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Let it Ride- Chapter 13
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Alice struggled to find a way to end her girlfriend’s tirade and said in a tone meant to mollify, "It got me concussed. And I’ll tell you right now that I won’t break anymore promises because karma will get me."
Dana groaned and said, "Alice, it’s not that simple. It’s the fact that you put yourself in a dangerous situation. You didn’t listen to your body."
Alice frowned, knowing that her girlfriend was right but unable to totally regret everything because the show had turned out great.
Running a hand through her hair, Alice said slowly, "I am sorry, Dane. I’m sorry I worried everyone. You don’t know how sorry."
Dana reached over and gave Alice’s hand a little squeeze, saying, "I know you are, Alice. But you’re not getting out of it that easily."
Alice looked up in surprise and said quickly, "What? Why not?"
The athlete smiled tightly and said, "The drugs, Al. What were you thinking taking something when you didn’t even know what it was?"
The musician’s eyebrows shot up and she wondered how Dana had found out about the pills. The doctor? Helena? Freaking Frank?
Moaning in self- pity, Alice conceded seriously, "Okay, you’re right. Not one of my better ideas."
Dana’s eyes widened and she said sarcastically, "Ya think?"
The musician rushed in, saying, "Look, it’s not like it’s something I do all the time. And the circumstances were extreme. I felt like I had to get through the show and Frank told me that they were like, herbal pills or something."
Dana rolled her eyes impatiently and said, "Don’t mention Frank to me right now."
The athlete was still inordinately miffed with the guy for offering Alice pills when she was already feeling horrible and desperate to complete the show. Alice would never want to let her beloved bandmates down and Dana privately thought Frank had taken advantage of her.
Alice couldn’t help but smile at Dana’s attitude to Frank. Truthfully, she knew that it was her fault for taking the pills but it kind of amused her that Dana now had a grudge against Frank for her sake.
Dana saw Alice’s expression and said quickly, "Don’t think you’re off the hook, Alice. Frank gave them to you but you’re the one who took them."
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i love this story so much great work!!!!
Thank you for posting earlier. I think there will be a hard cure for my raccoon eyes. I’ll use any excuse not to go to bed. I love staying up late and refuse to sleep until the sun comes up. Talking about bed, “The bed isn’t as fun as it usually is.” I just don’t know how you come up with lines like. I could not stop chuckling. I personally detest people lecturing me while I eat. And there you were, allowing D to reprimand A while A was enjoying her soup. I am sorry and yet I couldn’t stop laughing, “I can’t really remember. The head injury.” A could be such a smart aleck and “karma will get me.” Now they really acted like an old couple with the wife yelling at the husband. It was great though how A quickly turned the situation around. LMAO. So f*cking cute. B & H were very hot. A had to open her big mouth. Now the one week without sex could become 2 or 3. This is another great chapter. btw, I finished Goldrun15’s “Crossroad” today. I totally agree with you about “a natural progression.” Now I understand and sympathize more with Lara. While I was reading it, I could feel her pain. Goldrun15, like you said, did an amazing job. I’ll get to tiff_duke later. Thank you again for telling me about them. Good night.
OOOHHH!!!Who was the movie star??? Anyways, Bette and Helena are steaming things up..I didn’t think that they would be together, but I’m glad that you put the two Alpha ladies together!!! Dana really made Alice feel a little sad after snapping on her just a little, but it was for her own good and she needed to know that she should listen to her body for now on. Anyways, I can’t wait to see what you have in store next, and I’m glad that you continue on to enjoy my lovely story =) Thanks and PPS!!!!!!
Alice the stud, that must be one pretty hot, pretty good kisser of a movie star. hhhmm wonder who though… And it would be nice to think that it was “the” best writers in the city but the people in there were people in college like me or people slightly older than us. Our bowling “coach” used to be a high school english teacher, she’s teaching journalism, history and economics now. She’s pretty smart having to do all that and sometimes she coaches bowling part time just for the fun of it. She got me another group of teammates for the writing stuff. One of whom turned out to be a competitor of mine in bowling we didn’t like each other much before. In fact we sort of hated each other but she ended up holding my hand before we did the broadcasting hihihihi. Nuff about me, LOL I’m also very into the hellcat picasso lovin, and jealous Dana is so cute btw. thanks again for posting :)
Okay, so who is the “her” that Studly Alice made out with? Or did I just miss that entirely? Also, the whole “concussed” thing made me go aww. I heart this and I heart you for posting so damn often, even though you make me look like a damn slacker. And thanks for the (sort of) shoutout!
Hi there!! Well, I’ve been a silent reader of your story until now (sorry!). I usually read anything regarding Danish… but I’ve jonesed for just a few stories; and yours is definitely one of them! Thanks so much for this daily dose (I wouldn’t mind to OD on it!!).
Please realize that I read and savor every chapter — even if I don’t get comments written before you post the next one. Great job with Belena! I know you were concerned about how to handle it and I think you hit it just right. I hope Dana isn’t too upset about the movie star. They weren’t dating at that time. Although I do find Jealous!Dana to be quite hot. Hmmmm… Maybe Dana needs some groupies. ;-D I’m glad Alice is OK but I think Dana let her off too lightly. Can’t wait to see what happens when Dana sees Frank again. BTW: Harking back to an earlier author’s note… None of your chapters have been threadbare. I love the dialog. It advances both the characters and the plot. Thanks again for the great story!