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“Al?” Dana asked, snapping her fingers in front of Alice’s face.
“Hi Dana,” Alice finally found the words to reply.
The server came over and they all placed their orders.
“Oh, and a small fruit bowl,” Bette added. She realized she should get something for Angelica even if she was unlikely to eat much of it.
“She can have some of my toast too Bette,” Tina said.
“We never have a shortage of food here, that’s for sure,” Dana said as she tucked the menu back into the rack on the table.
“Should I go get Angelica?” Tina asked.
“I can get her,” Bette replied.
“It’s okay,” Tina said. “Relax. I’ll be right back.” She rose from her seat and placed her hand on Bette’s shoulder as she made her way past the chair and toward the office.
“Okay, what the fuck is going on?” Alice asked, squaring herself to Bette as she inquired.
“Not now Alice,” Bette said. “All I’m going to say is that Tina and I are testing the waters right now, but nothing is going on.”
The tone with which Bette spoke convinced Alice that she shouldn’t push the issue any further.
Angelica was walking hand-in-hand with Tina back to the table.
“I’ll tell mom,” Angelica said excitedly.
“That’s okay sweetie,” Tina tried to stop the flow of information.
“Mom, I saw the lady that had a sleepover at our house,” Angelica said excitedly.
Bette almost choked on her coffee, but managed to regain her composure to reply.
“Did you say hi?”
“She sure did,” Tina replied as she sat down and brought Angelica up onto her lap. “And then she introduced me. You might have some explaining to do Bette.” Tina laughed and brought the sippy cup from the tabletop to hand to her daughter.
“Sorry Tee,” Bette said quietly.
“Nothing to apologize to me for,” Tina replied with a smile.
Angelica set her cup down and started playing with Tina’s ring as Tina’s hand steadied the child on her lap.
“Are you coming over again Mommy?” Angelica asked.
“We’re all coming over to play in the pool this afternoon,” Tina explained.
“Are you going to have a sleep over with mom?” