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Let it Ride- Chapter 10
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Tina grinned and stepped into the bathroom to give her some privacy.
Dana sat down, dialing the number and waiting for somebody to pick up.
It rang several times before Dana heard a click and then Alice’s strange, metallic sounding voice on the answering machine.
Dana sighed resignedly and when the phone beeped she said ,"Hey Al, Hel! I’ve got some good news so I wanted to share it with my favorite girls. Anyway, Alice- I hope you’re feeling better and I know you’re gonna be awesome. I wish I could be there, baby. I love you."
Dana hung up and for a moment her words didn’t register. Then her eyes flew open and she said frantically, "Tina! Tina!"
The blonde hurried out of the bathroom and when she saw Dana’s panicked look, she questioned nervously, "What? What’s wrong?"
Dana looked wretched and said, "I just told Alice I loved her for the first time."
Tina looked confused. "That’s a good thing, Dane."
Looking miserable and annoyed with herself, Dana said, "I said it to the answering machine."
Groaning in embarassment, Dana let the chortling Tina lead her from the room.
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Helena edged through the crowd, holding her drinks above her head and occasionally snapping at someone who nudged her.
Shane caught sight of her and waved her over to the table where she was sitting with Bette. The lanky Texan didn’t miss the long look that passed between the other girls and she quickly turned her head away to face the stage.
Standing beside Bette, Helena grinned as she felt Bette’s hand slide appreciatively over her ass.
Winking, Helena turned back to Shane and questioned, "Did you get to see Alice?"
Shane shook her head nervously. "Ryan said she’s fine but she didn’t sound so great when I talked to her earlier."
Helena’s mischievous look was replaced by one of worry and Bette caught the sight with a slight smile. Helena could be a damned know it all but she did love Alice and that endeared her to Bette.
The Brit said, "I know. I do hope she’ll be alright. If she can just get through the show we can take her straight home and get her to bed. Dana will be home tomorrow and I imagine that will be the best medicine."
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OMG her last words had to be the Six Million Dollar man,,LOL. Frip that was awesome and now I want to know what were in those pills and what does Al have? And Tina is now aware of Dana’s sexualtiy but will she publish it or be a rewl friend and keep it quiet? And last we see that both Bette and Helena are hot and mad about one another,,,love it… I think that Dana should call AL her “Rock N Roll Queen” you know that is the name of the song, its so cool…great chapter Frip.
Six Million Dollar Man? Oh, geez…lol…”I don’t know if I want to slap you or kiss you.” I loved that…so much passion and fury, it’s intoxicating…pps
whooo hooo! i liked this one a lot. helena and bette are great, like their old selves. fantastic, and alice is an unfolding drama i wanna read more of. pps!
You are truly amazing. What a great chapter. Is there something higher than an “A” game? ‘Cause you hit it. Poor Alice! Thank goodness she has close friends who I am sure will rush her to a hospital. I trust you that she will be OK (maybe with a little drama). I hope those pills weren’t too bad — and that she learns her lesson about taking random pills! I have a feeling that Dana is going to feel pretty bad about not being there. They really do complete each other. What a great step for Dana, though, to come out to Tina. I wouldn’t object to any Belena lovin’. I know they aren’t soul mates (like Danish), but, I would like Helena to get some. Oh — and I had those doctors in college! I’m starting to think we may be from the same school. I had a doctor that just had envelopes of pills on his desk that he would randomly hand out. The muscle relaxers were quite nice. Apparently the doctors that were no longer competent for the football team got sent to the clinic. BTW: I’m actually more of a “Mother Goose” than an “Iceman” (hence my login name — actually based on Top Gun — yes, I am that old). Please keep posting. I am addicted to this story.
Thank you for placing the blanket on A while she napped. I guess I was too late to suggest some mega dosage of Vitamin C and Echinesia for her cold before bed. What did you give A, poor A, I hope she did not damage her liver or kidney. I love the way you wrote A’s dialogue. They were sharp & funny. What is going on? Tina’s sick too. Was there a epidemic? It was great to see T being so good to D right away. The exchange between B & H was great and you ended with another unbelievable cliffhanger. How do you do it? See, everyone loves your story and you are posting at “ludicrous speed” (remember “Spaceball”?). Your story is so awesome that I want to respond immediate after each post. Unfortunately I had to go out as soon as I saw the post. All day long I couldn’t wait to come home and read. Thank you fripster!