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Laid Up: Another Season 3 – Chapter Three
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Dana grabbed a protein bar from the basket on the kitchen counter and left her house. She had to face Alice.
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“Get in the house, woman,” Shane said while standing behind Carmen at the front door.
“After you…bee-atch.”
“Who you calling, bitch? You’re gonna be my bitch tonight.”
“Night isn’t even close, Shane. I guess you’ll be my bitch now.” Carmen turned around to face Shane and her hands went to the buttons on Shane’s button fly jeans.
“What are you doing?” Shane laughed. “Carmen?” Carmen unfastened all the buttons and yanked her 501s down until they rested on her calf, displaying her bare ass to everyone walking or driving down the street. “Carmen, everyone can see me.”
“That’s cause you’re not inside taking care of me, baby.”
Shane took a step forward and tripped rushing to get inside the house to her woman. No neighbors saw, but Mark’s car had pulled up and he held his foot on the brake as he stared at Shane’s tiny ass.
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Dana entered the bedroom, dropping her keys and wallet on the table beside the bed. She was surprised to see Alice fast asleep in bed. Her laptop rested in Dana’s spot and Dana picked it up to move it. When she moved it, the screen went from the Screensaver of Wonder Woman to the program Alice had been working in. What Dana saw was an image of Alice’s living room. She sat on the bed and clicked play. The video started, but then Dana rewound it a bit. She saw the footage of her and Lara talking over the meal plans and what looked like a not-so innocent exchange between the two. Dana stared at the images in shock, then pushed the laptop between them on the bed. She knelt in the bed and moved next to Alice’s ear and shouted, “Wake up!”
Alice jumped and screamed. “What? What?” She didn’t feel an earthquake, but some disaster was taking place. “What is it?”
“What the hell is this on your computer, Alice? You’ve been videotaping me secretly. Jesus Christ. What the fuck is this?”
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Just got caught up with your stsory today and it is very interesting. After reading what Amanda and B&TForever said, do you really mean there were spoilers about Tina being in a coma for all of S3, if so, that would explain a lot. Oh God, I hope that is true, maybe S4 will be about getting us back to the real loving couple. What a thrill. thanks for the post.
Please have Tina wake up and the entire 3rd season would have been a dream for all of the characters. Great story but Tina in a coma is scaring the hell out of me. Too close to the real thing for me. Please, Please let her wake up to a loving Bette.
I ran my mouse over the ‘next post by this author’ link, desperately hoping for another chapter. I love the length and denseness of your chapters. I wonder if writing them is as pleasurable as it is to read them. Does Bette ever put Angelica in Tina’s arms? I’m sure they both need the bond of touch. Thanks!
By the by, does anyone else think that Tony Soprano’s coma was an ill-advised choice? I wonder if The Sopranos has jumped the shark with that one. It better pick up or HBO will be going the way of SHO in my household – kaput! Anyone?
OMG! Your story is great, I just started chap. one today been reading the rest straight through. Alice walking in Shane’s room & seeing the handprint on Carmen’s ass was hilarious. Keep up the great work.
Sharmen is sexy. I laughed out loud when Alice saw the handprint on Carmen’s ass. too funny.
I really like your writting, but I would prefer Tina to wake up or atleast give some reaction to Bette. This must be devestating for Bette. I love Tina and Bette, and i hated what happened in season 3, but they are still my favourite. Make it all better, please!
i love this… i have said tina is in a coma… but please don’t let her stay there too long… oh and i love alice… i could just see her walking into a room… ok stop fucking… and then just sit on the bed… too funny…please continue
I understand your attempt to make since of IC’s debakle of S3, but PLEASE let Tina wake up soon. She will have a long journey as it is.
Love the way you write Sharmen, that’s one hella sexy scene! I can really picture Shane and Carmen behaving that way. HOT! Please keep it up:)
Hey great story. That´s the first chapter I´ve read of your sory and I really like it. Especially the Sharmen parts!Please go on sooon!
Your sharmen are frisky bunnies…, oh boohoo, did I say I was sorry to see jenny catch a plane?? sorry, but pls don’t bring a max into this bunch…One happy couple on the road to having more happy couples..right??? WAKE UP TINA!!!Tks Portia, love this season your creating!!!!
Portia…This is really well written. Lots of detail and description, good dialogue and the comments and tone are spot on for each character. Keep going.
i guess you’re going with the rumors that season 3 was all dreamed up by tina who was in coma…i like it…eventhough i would like her to wake up soon
This is wonderfully written. Thank you!
I like this. a radio is great.Music ,Alice voice on the radio a tape of the baby laughing or crying. anything. thanks