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Lest I Forget (17)
“It’s okay, don’t worry. Shane said that Alice was crying when she checked on her, so she’s going to try and talk to her.”
“She’s crying? Why?” I asked, starting down the hall toward the office on autopilot. The others were all in the living room laughing, but I kinda forgot they were there. The only one whose presence I was aware of was Jenny, who had grabbed my arm as I tried to walk past her.
“Dana, really, let Shane talk to her for a little while,” she pleaded softly. I sighed and finally nodded. She was right; my barging in there and demanding that Alice let me help wasn’t going to do a damn bit of good right now. Maybe Shane could figure something out; God knows I’d been trying, and all I seemed to do was make things worse.
I went back to the living room with Jenny, and I’m sure everyone had noticed that something was up. But out of respect for me or just out of a desire not to get involved, no one said anything, and I was grateful. I sat and listened to Jenny describing her next novel idea when Helena asked her, and for the life of me I had to admit that it sounded like something I’d read. I guess I kinda spaced out then, because the next thing I was aware of was the doorbell ringing. I was vaguely cognizant of Helena going to the door and taking the pizzas from the delivery guy, but immediately after (or maybe concurrently, I can’t remember now if I ever knew) I caught the sound of Alice’s sobs down the hall.
I told everyone that I’d be back, and practically sprinted down the hall to Alice’s office, Jenny at my heels. I pushed the door open and found Shane on the floor, with Alice wrapped in her arms.
“Don’t let her see this,” I heard Alice plead to Shane. Shane immediately looked at Jenny, and she wrapped her arms around my waist and tried to forcibly drag me from the room. I fought her for a minute until Shane caught my eyes, and her expression made me give up. I stopped fighting and let Jenny drag me to my room, where she sat on the bed with me as I cried.
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This is so not filler. I don’t think any of this story can be. Each small moment in their lives is adding up to the total that they are present day. I am excited that Alice will start therapy soon. That will be a big boost for her and Dana. I know I said this before, but, poor Dana! I gotta say, the image of Jenny trying to be menacing is a funny one. You did an amazing job here in detailing the emotions that Alice and Dana were going through after the Chicago trip. I am concerned for Alice. I guess the book could help her get through this time, but, it seems to be tearing her apart in so many ways right now. I love how you ended it — with Dana hearing the same voices that were there 40 years earlier. Really well done. Thank so much, MT!!
While feeling very bad for her predicament, I am grateful to find S, J & Charlie there to take care of D. Again, you did an outstanding job with this NOT a “filler”. I can totally picture the D’s emotion. Finally, we found out what depressed A so much. It was regrettable that A could not open up to D sooner. However, I can totally understand A being protective of D. Nonetheless, the scene was heart breaking with D watching A helplessly. Thank you for S & J again being there for them. I also echo MaGoose’s comment on the 40 years. The thought of their friendship lasting over a forty year span truly warms my heart. MT, by now, I have run out of superlatives on your incredible writing. You are a superb storyteller, for that, I thank you.
Hey sorry I haven’t been commenting lately, especially on this fab story! Really loved this particular chapter, it seems so real and believable its just ace! :D