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Laid Up: Another Season 3 – Chapter Three
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“Dana and Alice?” Kit continued with the schedule.
“Honey, do you want to do it together or separately?”
“I guess separately,” Dana commented, then sipped her coffee.
“Why don’t you want us to go together?”
“Okay, Al, together. Whatever.” Dana looked straight ahead, focusing on Angelica.
“No, if you don’t want to.”
Kit rolled her eyes. “You two decide and call me later. Baby sis, I’ll stop by before 11 and drop off your lunch, but I’ll visit with Tina in the afternoon between 3 and 4. That good?”
“Thanks, Kit.”
“What about Helena?” Alice asked in an almost fearful voice.
“What…about…her?” Bette’s lips were tight and pursed holding back an explosion she felt building whenever Helena’s name was mentioned.
“Bette, I know you hate her guts,” Alice began. Bette stared at her. “It’s just that Helena and Tina did have a relationship and I know for a fact that she cares about Tina and her welfare. Helena’s in my yoga class and do you know she asks about her every time I see her? She does. She wants to visit her.”
“Al, how come it’s okay for Helena and Tina to remain friends, but other exes can’t.”
“One, Dane—Tina isn’t really in any condition to have a relationship with Helena.” She looked at Bette in apology, but continued. “Two, Tina and Helena don’t have any unfinished business just like Bette and I don’t, whereas some exes apparently are forever unfinished. Three…”
“That’s okay.” Dana stood. “I’ve gotta meet my trainer at the gym. Talk to you later.” She started to walk away, but got less than a foot when her afterthought came to the forefront of her brain. She bent to kiss Alice goodbye. “See you tonight.” Dana turned and jogged off.
“Are you, guys okay?” Bette’s brow was furrowed. She had so recently been a part of this politeness in a relationship and knew it wasn’t a good sign.
“Yeah, great. Great. So what about Helena?”
Kit looked at Bette wondering what would come out of her sister’s mouth. “Fine. As long as I’m not there. Angelica’s starting a newborn play group. It’s from 9 – 10 every Monday, Wednesday, and Friday.”
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Just got caught up with your stsory today and it is very interesting. After reading what Amanda and B&TForever said, do you really mean there were spoilers about Tina being in a coma for all of S3, if so, that would explain a lot. Oh God, I hope that is true, maybe S4 will be about getting us back to the real loving couple. What a thrill. thanks for the post.
Please have Tina wake up and the entire 3rd season would have been a dream for all of the characters. Great story but Tina in a coma is scaring the hell out of me. Too close to the real thing for me. Please, Please let her wake up to a loving Bette.
I ran my mouse over the ‘next post by this author’ link, desperately hoping for another chapter. I love the length and denseness of your chapters. I wonder if writing them is as pleasurable as it is to read them. Does Bette ever put Angelica in Tina’s arms? I’m sure they both need the bond of touch. Thanks!
By the by, does anyone else think that Tony Soprano’s coma was an ill-advised choice? I wonder if The Sopranos has jumped the shark with that one. It better pick up or HBO will be going the way of SHO in my household – kaput! Anyone?
OMG! Your story is great, I just started chap. one today been reading the rest straight through. Alice walking in Shane’s room & seeing the handprint on Carmen’s ass was hilarious. Keep up the great work.
Sharmen is sexy. I laughed out loud when Alice saw the handprint on Carmen’s ass. too funny.
I really like your writting, but I would prefer Tina to wake up or atleast give some reaction to Bette. This must be devestating for Bette. I love Tina and Bette, and i hated what happened in season 3, but they are still my favourite. Make it all better, please!
i love this… i have said tina is in a coma… but please don’t let her stay there too long… oh and i love alice… i could just see her walking into a room… ok stop fucking… and then just sit on the bed… too funny…please continue
I understand your attempt to make since of IC’s debakle of S3, but PLEASE let Tina wake up soon. She will have a long journey as it is.
Love the way you write Sharmen, that’s one hella sexy scene! I can really picture Shane and Carmen behaving that way. HOT! Please keep it up:)
Hey great story. That´s the first chapter I´ve read of your sory and I really like it. Especially the Sharmen parts!Please go on sooon!
Your sharmen are frisky bunnies…, oh boohoo, did I say I was sorry to see jenny catch a plane?? sorry, but pls don’t bring a max into this bunch…One happy couple on the road to having more happy couples..right??? WAKE UP TINA!!!Tks Portia, love this season your creating!!!!
Portia…This is really well written. Lots of detail and description, good dialogue and the comments and tone are spot on for each character. Keep going.
i guess you’re going with the rumors that season 3 was all dreamed up by tina who was in coma…i like it…eventhough i would like her to wake up soon
This is wonderfully written. Thank you!
I like this. a radio is great.Music ,Alice voice on the radio a tape of the baby laughing or crying. anything. thanks