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Let it Ride- Chapter 5c
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Chapter 5c- the lovin’ continues.
Dana blinked awake hazily, her mind wrapping itself around the familiar sights and sounds that meant she had slept at Alice’s place. As if the warm, soft body resting next to her wasn’t enough to clue her in, Dana had become intimitately acquainted with the surroundings in Alice’s bedroom.
Minty green sheets that smelled like the gentle, fresh detergent that had the picture of the adorably fluffy lamb on the bottle. Eggshell colored walls. Dana opened her eyes further, breathing in the clean, energizing smell of Alice herself. Dana was wrapped around Alice loosely, her bare chest snug against Alice’s lower back and her lips pressed against the smooth, bare skin of the musician’s shoulder.
Pursing her lips, she kissed Alice’s skin softly as her arm unconsciously tightened it’s hold. Dana couldn’t stop the enormous smile from stretching her lips as she recalled the previous night’s events. Morning was breaking outside but Alice’s room was still comfortingly dim and the quiet didn’t stop the memories of the night before from playing on a continuous loop in Dana’s mind.
Dana’s memories were rushing at her swiftly and she closed her eyes happily, replaying everything she could recall about the way Alice had acted and the things that she’d said. Most importantly was the way she’d made Dana feel. Dana had never been the sole object of a person’s singular, unwavering desire. She had never felt so wanted and beloved as Alice had made her feel.
A quick, subtle throb between her legs alerted her to the returning need that Alice had stoked within her.
A little guiltily, Dana remembered being so exhausted from Alice’s focused ministrations that she had barely had time to kiss Alice before she had fallen into a dreamless, deep slumber.
Pressing her lips to Alice’s shoulder and holding them there while she thought, Dana began to consider her strategy. She wasn’t totally inexperienced. Though last night now counted as the most intense and important sexual experience of her life, Dana had had some romantic involvement. The summer with Ralph had included sweet, awkward fumblings and timid touches that Dana supposed now were nothing if not educational.
Still, the thought of being able to the things Alice had done to her last night to Alice was frightening and wonderful at the same time.
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OMG be prepared to be Leonored,,,LOL,,,now that was funny!! I liked how you had them go to the groceries, cause Dana likes to eat real food, and I do too,,,,,,and finally to set up Helena with Bette, I just love it…can’t wait to see what happens between them both and with Leonor with Al and co,.,,frip I loved it!!!
You are truly amazing. I am blown away that you can post so frequently and with such strong chapters!. Loved this one. You wrote Dana just right. I was a bit worried about her and her limited experience. Alice handled the situation just right and I’m sure Dana is a quick learner. ;-D Thank you again for the great Danish story!! Can’t wait for the next chapter….
yay! i was hoping you’d hook up bette and helena! and lenoreeee is the best
That was a good combination: Helena and Bette. The morning scene was very hot between Dana and Alice, very sultry..Danish are so f’n hot together and so sexy. Their chemistry together in your story is amazing. Thank you for enjoying my story also. I can’t wait to see what will happen when Lenore comes to make a visit. PPS.
You are brilliant!! I loved the morning scene. That was just so Danish. I can’t wait to get “Lenored”. Keep it up.
Very, very nice and very sweet. And you deserve all the compliments, your story blows all mine out of the water! I’m sitting here waiting to get Lenored.
I must borrowed the quote from Darth Vader saying to Luke Skywalker, ” Impressive, Young one!” Your performance so far reminds me of reading previous Danish stories written by Akiracolorblind, Amanda92688, BoyToy, Brteyes, Caitlin Jayne, ClosetDana, CombatBarbie, CrystalMeth, Debs21221, DeLeishous, Dreiser, Foxfire, Gemzo, Guesswho, Iloveleisha07, Janet Marie, Layla Gray, Mcilwaine, MutedTempest, nbd14. Poopy Sh*t, Portia Only, Purpleswirls, SammyGirl, Sulkygeeks, Suzieb33, Swissmiss24, Twisted Tales & WriteNsurf, just to name a few. Pardon me if I did not type your names correctly. All of you should be inducted into the Danish Writer Hall of Fame (if there is ever one) for your dedication or imagination or story line or beautiful writing style including the accuracy of portraying the characters. All the Danish writers have given me so much joy over the past few months. I thank you all. You mentioned writing Alice & Lara. I have conflicting feelings with the concept. OK, only if it would take place after Dana passed away. It is kind of creepy to have 2 people having the same ex to get together. I feel the same way you do about Alice & Helena as BBF. As for this chapter, it is another winner. 1st, you had prof. Alice teaching student Dana Sex 105 (a little bit more advance than 101). I also love the food shopping scene and their development of their closeness, discovering each other and working out their insecurity. They are just adorable together. Can’t wait to find out what “Lenored” is all about. Thank you again.
Lenore! be prepared… be very prepared hahahah!!! brilliant! I kinda lost this one and i was looking for this everywhere, lucky for me hail was there to help.:)keep it up!!!
frip – please do not apologize for posting quickly. i love that almost everyday this week i received a new update from you. the only thing i am scared of is that you will finish and we will never hear from you again. you MUST continue with new stories after this one. and i won’t be mad if you post them everyday as well. anyway – ah the land of foreplay and reciprocity. sounds nice. this was a great chapter – i am intrigued as to what drama lenore is going to bring in her wake. i love that dana and alice are starting to share more of their feelings and i am glad they are gettin some now. and about the sorority – um i guess i’ll let that one slide. haha just kidding my best friend was in a sorority and it was just as crazy as your girls depicted in here. have a good holiday. later.