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    La Mer PT 9

    Story written on September 9, 2006 by New Dawn Fades.
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    “Shane always knows what to say.”

     

     

    She is trying so hard. But I could see she was cracking. We haven’t talked much in the weeks leading to her dad’s death. She came home and slept on her couch and was gone before I woke. And I don’t blame her. I was working out on my own and I was doing well. I called mom and she got me a plane ticket.

     

     

     

    We got back home….Shane’s home and I helped her fall asleep. I just sang to her hummed really till she feel asleep. I packed my one bag and I left a note.

     

     

     

     

    Shane, I have never nor do I think I will ever meet someone like you, your love for life, the smooth effortless way you are, the grace, the softness you don’t want me to think you have. I know it’s been a short time and a weird time we had together and most people don’t ever have that. I am sorry for your loss, sorry for adding to it, so sorry. I am pretty sure that love is not enough for you right now and …well I’ll say it anyway but I love you. And so I set you free.

     

     

    Carmen.

     

     

     

     

     

     

    La Mer

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

    Ch 16

     

     

     

     

     

     

    You know how you cry to the point of exhaustion. Well that was me. Watching my dad get worse and worse as the days ticked by, well it fucking sucks. And I reach over to look for her my light, the only thing that made me feel just a little better and I find a piece of paper. So I read it and I smell it and I read it again.  And I was wondering when she would leave. They always leave. She is gong home. Back to California.

     

     

     

    And what does she mean love is not enough?

     

     

    So I sat there note in hand, smell of her in my sheets, on her pillow. My heart breaking, I missed her. I love her and she is gone. The door knocking it makes me go. I open and find Sara and she is drunk and crying. I hug her cause she loved my dad. And he loved her. And I use to love her. But I love Carmen now.

     

     

     

    “Ah Shane, he was so cool to me and I treated you like shit, and I fucked up our whole thing. “

     

     

     

    “Sara it’s all in the past. It doesn’t matter now.”

     

    “It does, seeing you with that to her girl, I love you Shane. I’m not afraid anymore, seeing what happened to Gabe….knowing how short life is…please Shane forgive me…we can work it out. I promise Betty Ford, 12 steps I’ll do anything….”

     

     

     

    I can’t do this right now. I need to go find Carmen. I need to tell her I love and ….

     

     

     

    “Shane are you even listing to me?”

     

     

     

    “Look Sara, I …..I don’t love you anymore, I love Carmen and I need to get to her, I need to talk to her and she went back home…”

     

     

     

    “I am baring my fucking soul here and all you can do is talk about Carmen?”

     

     

     

    “Your drunk and upset and I have to go….so sleep it off…..what is it now?”

     

     

     

    There is another knock at the door.

     

     

     

    “Shane McCutcheon?”

     

     

     

    “Yeah…”

     

     

     

    “This is for you all you have to do is sign…here….and here.”

     

     

     

    “Thanks.”

     

     

    I tear open the envelop and see the name of dad’s construction company. It read that I was sole owner and the company was worth a lot of money….how many zero’s are in a million?

     

     

     

     

    Seven……

     

     

     

     

    To be concluded……

     

     

     

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    2. What the hell?!! You can’t stop right there, Baby-girl!!!! I’m sooooo lovin’ this!!! Hope Shane gets to Carmen and doesn’t let that ‘Gold diggin’ Bitch’ get into ha stash. LMFAO!!! Anyways, please continue and soon!!!! Like always from me, LYLAS ;-p

    5. Ah to be concluded, well all good things must come to an end. I hope Shane catches up with Carmen, and to have Sarah know that she inherited millions and don’t want her should be liberating for Shane.

    6. My heart goes out to Shane–the loss of the two most important people in her life, and then the toxic ex, there to make a drunken spectacle of herself. Nice. Real nice.

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