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Let it Ride- Chapter 2
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Helena continued swiftly, "I’m sorry, I’m overly curious. A woman I see works in the athletic department and she’s been crowing over their triumph at wooing Dana Fairbanks to play here. So, naturally, I just assumed-"
Dana actually smiled, pleased and embarassed to find that she was considered some kind of a triumph of any kind.
She said quietly, "I do play tennis. I mean, I’m going to play here, yes."
Helena smiled and said happily, "Splendid. I’m nowhere near your level, but if you ever need a partner to trounce, I do play a little."
Dana smiled at the offer, happy to be making friends. "I’m sure you’re very good, and I’d love to."
That settled, Helena said, "Now, tell me, how do you like living with Shane?"
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Shane slipped another number into the pocket of her jeans and sauntered into the kitchen, a wide smile on her face. The refrigerator door was wide open and a girl was leaning down, her upper body almost completely obscured to Shane. Only a pair of tight fitting jeans, and a killer ass were visible.
Shane adopted a confident slouch and a winning grin and waited for the girl to turn around. When she finally did Shane screeched and Alice yelped in shock, the beers in her arms going flying. Shane saved a couple and Alice made a pouch with her shirt for the other two. One fell on the floor between them, causing the people standing nearby to look over.
Alice gazed at Shane in shock, "Are you high, Shane? You scared the shit out of me!"
Shane looked dazed as she countered, "Me?! You’re the one that should be ashamed of yourself!"
Alice looked on in confusion until a slow grin spread on her lips and she looked at Shane knowingly. "You were looking at my ass."
Shane shook her head furiously and said childishly, "Nuh uh. Was not."
Alice just smiled even wider and said, "Don’t deny it, Shane. You were looking. Just be a grown up. Admit it. I know it’s hard not to stare."
Shane huffed noisily and shifted her feet before saying, "Fine. Your ass looks good in those jeans. Happy?"
Alice cuffed Shane playfully on the cheek and said, "Ecstatic. Now pick up that beer, perv."
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This is a great story. Please continue with it. The chemistry between those two is just so natural. I love it. Post soon.
Another chapter so soon?!? Squee!! Loved this line “so she did what all Faribanks did; she ignored it” — that is Dana in a nutshell. Great job incorporating Helena into the story. I love the sweetness between Alice and Dana at this stage. I’m looking forward to you next post!! Oh — and please — let’s keep Dana alive. OK? ;-D
Just found your story and am thrilled – it really great and I love where you are taking it … yeah, more danish, hurray.
Am I glad to read your 2nd chapter within 12 hours? What a wonderful surprise. Indeed another sweet chapter. I can’t wait to see Dana coming out of the closet. Now that you shared with us your writing credential, I am sure the rest of the story will be great. Those two are meant to be together. I am looking forward to your next post. Thank you for writing Danish. There is just not enough around these days. Thank you again.
i loved it please post very soon i was so disappointed when i realised i was at the end and had no more to read, its really great!cant wait for alice and dana to get together!pps!!
great story man loved both your chaps, danish is so cute i love your writing :)
I meant to say story not stories..This is your first. And I love the last word that Alice said. Did you get that from Star Wars? lol Just wondering..
You keep me wanting more and more from your stories. You’re a nautral with this story. The chemistry is so amazing, and the characters are are perfect to the tee. I really glad that you’re writing this story. I love it so far, and I can’t wait to see where Alice and Dana end up. You’re doing a wonderful job. Keep it coming. PPS.