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    Let It Go

    Story written on January 20, 2005 by Jwet.
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    Chapter 60 – It all comes together

    Are you hungry, I have all the fixings in the kitchen to have stir fry? What do you think with a salad and rice? Bette asked.

    Im starved and why dont we work together. You chop veggies and Ill get the cooking done. Tina volunteered.

    With that they settled into a coordinated dance as they both moved around the kitchen. To an outsider you could feel the intimacy of these two as Tina places her hand in Bette small of her back to reach around Bette to get the peanut oil for the wok or as Bette moves around Tina with the chopped zucchini on the cutting block. Its as if their bodies sensed where the other was and either moved in coordinated movement or deliberately brushed up against the other as the need to be touching was innate and not conscious.

    When dinner was ready they both thought they might as well take advantage of the beautiful evening and eat outside. The conversation was light as they both were enjoying the moment and each others company. With dinner complete Bette just waves Tina aside as she wants to go in to tidy up the kitchen saying she has plenty of time later to clean up.

    Conceding to Bettes wishes, Tina settles back to enjoy the evening as Bette brings up her paintings she has been working on. I have one that I think would be good for New York but Im not sure. If you wouldnt mind could you take a look at it and let me know what you think? Bette asks Tina innocently.

    Sure Bette I would love to look at your painting. But you know my opinion really doesnt mean much its really what you feel about the painting that should count. Tina says back as she gets up and is walking up the stairs to Bettes painting room.

    Bette just smiled as she thinks to herself But oh, on this one your opinion really does matter.

    At the top of the stairs Tina comes to a complete stop as what she sees brings tears to her eyes. There in the center of the room is the most beautiful painting Tina had ever seen. The painting was her vision, the vision she had expressed to Bette on the beach. In the center was the sunset of vibrant burning yellows fading into oranges on the edges. In the center of this fire are two bodies molded in a loving embrace with each other so entwined you had to use your imagination to tell where one started and the other ended. These two bodies where Tina and Bette, Tina could tell by the look of love in each of the faces. The same look of love that Bette gives to her. Surrounding the sun where the water meets the rays are pictures of kids playing and little hands holding hands, birthday cake candles being blown out as well as packages being opened. The whole peripheral of the painting became of montage of little pictures which could remind the outsider of many Norman Rockwell images. The entire effect was magic. It was her vision entirely. Bette got it all. Everything she wanted and dreamed for was captured in Bettes painting. The realization of this left Tina speechless with joy. Turning to Bette, Tina opened her mouth to talk but nothing came out. Instead she jumped into Bette arms.

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    4. Just beautiful, but you can’t stop now…it’s only the beginning! What will I do for my daily therapy session? You are the best! I love this story so much…you stood by Bette and Tina and opened their hearts for us to see and feel…you are truly gifted!

    7. This has been a wonderful journey…You did a fantastic job with this. If you stop here I understand but PLEASE write another story you are to good not to. Thanks for this one.

    10. I couldn’t have come up with a better ending than you did Jwet. Thanks for working your magic with Bette and Tina to bring us this wonderful story.

    11. Jwet, I have really enjoyed this story and thanks for a happy ending. If this is indeed the end, I hope you come up with another story line and entertain once again. Thanks.

    12. What a GREAT story JWET! All of your chapters have been fantastic…even the short ones! You have shown a new side to Bette and Tina which I thoroughly enjoyed. Your story made me cry, laugh, but most left me breathless and without words. I’m glad you took the leap to write this story. You have enriched my life by your postings. When the time or urge comes, please write another story! My thanks to you again….WHAT AN AMAZING, WONDERFUL, AND THOUGHT PROVOKING STORY!!!!!!!!

    13. That was so worth waiting for.. your story is really wonderful. I cannot wait for them renew vows, honeymoon.. thanks for a lovely and passionate story.

    14. I am sad it’s over…and you will be missed. I will miss two a day posts…usually being posted in the wee hours of the morning, I will miss being superiorly entertained with thoughtful intelligent writing and character driven drama, and I will miss reading how my favorite characters are going to fare from chapter to chapter, in this amazing exploration you created. I am sad it’s over…and you will be missed.

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