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Laid Up: Another Season 3 – Chapter Three
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“Okay. I’ve gotta run. I’ll call you guys when I get to Chicago.” Jenny waved at Carmen, hugged Shane and gave Mark a one-armed hug. “Bye.” Jenny turned and made her way into the terminal. At the glass sliding door, she muttered to herself, “Bye, Mark, you big ass.”
Mark waited to see Jenny disappear into the world of the airport, then turned to Shane and Carmen. “Where are you guys going now?”
“Home.”
“We don’t know,” Carmen said dismissively and hopped back in the car. Shane walked to the driver’s side and got in.
“Later, Mark.”
Shane turned the ignition and steered the car back into the airport traffic. “You don’t have to give Mark all that attitude, Carmen.”
“How can you stand him?”
“Let it go.”
“He taped you, Shane. You know, Mark isn’t finished with you. He’s just waiting for a chance to do somethin’ else.”
“He is not.”
“He is. He’s like one of those guys who beats his wife and then promises he won’t do it again. He’s gonna beat you down, baby.”
“I don’t think so,” Shane said ending the conversation.
* * * * *
After Dana left the gym and a tough but excellent cardio workout, she drove back to her place and checked her mail. She went through each envelope delaying her departure. There was some heavy stuff going on with Alice. Since their talk at the Heart concert, Alice had calmed down and was willing to let their love move naturally, but lately she had been clingy and impossible to communicate with. Every activity that Dana did that didn’t include Alice was a direct punch in the stomach as far as Alice was concerned. If Dana locked the door to the bathroom, they’d spend fifteen minutes out of their life discussing why Dana was shutting her out. Dana was getting more than a little sick of it. And Dana didn’t like the idea of hiding her friendship with Lara. She had even lied to Alice about her choice of foods at The Planet. Twice she had ordered things not on the menu, but Lara had made them per her request. Alice didn’t like it and threatened to tell Kit that Lara wasn’t following her menu.
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Just got caught up with your stsory today and it is very interesting. After reading what Amanda and B&TForever said, do you really mean there were spoilers about Tina being in a coma for all of S3, if so, that would explain a lot. Oh God, I hope that is true, maybe S4 will be about getting us back to the real loving couple. What a thrill. thanks for the post.
Please have Tina wake up and the entire 3rd season would have been a dream for all of the characters. Great story but Tina in a coma is scaring the hell out of me. Too close to the real thing for me. Please, Please let her wake up to a loving Bette.
I ran my mouse over the ‘next post by this author’ link, desperately hoping for another chapter. I love the length and denseness of your chapters. I wonder if writing them is as pleasurable as it is to read them. Does Bette ever put Angelica in Tina’s arms? I’m sure they both need the bond of touch. Thanks!
By the by, does anyone else think that Tony Soprano’s coma was an ill-advised choice? I wonder if The Sopranos has jumped the shark with that one. It better pick up or HBO will be going the way of SHO in my household – kaput! Anyone?
OMG! Your story is great, I just started chap. one today been reading the rest straight through. Alice walking in Shane’s room & seeing the handprint on Carmen’s ass was hilarious. Keep up the great work.
Sharmen is sexy. I laughed out loud when Alice saw the handprint on Carmen’s ass. too funny.
I really like your writting, but I would prefer Tina to wake up or atleast give some reaction to Bette. This must be devestating for Bette. I love Tina and Bette, and i hated what happened in season 3, but they are still my favourite. Make it all better, please!
i love this… i have said tina is in a coma… but please don’t let her stay there too long… oh and i love alice… i could just see her walking into a room… ok stop fucking… and then just sit on the bed… too funny…please continue
I understand your attempt to make since of IC’s debakle of S3, but PLEASE let Tina wake up soon. She will have a long journey as it is.
Love the way you write Sharmen, that’s one hella sexy scene! I can really picture Shane and Carmen behaving that way. HOT! Please keep it up:)
Hey great story. That´s the first chapter I´ve read of your sory and I really like it. Especially the Sharmen parts!Please go on sooon!
Your sharmen are frisky bunnies…, oh boohoo, did I say I was sorry to see jenny catch a plane?? sorry, but pls don’t bring a max into this bunch…One happy couple on the road to having more happy couples..right??? WAKE UP TINA!!!Tks Portia, love this season your creating!!!!
Portia…This is really well written. Lots of detail and description, good dialogue and the comments and tone are spot on for each character. Keep going.
i guess you’re going with the rumors that season 3 was all dreamed up by tina who was in coma…i like it…eventhough i would like her to wake up soon
This is wonderfully written. Thank you!
I like this. a radio is great.Music ,Alice voice on the radio a tape of the baby laughing or crying. anything. thanks