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Laid Up: Another Season 3 – Chapter Three
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“Carmen, I like this shirt.” Shane shook her head.
“Then you can get me a new one.” Carmen stepped back. “No, I guess you don’t want this. Never mind.” Carmen turned, but Shane reached out and grabbed her and when she did, it was by the shirt.
“Uh-uh.”
In the hallway, Mark heard their conversation. His ear was to the door and he leaned in more to hear the sound of Carmen’s shirt being ripped.
“Now what?” Shane had ripped the shirt down the middle and it hung from Carmen’s shoulders and down her back, revealing full and luscious breasts. She leaned back on locked elbows and took in the view. “God, you’re fine.”
“And?” Carmen stared directly into Shane’s eyes challenging her to take those next steps.
Shane reached up and palmed Carmen’s breasts, then slowly moved down her chest, sliding lower over her abdomen, and then she unzipped Carmen’s Daisy Dukes’ jeans shorts. She slid them down her smooth, tanned legs leaving Carmen in a tiny, lime green thong. With her hand’s on Carmen’s hips, Shane jerked Carmen closer, moved her face against Carmen’s stomach and kissed her before using her teeth at the waistband of the thong and tearing it with her mouth. Carmen’s head tilted back and she laughed, then she looked at Shane and frowned. “I loved this thong. I can’t believe you ripped it apart.” She pouted.
“I’ll give you something to cry about.” Shane pulled Carmen down and over her lap; Carmen’s ass making a perfect target for her hand. For a moment, Shane hesitated. Carmen turned her head and the seductive smile she had on her face was all the push Shane needed.
Mark stood in the hallway, brushed his hair out of his eyes with his hand, then ran that hand over his mouth as he listened. He heard a slap of a hand against skin, then a small moan, another slap, a groan, a slap, a grunt, a slap, and he heard Carmen’s voice melt and turn to liquid as she moaned again and said, “Oh, baby.” There was another slap and soon he heard the slaps and the response to them mixing and no longer reacting to each other–repeated slaps and at the same time, Carmen panting and crying. He felt movement in the front of his pants when he heard Shane say, “Are you going to be my good girl?” and Carmen groaned, “A little harder, Shane. Harder.” Slapping, slapping, slapping. This went on for several minutes and Mark was getting more and more uncomfortable thinking about what these two lesbians were doing on the other side of the room.
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Just got caught up with your stsory today and it is very interesting. After reading what Amanda and B&TForever said, do you really mean there were spoilers about Tina being in a coma for all of S3, if so, that would explain a lot. Oh God, I hope that is true, maybe S4 will be about getting us back to the real loving couple. What a thrill. thanks for the post.
Please have Tina wake up and the entire 3rd season would have been a dream for all of the characters. Great story but Tina in a coma is scaring the hell out of me. Too close to the real thing for me. Please, Please let her wake up to a loving Bette.
I ran my mouse over the ‘next post by this author’ link, desperately hoping for another chapter. I love the length and denseness of your chapters. I wonder if writing them is as pleasurable as it is to read them. Does Bette ever put Angelica in Tina’s arms? I’m sure they both need the bond of touch. Thanks!
By the by, does anyone else think that Tony Soprano’s coma was an ill-advised choice? I wonder if The Sopranos has jumped the shark with that one. It better pick up or HBO will be going the way of SHO in my household – kaput! Anyone?
OMG! Your story is great, I just started chap. one today been reading the rest straight through. Alice walking in Shane’s room & seeing the handprint on Carmen’s ass was hilarious. Keep up the great work.
Sharmen is sexy. I laughed out loud when Alice saw the handprint on Carmen’s ass. too funny.
I really like your writting, but I would prefer Tina to wake up or atleast give some reaction to Bette. This must be devestating for Bette. I love Tina and Bette, and i hated what happened in season 3, but they are still my favourite. Make it all better, please!
i love this… i have said tina is in a coma… but please don’t let her stay there too long… oh and i love alice… i could just see her walking into a room… ok stop fucking… and then just sit on the bed… too funny…please continue
I understand your attempt to make since of IC’s debakle of S3, but PLEASE let Tina wake up soon. She will have a long journey as it is.
Love the way you write Sharmen, that’s one hella sexy scene! I can really picture Shane and Carmen behaving that way. HOT! Please keep it up:)
Hey great story. That´s the first chapter I´ve read of your sory and I really like it. Especially the Sharmen parts!Please go on sooon!
Your sharmen are frisky bunnies…, oh boohoo, did I say I was sorry to see jenny catch a plane?? sorry, but pls don’t bring a max into this bunch…One happy couple on the road to having more happy couples..right??? WAKE UP TINA!!!Tks Portia, love this season your creating!!!!
Portia…This is really well written. Lots of detail and description, good dialogue and the comments and tone are spot on for each character. Keep going.
i guess you’re going with the rumors that season 3 was all dreamed up by tina who was in coma…i like it…eventhough i would like her to wake up soon
This is wonderfully written. Thank you!
I like this. a radio is great.Music ,Alice voice on the radio a tape of the baby laughing or crying. anything. thanks