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    Let It Go

    Story written on January 20, 2005 by Jwet.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=51637
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    Chapter 60 – It all comes together

    Bette pulled back to see if Tina was happy or sad and seeing the joy held her close. Speaking softly into Tinas ear: The last time you looked at one of my paintings the look of joy on your face turned to sorrow right before my eyes. Tina tell me about that day. Tell me what was going through your mind on your birthday, please. Bette pulls back to try and look into Tinas eyes as she makes this request.

    I had a plan for my birthday. When I saw your painting of me, it depicted my eyes with that loving look that is in this painting. That look you knew I loved you. You had to in order to be able to express that look so well. But if you knew I loved you and hadnt acted on it then I just knew my plan was doomed. For some reason I had to figure out why you werent ready to be with me again. That was the sorrow you saw. Im sorry I didnt realize you saw that. But Bette does this picture here mean what I think it means? Tina asks searching Bettes face. What she needed to know was written all over Bettes face. Bette knew what Tina was talking about that look, the look of love that was in her eyes and on her face now. Bette are you really ready to be with me now? Tina asked just above a whisper.

    Yes. Is all Bette needed to say as she pulled Tina close for a kiss to show her that she was ready.

    Tinas heart is now rapidly beating as she knows now is the time. Gently pulling away from Bette, Tina gets down on one knee, pulling the box out of her pocket and looks up into Bettes face. Bette, babe .. will you give me the pleasure of being my wife? Bette will you marry me? Tina asks in a clear and confident voice as she takes the ring out to put on Bettes finger.

    Bette realized as soon as Tina went down on one knee what was coming and almost couldnt wait for Tina to get the words out as she got down on her knees with Tina and kisses her answer. Tina pulled back looking at Bette as if to say please say it.

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    4. Just beautiful, but you can’t stop now…it’s only the beginning! What will I do for my daily therapy session? You are the best! I love this story so much…you stood by Bette and Tina and opened their hearts for us to see and feel…you are truly gifted!

    7. This has been a wonderful journey…You did a fantastic job with this. If you stop here I understand but PLEASE write another story you are to good not to. Thanks for this one.

    10. I couldn’t have come up with a better ending than you did Jwet. Thanks for working your magic with Bette and Tina to bring us this wonderful story.

    11. Jwet, I have really enjoyed this story and thanks for a happy ending. If this is indeed the end, I hope you come up with another story line and entertain once again. Thanks.

    12. What a GREAT story JWET! All of your chapters have been fantastic…even the short ones! You have shown a new side to Bette and Tina which I thoroughly enjoyed. Your story made me cry, laugh, but most left me breathless and without words. I’m glad you took the leap to write this story. You have enriched my life by your postings. When the time or urge comes, please write another story! My thanks to you again….WHAT AN AMAZING, WONDERFUL, AND THOUGHT PROVOKING STORY!!!!!!!!

    13. That was so worth waiting for.. your story is really wonderful. I cannot wait for them renew vows, honeymoon.. thanks for a lovely and passionate story.

    14. I am sad it’s over…and you will be missed. I will miss two a day posts…usually being posted in the wee hours of the morning, I will miss being superiorly entertained with thoughtful intelligent writing and character driven drama, and I will miss reading how my favorite characters are going to fare from chapter to chapter, in this amazing exploration you created. I am sad it’s over…and you will be missed.

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