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    Laid Up: Another Season 3 – Chapter Three

    Story written on April 2, 2006 by PortiaOnly.
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    Shane and Carmen have alone time at home, Alice gets caught, Helena seeks out a new venture, and Bette and Tina spend time together.

     

    Shane looked down at Carmen’s ass and the usual bronze color had a bright pink tint to it.  Her butt was hot to the touch and that made Shane as wet as she’d ever been.  She had never played this sort of game, never wanted to, but Carmen made everything fun and normal, and totally sexy.  Shane was alternating now between slaps and long caresses, moving lower and lower.  She noticed that Carmen had spread her legs giving Shane access.  Shane slipped her hand between her lover’s legs and discovered that the effect this game was having on her was having a similar result on Carmen.  “Carmen, you feel this?”  Shane asked as she sloshed her fingers in the wetness. 

     

    “Fuck me, Shane.  Fuck me now.”

     

    Mark’s eyes grew larger and so did the front of his pants.  He groaned, but kept his ear to the door.

     

    “Shane, baby.  That’s it.  Shane.  Shane.  Shane.  Shane.”

     

    The slapping had long ago ended and Mark could only use his imagination when suddenly he heard what sounded like a body falling onto the floor.  He was startled, but heard Carmen and Shane laugh for a few moments and then, nothing but panting and the sound of Carmen enjoying a good fucking.

     

    “Hazme tuya!”  Make me yours.  Carmen groaned.

     

    “Ah, Carmen.  You feel good, baby.”

     

    “Metemelo…mas, mas.”  Give it to me.  More, more.

     

    He heard Carmen begging Shane to keep doing what she was doing and he wondered what exactly that was and he wondered about the expression on Shane’s face at that moment—was she removed from the scene as she had been in many of the videos he had shot, was it a look of determination as she worked toward getting Carmen off, or was it a look of desire and anticipation.  Mark was constantly watching Shane, trying to figure her out, wanting to understand her, so he knew her looks, and the one he had seen when she looked at Carmen was always desire, need, and lust and it was always barely controlled.

     

    * * * * *

    Jenny was halfway between LAX and O’Hare airports.  As crazy as she had been feeling in Los Angeles—the skanky strip club, the cutting, the craziness with Tim and Marina and Gene and Robin, even her carnival nightmares were just little bumps in the road when she thought about what would be greeting her in Skokie.  It was a mistake to go back to the place that was the nucleus of this abyss she swam in, but that was exactly why she had to go there. Throughout the flight, she had been clutching the airline’s barf bag, but she couldn’t make herself throw up.  She wanted to.  She wanted to purge herself of everything that was making her crazy, but it wasn’t going to be that easy.  Jenny was clear in her mind—she would stay in the Midwest, in Skokie for however long it took.  That goodbye at the airport might very well have been the final goodbye.  She didn’t see herself going back to LA.

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    1. Just got caught up with your stsory today and it is very interesting. After reading what Amanda and B&TForever said, do you really mean there were spoilers about Tina being in a coma for all of S3, if so, that would explain a lot. Oh God, I hope that is true, maybe S4 will be about getting us back to the real loving couple. What a thrill. thanks for the post.

    2. Please have Tina wake up and the entire 3rd season would have been a dream for all of the characters. Great story but Tina in a coma is scaring the hell out of me. Too close to the real thing for me. Please, Please let her wake up to a loving Bette.

    3. I ran my mouse over the ‘next post by this author’ link, desperately hoping for another chapter. I love the length and denseness of your chapters. I wonder if writing them is as pleasurable as it is to read them. Does Bette ever put Angelica in Tina’s arms? I’m sure they both need the bond of touch. Thanks!

    4. By the by, does anyone else think that Tony Soprano’s coma was an ill-advised choice? I wonder if The Sopranos has jumped the shark with that one. It better pick up or HBO will be going the way of SHO in my household – kaput! Anyone?

    5. OMG! Your story is great, I just started chap. one today been reading the rest straight through. Alice walking in Shane’s room & seeing the handprint on Carmen’s ass was hilarious. Keep up the great work.

    7. I really like your writting, but I would prefer Tina to wake up or atleast give some reaction to Bette. This must be devestating for Bette. I love Tina and Bette, and i hated what happened in season 3, but they are still my favourite. Make it all better, please!

    8. i love this… i have said tina is in a coma… but please don’t let her stay there too long… oh and i love alice… i could just see her walking into a room… ok stop fucking… and then just sit on the bed… too funny…please continue

    10. Love the way you write Sharmen, that’s one hella sexy scene! I can really picture Shane and Carmen behaving that way. HOT! Please keep it up:)

    12. Your sharmen are frisky bunnies…, oh boohoo, did I say I was sorry to see jenny catch a plane?? sorry, but pls don’t bring a max into this bunch…One happy couple on the road to having more happy couples..right??? WAKE UP TINA!!!Tks Portia, love this season your creating!!!!

    13. Portia…This is really well written. Lots of detail and description, good dialogue and the comments and tone are spot on for each character. Keep going.

    14. i guess you’re going with the rumors that season 3 was all dreamed up by tina who was in coma…i like it…eventhough i would like her to wake up soon

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