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Lest I Forget (29)
“She’s doing very well. Dr. Ramirez noted on here that she’ll be able to move to a private room soon, so that’s great news.” She gave me another smile and turned back to Alice. “I’ve been instructed to come back in a bit and raise the bed a little so you can get used to sitting up again, Alice. But we can leave that until after dinner. I’ll get you some juice if you want.” I was happy to see Alice immediately give a short nod. She did it easily, and if I squinted, she looked like she might be relaxing at a spa or something rather than lying in a hospital bed.
“Would you like anything?” Gemma asked, turning back to me. I was going to say that I was perfectly fine until I saw Alice’s pointed look. I realized I hadn’t had a thing in about three hours, so I shrugged.
“Some juice would be great,” I relented, and smiled at Alice’s satisfied look.
Gemma nodded and told us she’d be right back. As soon as she’d left the room, I kissed Alice’s hand. “I like her a lot.”
Al looked at me for a long moment and seemed to be considering this, but after a little while she smiled and nodded. She used her free hand to sign Kallie’s name, and then Gemma’s, and then signed the word “good.” To do that, she had to take her hand from mine, because the sign was to touch the fingers of her right hand to her lips and then to move them into her left palm. It was awkward, but she managed it and I knew what she meant on the first try.
“You’re doing really well at the signing, baby,” I told her. She just rolled her eyes at me, but I shook my head. “No, you really are. I couldn’t remember half of what you do if I tried to.”
She gave me a confused look, and I realized that for as much as I thought I’d forgotten, I was still able to understand what she said. “Just because I know what you’re saying doesn’t mean I can remember how to make the signs myself. And you’re saying really simple things now, but pretty soon you’ll be signing circles around the rest of us.”
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MT. don’t worry about the comments. Just keep writing your story. I cannot get enough of your fine writing. It just seemed so real the way you write the scenes. I felt for Kallie and am glad that she adjusted so well. It is awfully dreadful for children that young to have to ensure so much suffering. Totally understood A feeling all guilty about it. The Hawaiian trip with Helena was an excellent idea. I hope A could resolve her feelings and coming back stronger to be there for her family. THANK YOU VERY MUCH!!
Another amazing chapter, MT!! I am so glad to see Alice making small but steady progress in her recovery and that she is thinking about the future, as well. Also that she is finding so many ways to communicate non-verbally — much of it due to Dana and Alice knowing each other so well. I got some giggles from the juice thing. I’m glad Charlie is doing well, too. That will be one less thing to stress out his mothers. Alice, Dana and their friends really stepped up to adjust to Kallie’s health needs. I feel so bad for Alice. The guilt must be horrible. Thank goodness Dana took a stand to get Alice to see she was pushing her family away. I hope the trip will help her get recharged and get her head straight. Wonderful story and meticulously written. Thanks, MT!!