Pick Alice.

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