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Lest I Forget (2)
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I’m sure she knew what I was doing, reminiscing like that. It was a little bit like the book she’d written after I’d come home, all those years ago. And knowing that she knew that made me love her all the more. For some unknown reason I felt the need to get everything out, and she was listening. I knew that, although most people wouldn’t have been able to tell. Then again, most people didn’t know her like I did. I knew she was with me for this little bit of calm before the storm, and as utterly heartbreaking as the whole thing was, that knowledge was a huge comfort.
I could see her pain for me in those eyes. The stroke had done nothing to diminish their depth, or the vast pools of emotion in them. There’s that old saying about the eyes being the window to the soul…well, I don’t think I’ve ever know anyone who personifies that as much as Alice has. I knew she understood what I was trying to do, and while it could never have been enough, somehow it was. At least then.
I squeezed her hand and was about to go back to the memories when there was a soft knock on the door. Gemma was back with a late lunch for me. Seeing that Alice was awake, she made some conversation with her for a minute or two while she set up a tray for me. “I’ll ask Dr. Hernandez to come in to talk to you both in a little bit,” she said quietly as she left.
I picked at my food. I couldn’t help it; I didn’t want to waste what little time I had with Alice eating. Still, I could feel her eyes fixed on me as I pushed the food around on my plate, and I knew she’d be griping about it if she could. “Fine,” I told her finally, and ate pretty quickly. Alice, apparently satisfied, stopped staring at me so hard, but she still watched me. “I’m sorry, baby. You’re missing out on some awesome mashed peas,” I told her sadly. When I looked over at her, there was laughter in her eyes, and it made me smile.
Dr. Hernandez came in not long after I’d managed to choke down the majority of my food, mostly for Al’s peace of mind. He pulled up a chair and sat with us for a little bit, talking to me about the latest world news and including Alice in the conversation as much as he could. He mentioned that he’d read her books, and spoke to her in a tone of the utmost respect, which I could see that she appreciated. She’d had some pretty hostile arguments with doctors when she thought they weren’t being respectful to their patients, and once again I was glad that Josh wasn’t that way.
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After two chapters I am in awe. You are doing a wonderful job writing this from Dana’s perspective, and I look forward to her further recounting their lives together. I somehow have a feeling I will need tissues handy…
I read this as soon as I saw it posted, but, wanted to re-read it before commenting. I really love this story and you know how I feel about your writing (although I am sorry to hear it springs from insomnia. Insomnia sucks). I love the details and the honesty with which you write — it seems so real to the characters. Things aren’t always perfect in relationships, but, if you are in the right one, you can work through it and be stronger. I guess I didn’t realize from the first chapter that Alice would be so “with it”. What a blessing to be able to say goodbye and know the person has heard it. Love the non-verbal communication the girls have after so many years together. I do have to keep reminding myself that they have had 37-38 years together because some of this is just so sad. Thanks for the great story!
Beautifully Written! Looking fwd to the next post!
this is heartbreakingly beautiful. youre such a talent!
Another beautiful chapter MT – I don’t know how you do it, but please continue
This is such a great story. I look forward to hearing more about their life together. I love the way even though Alice can’t talk you give her such a strong voice.
Wow, beautifully written as always and so realistic. People always assume that if you’re old then it’s somewhat ok when it’s your time, not really understanding that sometimes it’s worse. Thank you so much for your dedication too, means a lot :)
you made me cry! hahahah and I don’t cry much:) guess that changes now huh? hehe thanks for updating, this is a wonderful story. I don’t know what I would do if I were Dana in that situation. This is very well written, thanks! you’re awesome… PPS?;D
Thank you for this wonderful 2nd chapter.Realistic and wonderfully written as you always manage to do. I’m just in awe.And to read about their getting back together and their life together is really nice. I probably could say more about this story, but I can’t keep really form the words right now. And english not being my 1st language sucks at this point, lol.Can’t wait for the next chapter.
And again you leave me speechless. Well done! Excellent! I could go on and on with those kind of superlatives when I talk about this story. I hope the next chapter contains memories of Danish with their family. I would love to know how does two were as mums.