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Let it Ride- Chapter 8
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Dana smiled, sinking into the touch almost unknowingly. Breathing evenly, she said, "Hey, you."
Alice grinned, pulling her hand back to strum absently at her guitar as she said, "Hey, yourself."
Casting an over the shoulder glance at the guys, who seemed to be busying themselves quite conveniently, Dana looked back at Alice and breathed out, "I missed you today."
Alice found herself beaming at the gravity in Dana’s statement. "Missed you too. Does that make us pathetic?"
Dana seemed to consider a moment before she smiled and said, "I think it does, yeah."
Alice, unbothered, said dismisivelly, "Ehh. Fuck ‘em."
Dana laughed but momentarily, her serious expression came back and she asked, "What am I gonna do without you this weekend?"
Stepping closer, but barred from further closeness by the men still in the room as well as the physical presence of the guitar between them, Alice said sadly, "I wish I could be there for you, baby."
Sighing, Dana nodded, saying, "Me too. I wish I could see you. I know you’re gonna do great."
Alice had to smile at the confidence Dana showed in her abilities. Disregarding the others, Alice broke her usual protocol and laid her hand on Dana’s arm. "You’re gonna kill, Dane. I wish I could see it. You’re so ready for this."
Dana put her own hand over Alice’s and brought it to her lips briefly. Somehow, Alice’s presence made everything better.
They were brought out of their private moment when the bubbling, bouncing sound of the bass guitar began to echo through the amps.
Dana looked up in surprise and Alice said, "I think we’ve got a little bit more in us, Dane. Do you mind hanging around for maybe thirty minutes?"
Dana shook her head. "I don’t mind at all."
Alice grinned and leaned over to pick something up, saying absently, "Cool."
Dana used Alice’s momentary distraction to say, "I don’t mind because I get to watch my sexy, rockstar girlfriend and it makes me very, very hot."
Alice shot up and looked at Dana incredulously; amazed that those words had come out of her Dana’s mouth. Her Dana!
Not that Dana was a prude. No, the girl was a sexual prodigy as luck would have it. But even drunk, Dana had a hard time being perfectly frank with her desires.
Dana laughed at the lustful, surprised look on her girlfriend’s face and turned to walk toward a ratty old couch that had definitely seen better days.
A few minutes later, the band was really getting into gear and Dana was feeling positively electrified. She knew she wasn’t the greatest judge of music. In fact, her pitifully small CD collection had become the butt of Shane and Alice’s combined derision. Still, Dana could tell that the A-Okays made incredible music. And the way Alice was strutting around the practice stage couldn’t help but highlight that there was something special about her.
In fact, there seemed to be an unusually cocky bent to Alice’s on-stage swagger. She seemed to be throwing her all into the practice and Dana grinned, suspecting it might have something to do with her earlier words.
She liked knowing the effect she had on Alice. Almost as much as she liked the effect Alice had on her.
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Frip so loved that Helena is a great friend to Al, and seeing that Al took the advice she was given. Now we see the Tina is in the picture and seems to have noticed how Dana reacted to Dana talking about Al, but didnt say a word. I love how Al an Dana are so corny that is it sweet at the same time…great chapter Frip.
Just as I was getting off line, I decided to check the page and come to find out who put up a new post. Well I guess I found out sooner than I thought. lol. I’m glad that Helena was there for Alice when she needed a friend. OOOhhhh, Miss Tina Kennard comes into the picture. I can kind of think of where this is going. I think. lol Dana and Alice are so cute together. I hope that the 3 days will go smoothingly for the two ladies, even though they won’t be together because of the different occasions. I can’t wait to see what happens next. Oh yeah, thanks for enjoy my last chapter!!!! PPS.
FANTASTASTIC!!! will there be some drama coming up? hmm i hope so i love it lol man i love this story keep up the good work!!! :)
I told Akiracolorblind that it would be an earlier night but instead I was catching up on some old blogs regarding the show. Again, at 3 am your post appeared. What could I say other than I must read it. Thank you for mentioning Crossroads by Goldrun15. I will get to it soon. Btw, I also have friends who think orange juice and ketchup are fruit and vegetables. I have a chuckle from it. I think as you get older, you will think differently. Anyway back to your story. In the last chapter, I also noticed the red head but I did not want to think, even an inkling, that she was into culinary. If so, bring her on. I believe A & D’s deep love for each other would help them to endure all hurdles coming their way. From the conversation with H, A’s fear was totally legitimate. There would be the Fairbanks and the whole tennis world that they had to deal with. I look forward to seeing how things will unfold. “Let him who desires peace prepare for war,” that’s deep and true. I also like the introduction of TK. Wow, another incredibly good chapter. I totally agreed with the effect they had on each other. I guess being in love, one could conquer all. Yes, for you, carte blanche will always stand. Please do not ever second guess your writing ability. If MT said you are good, YOU ARE GOOD, period. One last thing, you can always bring back the hand washing deleted scene in another chapter. I will love to read that. Thanks again for your post.
yeah there is a huge time difference between where I live and where you live. I’m guessing your from the USA? or not somewhere in the west? We have like a ten hour difference. I just had dinner with my friends so idk what you’d be doing at this hour. I’m so glad that I stopped to check who has posted, this is another great chapter from you. I just love happy Danish. It makes me smile all the time. I hope they’ll get though without seeing each other for two days lol. Thanks for the post. I’m looking forward to the next one.:)