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Let it Ride- Chapter 8
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Dana walked out of the elevator, immediately glad that she’d thought to bring a sweater. Pulling it on as she entered the hallway, she smiled as she heard the sound of Alice’s band practicing.
Helena’s directions had been rather vague and Dana was pleased with herself for correctly navigating the serpentine hallways of the refurbished, but largely abandoned loft building where the A-Okays rented practice space.
Approaching a heavy, wooden sliding door, Dana found it open just enough to slip through without much hassle.
Alice’s back was turned but Dana could see her sitting on an amp while tuning her guitar. The tall blonde singer that Dana recognized as Jude waved but didn’t leave the paper he was frantically making notes on. The other guys, Frank and Dylan, were busy setting up some piece of equipment that Dana couldn’t hope to understand.
Unaware of Dana’s presence, Alice jumped off the amp and started messing around with some chords. Dana listened with a smile and watched as Alice moved restlessly with the guitar, her playing becoming more intense as she seemed to move to some kind of melody in her head. She was in the middle of a very cool, very unrehearsed solo when she turned and saw Dana.
Dana’s heart skipped pleasantly as she saw the gleeful look on Alice’s features. Both girls were happy to see each other, feeling as though far too much time had passed since they first woke up together. There was a satisfied, relieved feeling to the reunion even though they both maintained a passable facade of friendliness.
Dana knew that the guys had seen them hug before and she knew that Alice trusted them implicitly but she still hung back; uncertain of the boundaries. Dana found that absurd because she was the one making the rules and it still didn’t make them any more defined.
Alice glimpsed the fleeting confusion in Dana’s eyes and though it caused her own heart to beat faster with nervousness, especially in light of what she’d discussed with Helena, she used their positioning to her advantage. Dana’s back was to the rest of the band so Alice moved in close enough to brush her fingers across Dana’s midriff and squeeze her hip affectionately.
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Frip so loved that Helena is a great friend to Al, and seeing that Al took the advice she was given. Now we see the Tina is in the picture and seems to have noticed how Dana reacted to Dana talking about Al, but didnt say a word. I love how Al an Dana are so corny that is it sweet at the same time…great chapter Frip.
Just as I was getting off line, I decided to check the page and come to find out who put up a new post. Well I guess I found out sooner than I thought. lol. I’m glad that Helena was there for Alice when she needed a friend. OOOhhhh, Miss Tina Kennard comes into the picture. I can kind of think of where this is going. I think. lol Dana and Alice are so cute together. I hope that the 3 days will go smoothingly for the two ladies, even though they won’t be together because of the different occasions. I can’t wait to see what happens next. Oh yeah, thanks for enjoy my last chapter!!!! PPS.
FANTASTASTIC!!! will there be some drama coming up? hmm i hope so i love it lol man i love this story keep up the good work!!! :)
I told Akiracolorblind that it would be an earlier night but instead I was catching up on some old blogs regarding the show. Again, at 3 am your post appeared. What could I say other than I must read it. Thank you for mentioning Crossroads by Goldrun15. I will get to it soon. Btw, I also have friends who think orange juice and ketchup are fruit and vegetables. I have a chuckle from it. I think as you get older, you will think differently. Anyway back to your story. In the last chapter, I also noticed the red head but I did not want to think, even an inkling, that she was into culinary. If so, bring her on. I believe A & D’s deep love for each other would help them to endure all hurdles coming their way. From the conversation with H, A’s fear was totally legitimate. There would be the Fairbanks and the whole tennis world that they had to deal with. I look forward to seeing how things will unfold. “Let him who desires peace prepare for war,” that’s deep and true. I also like the introduction of TK. Wow, another incredibly good chapter. I totally agreed with the effect they had on each other. I guess being in love, one could conquer all. Yes, for you, carte blanche will always stand. Please do not ever second guess your writing ability. If MT said you are good, YOU ARE GOOD, period. One last thing, you can always bring back the hand washing deleted scene in another chapter. I will love to read that. Thanks again for your post.
yeah there is a huge time difference between where I live and where you live. I’m guessing your from the USA? or not somewhere in the west? We have like a ten hour difference. I just had dinner with my friends so idk what you’d be doing at this hour. I’m so glad that I stopped to check who has posted, this is another great chapter from you. I just love happy Danish. It makes me smile all the time. I hope they’ll get though without seeing each other for two days lol. Thanks for the post. I’m looking forward to the next one.:)