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Let it Ride- Chapter 10
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Dana looked up curiously and Tina smiled at the hopeful look in her eyes. "You’re saying that you and Alice are a couple. That you’re a lesbian."
Dana’s eyes widened and Tina could see the fear and the relief mingled together at having it laid out so simply and so bare before her.
Nodding slowly, Tina said, "Okay. That’s perfectly fine with me."
Dana actually smiled at Tina’s tone and the blonde joined her for a moment before she added, "I do get it, Dane. I recently came out to my family."
Dana’s eyes grew wide as proverbial saucers and she looked so stunned that Tina laughed again.
"Breathe, Dana."
The brunette reddened with embarassment and let out a long, low whistle.
Tina moved back slightly, resting against the headboard as she said, "So tell me all about Alice."
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The musician in question, thoroughly unaware of the fact that she was being talked about in glowing terms in another part of the state, flopped onto her bed and pulled the covers around her as she burrowed in for the night.
Missing Dana and feeling utterly like death warmed over, Alice closed her eyes and willed herself to sleep.
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Part Two
Dana grunted as she hit the ball. This morning’s opponent was decidedly better than the day before’s. The girl had speed, power, a tricky down-the-line backhand and a killer dropshot.
Gnashing her teeth, Dana returned the next groundstroke with a powerful one of her own, snarling in satisfaction when it bounced on the line and the other girl couldn’t return.
Her set.
Things were looking up.
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Tina watched intently from the bleachers. Dana was showing an incredible tenacity that Tina would never have guessed at before seeing some it displayed in the hallway the night before.
Dana could definitely be a hardass when she set her mind to it.
Still, the blonde knew that the wonderfully gushing, geekily ecstatic ramblings that had escaped the tennis player the night before were another big part of Dana’s personality.
Dana had seemed to think Tina was being literal when she’d asked to hear all about Alice.
An hour and a half had passed before Dana had even thought about stopping. She had it bad for Alice. Tina couldn’t wait to meet the girl. And Dana’s other friends sounded cool as well. Particularly Shane and Helena.
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OMG her last words had to be the Six Million Dollar man,,LOL. Frip that was awesome and now I want to know what were in those pills and what does Al have? And Tina is now aware of Dana’s sexualtiy but will she publish it or be a rewl friend and keep it quiet? And last we see that both Bette and Helena are hot and mad about one another,,,love it… I think that Dana should call AL her “Rock N Roll Queen” you know that is the name of the song, its so cool…great chapter Frip.
Six Million Dollar Man? Oh, geez…lol…”I don’t know if I want to slap you or kiss you.” I loved that…so much passion and fury, it’s intoxicating…pps
whooo hooo! i liked this one a lot. helena and bette are great, like their old selves. fantastic, and alice is an unfolding drama i wanna read more of. pps!
You are truly amazing. What a great chapter. Is there something higher than an “A” game? ‘Cause you hit it. Poor Alice! Thank goodness she has close friends who I am sure will rush her to a hospital. I trust you that she will be OK (maybe with a little drama). I hope those pills weren’t too bad — and that she learns her lesson about taking random pills! I have a feeling that Dana is going to feel pretty bad about not being there. They really do complete each other. What a great step for Dana, though, to come out to Tina. I wouldn’t object to any Belena lovin’. I know they aren’t soul mates (like Danish), but, I would like Helena to get some. Oh — and I had those doctors in college! I’m starting to think we may be from the same school. I had a doctor that just had envelopes of pills on his desk that he would randomly hand out. The muscle relaxers were quite nice. Apparently the doctors that were no longer competent for the football team got sent to the clinic. BTW: I’m actually more of a “Mother Goose” than an “Iceman” (hence my login name — actually based on Top Gun — yes, I am that old). Please keep posting. I am addicted to this story.
Thank you for placing the blanket on A while she napped. I guess I was too late to suggest some mega dosage of Vitamin C and Echinesia for her cold before bed. What did you give A, poor A, I hope she did not damage her liver or kidney. I love the way you wrote A’s dialogue. They were sharp & funny. What is going on? Tina’s sick too. Was there a epidemic? It was great to see T being so good to D right away. The exchange between B & H was great and you ended with another unbelievable cliffhanger. How do you do it? See, everyone loves your story and you are posting at “ludicrous speed” (remember “Spaceball”?). Your story is so awesome that I want to respond immediate after each post. Unfortunately I had to go out as soon as I saw the post. All day long I couldn’t wait to come home and read. Thank you fripster!