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Let it be –chapter four
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Tina looked at the young girl
“Don’t let it bother you “ Tina said softly
Jenny ignored her and continued looking with sheep’s eyes at Marina who had moved her hands so they were resting on the bar maid’s hips. Finally after five minutes the Guinness was poured and the red haired presented it with a flourish to Tim
“Well done “ he said
“Try it “ the accent was French
Tim picked up the drink and took a long appreciative sip.
“Yes- terrific- thanks “
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Bette was just coming from the bathroom when she looked across to see if Tina was alright- she frowned and stopped to watch Tina. Jenny was flirting with Tina- she wasn’t doing it very well but Bette had seen enough examples of flirting to know what it was. Tina had the fixed smile on her face that was an indication that she was not enjoying the attention. Tim was missing – what the hell was wrong with him ?
Shane saw Bette and saw the look on her face – trouble. She tried to push her way through the crowd to get to her neighbour but was stopped by Tammy who started berating her for not replying to the 73 text messages she had sent her. What is it with these women Shane wondered- why would she reply to text 73 when she had ignored the other 72 ? Shane tried to politely get away from Tammy but in the end she just turned and walked away heading in the direction of Tina and Jenny.
Jenny was laughing the most fake laugh that Shane had ever heard as she got closer to Tina – she had to stop because a man was making his way past her with a tray containing about 12 drinks. Jenny laughed again and made to put her hand on Tina’s face. She got within 5 cm of Tina before Bette’s hand grabbed her wrist
“Just what the fuck do you think that you are doing ?” Bette demanded
Jenny shrunk back
“Just talking “ she defended
“You were so fucking well not just talking- who the hell do you think you are coming onto MY wife like that “
“I wasn’t “
Bette swung Jenny round so they were facing each other- the bar had gone silent. Bette’s jealous rages were a thing of legend – no one but no one hit on Tina Kennard.
“Bette – its okay “ Tina was trying to head off a scene
“No – hell no it is not – so Jenny Schechter – want to explain yourself to me – this is Jenny
Schechter by the way everyone – writes the most god damn awful stuff -thinks she is a writer when she is a train crash waiting to happen. Take a good look at her – she is trouble – and not in a good way “
“Bette “ Shane’s hand rested on her friends shoulder – Bette shrugged it off- all she could see in her drunken state was that this pretentious little turd was hitting on her wife – the woman she loved – well no fucking way. Bette Porter was not going to play games with the disaster zone.
“That’s enough “ Tim pushed through the crowd and faced Bette
“Poor old Tim “
“Bette – no “ Tina warned
“Poor old Timmy “ Bette sneered
“That’s enough “ Tina got between Bette and Tim
“What the hell do you mean ?”
“Poor old Tim – the only man in the building – no let me correct that – the only person in the building who doesn’t know that his beloved Jenny is screwing Marina “
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WTH Bette? That was completely uncalled for, totally unnecessary to humiliate Tim like that. Tim’s not a surrogate for Pete, he’s not done anything wrong. Her and Tina need to talk, *really* talk about this whole thing. Soon. Bette went from feeling hurt and rejected in Foxworthy’s office and later in Kit’s apartment, to “let’s make a baby” in the blink of an eye, a *huge* decision, and nothing got resolved in between. Shagging away the unresolved feelings doesn’t seem to be working, and the double vodka’s aren’t helping either. Lots for the two of them to think about, I want to see how they try to work this all out. Right, thanks for the chapter, ally, more when you can. Cheers
Seems the repercussions from their menage a trois just continue. Is poor Timmy going to slug Bette? Is Tina regretting not staying home? Is Bette going to be able to burn the memory away with vodka?
Damn, Bette. Yeah, that was cruel to humiliate Tim just because Jenny is a complete bitch. Tim was always a really good guy. Drunken jealousy isn’t a good thing.
love this story, thanks:) PPS
hmmm, this is gonna get worse before it gets better. thanks.
That was GOOD! Take that Miss Shecter, at this time of the show I was able to watch you without wanting to kill you. Too bad I had glimpses of season 4! And now Tim won’t say Bette didn’t warn him! But I’m not sure that Tina’s gonna like it. God Bette is way to sexy in her drunken alpha mode!
Just for good measure I admit that Tim didn’t deserve that. Make them talk. But don’t turn the conversation into a breaking up one…
She is so going to regret that when she sobers up and Tina is going to be pissed at her, Bette needs to watch that temper.
Geez Bette, can you say mean and nasty drunk? Other than that the chapter was great. Thanks.
Dang…..Bette’s a mean drunk!
Gee Bette’s temper is really bad and Tina is really gonna be upset with her and it was so uncalled for. Our girls really need to talk about ol’ Pete. Bette really needs to get past this after all it was her idea. Great chapter by the way. PPS
This story and style is so different than your other ones. But I like it. It seems more “Americanized” than your other stories. Maybe b/c you don’t use English colloquisms as you do sometimes in your other tales.
ekkkk! poor tim. this just keeps gettin better and better. looking forward to more.
