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Let it be – chapter five
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“You were “he threw a battered thesaurus into the box.
“I was off my face “
“We all do it now and again “
“Yes – I took my own problems out on you – you didn’t deserve it “
“Bette “
“Yeah “
“How long was it going on?”
“Marina and Jenny – we found out about a month ago “
“A month – she’s only been back a month “
“I think it started pretty much straight away “
“When?”
“When you invited us all to dinner – your friends and Tina and I “
“Gee – why the hell didn’t I see it? I am a total mug “
“No “
“I feel it “
“You are conditioned to keep your eye on men buzzing around your girlfriend – not women. I had a friend at college and her boyfriend – granted he wasn’t the sharpest pencil in the set – he didn’t know for two years that his girlfriend was sleeping with her female room-mate. “
“Did you catch them – Marina and Jenny I mean?”
“Marina has a reputation “Bette said delicately
“She has a girlfriend – I mean – you and Tina don’t cheat on each other “
“No – Tina and me don’t – but couples are different – and not just because they are gay or straight. Marina and her partner have been together a long time and they both get involved in messy things like that. I am sorry that you found out the way you did “
“My dad was always cheating on my mom and I hated him for it “Tim sank onto the bed and stared ahead of him clutching another battered book in his hands. Bette sat beside him. “I cannot stand infidelity – I would rather she stole all my money or thrashed my place but not fucked someone else “
“My dad cheated on my mom too – and I still don’t think that I have forgiven him “
Tim laughed “Is that why you’re gay? “
“No – I’m gay because I like women and they turn me on. I like men and I can see that they are handsome – but – well there isn’t a grrr factor – you know – when you see a woman in a nice dress or she’s got a cute ass – and you just think ggrrrr to yourself “
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I like when Bette opens up and I like seeing Tina comfort her. Good thing that Tim doesn’t seem to be all too upset at Bette. Jenny is gone…yay!
Ally ummmm just WOW, what else can say:)PPS
I agree with everyone else Ally. I think the talk between B&T and the way Tina used to allay Bette’s fears were just brillant. I suppose that awaited weekend with your loved one has inspired you a great deal, cause even though I always love your writing, I really think that you’ve outdone yourself with this chapter. Well done! Now, don’t we all wish that the end of Jennny Schecter had been as simple and quick as boarding a plan to Whogivesafuck… Thanks for a great update!
This made me happy. Glad Bette both shared her fears with Tina..and really apologized to Tim. I hope you give Tim a nice girl in this fic. I actually really liked him on the show. PPS.
Fantastic, Ally. Love how you’ve addressed Bette’s insecurities and allowed her to accept Tina’s help in disarming them. I’ve enjoyed all your chapters this week and hope that you enjoy your weekend!
that was great, i loved them talking and reconnecting, it was so lovely and sweet, thanks Ally you are amazing honey, post soon.All my love.
This was nice…love when Tina takes charge and Bette listens to her
Oh Ally, you wrote the story that is every Tibette lovers dream and every Jenny haters dream too. very very lovely talk between Tina and Bette., Enjoy your time with your sweetie.
Oh my… I so loved Tina right now. She did a great job calming Bette… Grats Ally… ;)
So does that really put it to rest? Or will it hide in the shadows to nag at the most inconvenient times? Seems Tim is at ease, though.
Ally this is the best stuff I have ever read from you. I so love this story it’s gritty and WOW I don’t know it just seems on another plane. You really have stepped up your game her. Good job.
Another great one AllyE. I really do like this story and the good thing is I started it from the beginning. So happy they talked about what happened, Bette was letting it eat her up inside. Tina is a very wise young woman. Have a great weekend with Cheryl. PPS
That was awesome and good to see Bette open up to Tina and now thing are ok, love the B&T’s talk. Tim seem ok now. Please post more, thanks!
Yaaay! You did it again! You really made B&T work on the demons that were threatening their relationship and went through the whole nightmare till they could see the light at the end of the tunnel. Gorgeous chapter! Now, dear friend, enjoy your weekend immensely and misbehave with C. You both absolutely deserve your time together. We won’t bother you at all. You have given us a lot this week and you should be focused now on your other half. Big Hs & Kisses – Lucero & Marsha
Gosh I really like this story with his different loops and marvellous dialogues. Thanks and looking forward for more.
I truly truly love your story. This chapter’s grrreat!!
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You’re writing of Bette’s fears and Tina reassuring her was so right… And I love the Bette/Tim chat. I’ve never liked Jenny either so I’m just glad she’s going away…
yay!!!! god, I really enjoyed this chap my queen! You are just a genius with fan fic. I’m glad B&T finally talked about that night and about B’s fears. Ok, talk to you soon. Take care and have a nice and lovely weekend.
This was a pretty emotional chapter. Hopefully B&T can move on and there will be no drama involving Pistol Pete (lol). Loved the chat between Bette and Tim and LMFAO@Francesca for setting Jenny’s manushit, er, manuscript on fire! XD
WOW what fantastic chapter!! love how tina takes control and helps bette work though her fears!!! even better when bette went and chatted with tim…