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Let it Ride- Chapter 6
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Alice leaned back against the red vinyl upholstery of the booth. Two hours had passed since their arrival and there wasn’t a single member of their group who wasn’t sloshed or getting there.
A vague, hazy grin was affixed to her lips as she watched her mother slow-dancing with a butch, but not unattractive woman in a pinstripe suit.
Shane was platonically enjoying dirty dancing with a surprisingly agile Helena.
Dana was wrapped around Alice in a way that really left no room for doubt in terms of their relationship. Anyone with eyes could see the intimacy between them. Dana’s hand resting underneath the hem of Alice’s shirt was probably the biggest red flag of all.
If possible, Dana was even drunker than Alice and resting against her at such an angle that her next comment was an adoring, "Your chin is so sexy, baby."
Alice’s smile widened and she said, "Thank you, baby. I think the whole top of your head’s sexy."
Dana absently scratched at Alice’s bare skin and she heard the subsequent rush of air coming from Alice’s lungs.
Tremulously, Alice questioned, "Dana, is it too soon in our relationship for me to fuck you in the bathroom?"
Dana craned her neck so that she could see Alice’s expression. Dana’s seriousness caused Alice to backtrack, saying quickly, "Are we not in that place yet? That’s cool. No biggie."
Dana leaned into Alice, her breath warm against the musician’s neck, "I think you can fuck me anywhere you want, baby."
Alice’s grin was enormous as she leered at Dana. "Anywhere?"
Dana smiled, the alcohol charging her desire for Alice to lofty new heights. "I’d probably let you use this table if your mom wasn’t here."
Slurring slightly, Alice said, "Damn Lenore. Always standing in the way."
Dana grinned and said, "Would it be so cheesy of me to quote Top Gun right now?"
Alice took a sip of her drink and said, "Negative, Gost Writer. There’s always time for a Top Gun reference. Unless it involves me leading the patrons of this bar in a chorus of You’ve Lost that Lovin’ Feelin’. Because Dane? I left my uniform at home."
Laughing, Dana took Alice’s hand and the two of them shakily got to their feet.
Dana leaned in until her mouth was right beside Alice’s ear and then she said, "Take me to the bathroom or lose me forever."
Letting go of Alice, she did a surprisingly graceful turn and then sashayed to the bathroom with such attitude that Alice was momentarily frozen.
Finally snapping out of the hypnotic state induced by Dana’s swaying hips, Alice muttered to herself, "Show me the way home, honey."
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Poor Alice!! I would probably curl up into a ball and die if my mother did that to me. At least she had Dana there with her fir support. So how long before Alice starts to grow tired of having to hide being with Dana? You can already see guilt of it all is eating Dana alive. But what about Alice? Do we get to see how she really feels about it all? Anyway I can’t wait for next post since you left us dangling there at the end. I just love a drunk Dana.
Not a drop of Danish tonight until you showed up at 3am EST. I was about to go to bed. What can I say? You are amazing! Thank you for your comment and analysis. I totally agree with you about ED’s & LH’s. If weren’t for their outstanding performance, I do not think I will be so hooked on reading all these Danish stories and writing comments at 4am. I thought I too came across a story or 2 about A & L. But I did not read them. So if you happen to know, please tell me then I shall broaden my horizon. You have Lenore down perfectly. Thanks a lot Lenore, “Seems like I just met the last one”; Charlie’s angel? (Like Jaclyn Smith and hope is not Kate Jackson); “and the six million dollar man came along”. Poor Alice. I couldn’t stop laughing while reading this chapter. You are just a natural and your timing is perfect. Sitting in the booth scene really hit the whole staying in the closet issue. Good job. Btw, you are way to humble about your success. I am still laughing as I am typing this. Bravo! And I did not have one drop of alcohol. Like I was telling Akiracolorblind earlier. Danish stories make the best night cap. Hope you have a happy weekend & looking forward to your next post.
Hey frip, I must say that I ahve always liked Leonore and wish she would be back on the show. You really got her pegged down and Al is so different wieh she is around. I feel that Helena and Dana got more than they wanted w/Leonore and see why Al is the way she is IMO. Great chapter frip!!
oohhh… leave us hangin right there huh? again, LOVE IT! I logged in two seconds after I got home! hahah I can’t wait for the next chapter
you are z best frip!!this story is beyond good loving it and no do not mind the quick posts look forward to my daily danish can always count on you making it delicious;)
Another excellent chapter! The drama was nicely offset with the humor and love between Dana and Alice. I hope the next installment picks up in the bathroom. And you can be my wingman any time….
HEY!!!! I do really agree wih you about ED & LH. I don’t think the story would be great if it wasn’t for their wonderful performance on the show! I love the Top Gun reference: that was cute. I love the story about lil’ Alice getting rescued by the Six Million Dollar Man. I felt sorry for Alice about her mother, but what mother doesn’t have an embarassing story about their child? lol anyways great job..PPS!
Awww. This chapter was a little hard to read. I had a rough childhood, so Lenore’s blatant disregard and condescension toward Alice bring back a lot of memories. Poor thing. I’m glad Dana was so supportive, though I kinda wonder why Shane wasn’t moreso. Oh well. And as toward me being Yoda, yeah right. I’m thinking you could teach me a thing or five about writing, so hush. This is great, can’t wait to read more.
hey! i love this story, its so cute & funny! i totally agree that ED & LH played the relationship soooo well on the show & that is what made it so interesting. looking forward to the next post :)