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Let it Ride- Chapter 13
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Helena’s blue eyes flashed and the surge of intensity in them cause Bette to smile in anticipation.
Leaning in to kiss the younger girl, Bette laughed when she heard Helena say, "This is going to be interesting."
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The evening culminated with an impromptu gathering for dinner in Alice’s bedroom. Chairs were brought in as the girls munched on pizza and an easy, relaxed vibe filled the air.
Helena and Bette had emerged from the bedroom looking tousled and ruddy-faced from exertion and Shane had burst out laughing before handing them both plates for their pizza.
Bette had managed to look suitably embarassed at Shane’s knowing look but Helena was blithely unconcerned as she piled her plate with slices of pizza, saying to Bette with a smirk, "It seems I’ve worked up quite an appetite."
They all reconvened in Alice’s room and Helena put on a videotape that nobody really paid much attention. All the girls had school the next day, with the exception of Alice.
Though in this case, it was something she didn’t seem to mind missing.
Shane cut through the amiable, friendly chatter and pointed to the TV, saying excitedly, "Wait! Now, this girl is hot. This girl, I could see myself being faitful to. Or sort of faithful."
Bette said wryly, "Sort of faithful?"
Shane grinned sheepishly and Alice bit into her pizza, saying blandly, "I met her once."
Everyone’s eyes turned to her with varying degrees of astonishment. Alice was looking so intently at her pizza that she didn’t notice everyone’s stares until Dana knocked her gently in the shoulder.
Alice swallowed with some difficulty and questioned, "What?"
Helena said in disbelief, "You met her? You never told me that."
Frowning unhappily, Dana said pointedly, "You never told me that either."
Alice pushed her glasses up her nose nervously and stammered, "Hmm? Oh, well. You know how it is."
Her friends’ expressions told her that in fact, they didn’t know how it was.
Shane was looking on interestedly and while she was enjoying Alice’s humorous fumbling, she requested sharply, "Details, please."
Alice flushed and said irritably, "Fine. Fine."
Putting her plate down on the bedside table, Alice went for nonchalance as she stated, "We played a show in Chicago this summer and she happened to be there with her boyfriend."
Alice waved her hand dismissively and continued, "Y’know, "boyfriend". Anyway, the manager of the club let them come backstage before the show. Turns out she was a big fan. Anyway, the "boyfriend" got lost at some point and she bought me some drinks. Hit on me. No big deal."
Shane’s mouth was dropped open in incredulity. The others wore similarly impressed faces. Most of them were simply awestruck by the fact that Alice’s fame had reached such heights that a major movie star would have heard of her.
Bette questioned quickly, "Isn’t she like, twenty four?"
Alice shrugged and then Helena piped up quickly, "And if it was this summer, you hadn’t even had your birthday! Alice, you stud!"
Dana had completely forgotten the star-struck curiosity she’d felt at the beginning of the story and was now scowling. She tried to appear only casually interested as she questioned, "So, did anything else happen? I mean, you know. After the show?"
Alice’s face turned an incriminating shade of red and the others quickly looked away as she said in a small voice, "Nothing much. She uh, kissed me and I was so shocked that I kissed her back. I mean, she was a pretty good kisser."
Dana’s lips thinned considerably and the others present wished that Alice would just shut up before she got herself into more trouble.
Alice continued doggedly, "Her boyfriend came back in and that kind of broke things up."
Finally chancing a glance in her girlfriend’s direction, Alice said hastily, "I totally wasn’t gonna sleep with her though."
Shane was still looking totally impressed with Alice even if the musician was too wrapped up in watching her girlfriend nervously to notice.
Chuckling, Shane asked dryly, "So, can you give me her number?"
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i love this story so much great work!!!!
Thank you for posting earlier. I think there will be a hard cure for my raccoon eyes. I’ll use any excuse not to go to bed. I love staying up late and refuse to sleep until the sun comes up. Talking about bed, “The bed isn’t as fun as it usually is.” I just don’t know how you come up with lines like. I could not stop chuckling. I personally detest people lecturing me while I eat. And there you were, allowing D to reprimand A while A was enjoying her soup. I am sorry and yet I couldn’t stop laughing, “I can’t really remember. The head injury.” A could be such a smart aleck and “karma will get me.” Now they really acted like an old couple with the wife yelling at the husband. It was great though how A quickly turned the situation around. LMAO. So f*cking cute. B & H were very hot. A had to open her big mouth. Now the one week without sex could become 2 or 3. This is another great chapter. btw, I finished Goldrun15’s “Crossroad” today. I totally agree with you about “a natural progression.” Now I understand and sympathize more with Lara. While I was reading it, I could feel her pain. Goldrun15, like you said, did an amazing job. I’ll get to tiff_duke later. Thank you again for telling me about them. Good night.
OOOHHH!!!Who was the movie star??? Anyways, Bette and Helena are steaming things up..I didn’t think that they would be together, but I’m glad that you put the two Alpha ladies together!!! Dana really made Alice feel a little sad after snapping on her just a little, but it was for her own good and she needed to know that she should listen to her body for now on. Anyways, I can’t wait to see what you have in store next, and I’m glad that you continue on to enjoy my lovely story =) Thanks and PPS!!!!!!
Alice the stud, that must be one pretty hot, pretty good kisser of a movie star. hhhmm wonder who though… And it would be nice to think that it was “the” best writers in the city but the people in there were people in college like me or people slightly older than us. Our bowling “coach” used to be a high school english teacher, she’s teaching journalism, history and economics now. She’s pretty smart having to do all that and sometimes she coaches bowling part time just for the fun of it. She got me another group of teammates for the writing stuff. One of whom turned out to be a competitor of mine in bowling we didn’t like each other much before. In fact we sort of hated each other but she ended up holding my hand before we did the broadcasting hihihihi. Nuff about me, LOL I’m also very into the hellcat picasso lovin, and jealous Dana is so cute btw. thanks again for posting :)
Okay, so who is the “her” that Studly Alice made out with? Or did I just miss that entirely? Also, the whole “concussed” thing made me go aww. I heart this and I heart you for posting so damn often, even though you make me look like a damn slacker. And thanks for the (sort of) shoutout!
Hi there!! Well, I’ve been a silent reader of your story until now (sorry!). I usually read anything regarding Danish… but I’ve jonesed for just a few stories; and yours is definitely one of them! Thanks so much for this daily dose (I wouldn’t mind to OD on it!!).
Please realize that I read and savor every chapter — even if I don’t get comments written before you post the next one. Great job with Belena! I know you were concerned about how to handle it and I think you hit it just right. I hope Dana isn’t too upset about the movie star. They weren’t dating at that time. Although I do find Jealous!Dana to be quite hot. Hmmmm… Maybe Dana needs some groupies. ;-D I’m glad Alice is OK but I think Dana let her off too lightly. Can’t wait to see what happens when Dana sees Frank again. BTW: Harking back to an earlier author’s note… None of your chapters have been threadbare. I love the dialog. It advances both the characters and the plot. Thanks again for the great story!