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Let it Ride- Chapter 2
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She was surprised when Alice suddenly gave her shoulder a squeeze and said reassuringly, "I promise, Dana. Helena is so cool. And the friendliest person you’ve ever met."
Shane agreed with Alice’s statement, saying to Dana, "She’s very cool. And she has an amazingly big heart. And she’s incredibly hot."
Dana looked over at Alice who said simply, "Smokin’ hot." Which didn’t make Dana less nervous.
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Dana was somewhat ashamed to find herself hovering clingily beside Shane. Alice had let them into the loft, introducing them around and getting them drinks, then she left them with a promise to return after she’d dropped her bags off in her room.
The place was huge, decorated nicely but not ostentatiously. It had a decidedly bohemian flare to it. A black grand piano was in one corner of the room with a drum kit wedged beside a low, functionalist couch.
Several guitars were displayed prominently but Dana had a feeling they weren’t for show. She could see that they were placed conveniently by chairs and couches and she could easily picture Alice walking by one and picking it up.
Still, as she looked around the loft at the fifty or so people that were milling aroung, chatting and drinking, she couldn’t help but feel as if she was out of her league.
Shane, bless her, had realized that Dana was still getting her bearings and hadn’t left her side, though she’d been eyeing a blonde that was sitting on the piano bench with increasing interest.
Dana asked quietly, "Are all these people music people?"
Shane looked at Dana quizzically, "Music people?"
Dana waved her arms around vaguely and elaborated, "Music people. Like, are they all in bands?"
Shane patted Dana on the head and said, "When you have parties is everyone there a tennis player?"
Dana thought that the answer to that was yes but she didn’t want to seem so socially limited in front of Shane so she said, "No."
Shane laughed at her and said, "I need another drink, Dane. You gonna be okay for a second?"
Dana laughed nervously, fighting back the urge to tell Shane to stay where she could see her. What, was she Shane’s mother?
"Sure, I will. Go on. Bring me one too."
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This is a great story. Please continue with it. The chemistry between those two is just so natural. I love it. Post soon.
Another chapter so soon?!? Squee!! Loved this line “so she did what all Faribanks did; she ignored it” — that is Dana in a nutshell. Great job incorporating Helena into the story. I love the sweetness between Alice and Dana at this stage. I’m looking forward to you next post!! Oh — and please — let’s keep Dana alive. OK? ;-D
Just found your story and am thrilled – it really great and I love where you are taking it … yeah, more danish, hurray.
Am I glad to read your 2nd chapter within 12 hours? What a wonderful surprise. Indeed another sweet chapter. I can’t wait to see Dana coming out of the closet. Now that you shared with us your writing credential, I am sure the rest of the story will be great. Those two are meant to be together. I am looking forward to your next post. Thank you for writing Danish. There is just not enough around these days. Thank you again.
i loved it please post very soon i was so disappointed when i realised i was at the end and had no more to read, its really great!cant wait for alice and dana to get together!pps!!
great story man loved both your chaps, danish is so cute i love your writing :)
I meant to say story not stories..This is your first. And I love the last word that Alice said. Did you get that from Star Wars? lol Just wondering..
You keep me wanting more and more from your stories. You’re a nautral with this story. The chemistry is so amazing, and the characters are are perfect to the tee. I really glad that you’re writing this story. I love it so far, and I can’t wait to see where Alice and Dana end up. You’re doing a wonderful job. Keep it coming. PPS.