Although Bette is trying to compensate things by spending more time and giving closer attention to Tina, they haven’t really talked and figure out how they should approach the outcome of how the Pete’s experience could affect their relationship. As for things getting out of control at the Planet, we believe Bette’s jealousy has snicked its ugly head out with Jenny. Vodka is making Bette speak carelessly because she can’t admit openly what’s bothering her inside and on top of that, since she’s freaked out about her inner fears, she prefers to retalliate versus Tim, by spilling the beans about Jenny & Marina’s fling. It doesn’t look good. Tina better take Bette home, before it turns nasty. Excellent chapter, Ally. Thanks for the update. PPS Lucero & Marsha
hi there Ally, indeed it was a good friday, and i am so glad that you up dated this lovely story, i am at work right now and i noticed the rating of the story it says N-C17 so, i guss i am going to save for later. Thanks friendlove
Tim was just punched in the gut by Bette! He didn’t deserve that although Jenny sure did. I say Bette & Tim make up and have a slapfest with Jenny!
Holy crap!! bette has lost her mind!!can’t wait to see what this goes….
Oh shit this is bad and Bette is so drunk lol. Love B&T and hope Tina not mad at her. Please post soon, thanks!
well i’m in the minority thinking that what Bette did wasn’t all that bad. Now..bare with me…Jenny was trying to hit on Tina…that much was established because Shane saw it as well and was making a bee line for Jenny to stop her. Tina knew that Bette was still trying to “make up” for the threesome, becasue she even thinks that she knows why Bette is being more physical with her. Now according to this fic…Bette’s temper is legendary AND that NO ONE touches Tina…I’m thinking you’re asking for trouble when you say Hey let’s out and You Bette..that hasn’t worked out any of these issues yet…drink shit loads so then one small move will make you snap. Now i don’t think deserved Bette’s comment, BUT my guess…she sees Tina in Jenny and herself as Tim…cluess as to what Tina wants and if she would secretly make her way back to men like Jenny is secretly making her way to the lesbians…Just a side note…isn’t it funny how when you’re happy go lucky and all smiles people thinking your the funniest…the same stuff (alcohol) that gets you this cute, funny, hilirious, whatever it the exact same things that make you switch at a drop of a hat. Take me for example I drink tequila all night…I will be mean…AND…i have less tolerance for people…I drink Red bull and vodas…i’m bouncing off the walls…So…yeah..go Bette kick ass…Will Tina be upset…Yes. BUT…after 7 years it’s a safe bet (no pun intended) that she should have seen this coming. My friends know what i shouldn’t be drinking…and they don’t fuck me…so ..I would hope Tina would the same thing about Bette. Oh well they definately need to talk. Great job Ally!!
A drunken Bette is not too careful with her mouth calling out Jenny like that. The stuff at the beginning and the middle was hot. They really need to talk.
ouch just like Justmeyou said, Bette is in so much trouble, i feel that she will not get any tonight, by the way it was a very nice chapter Ally i loved the love making it was so tender and sweet, thanks my friend. Please post soon don’t let us wait for so long.Have a nice weekend love
This was a great chapter!!! Bette is gonna be in SO MUCH TROUBLE when she gets home!! She won’t get any tonight!!! Tina’s gonna be mad, but she had to have known with the length of time they’ve been together that Bette is a mean drunk! PPS
Ouch! Bette go easy on Tim. Damn this is harsh. I was totally feeling bad for Bette b/c she’s still struggling w/ the fact that she let her wife be screwed by a man but does she have to be so mean to Tim. Maybe it’s the aclohol talking. I wonder if Bette could ahndle Tina sleeping w/a guy better if she wasn’t actually in the room to see it. But on second thought that would probably be even harder for her to handle b/c she would constantly be visualizing how this man touched Tina and whether or not she enjoyed. I can’t wait for your next post. Not really that interested in the Jenny/Marina nonsense excpet for how it directly relates to Bette and Tina. PPS! And i hope Tina isn’t too upset at Bette flipping out.
Hey Ally, Thank you for showing how wonderful Bette and Tina can be together. Recent events have showed Bette the error of her ways and Tina is there as a constant supporting and comforting her wife. Loved the double muffin attack. Having Bette pleasure her wife is a very critical step in rebuilding their relationship and moving forward from the threesome. Bette checking Pete out was purely Alpha-Bette taking charge. It is so amazing to see Tina’s complete understanding of her lover. The night out started well with Bette and Tina catching up with their friends. Bette’s drunken revelation about Marina and Jenny was mean spirited and only sevred to embarrass Tim. Once again, Bette’s lofty principles put her in the firing line. Can’t wait to see how this all plays out now. Good thing is the truth is out in the open and now Tim is not being deceived or duped by his girlfriend. I have a feeling that fists may be flying soon. Many, many thanks for this exciting and different beginning. Your Loyal Fan.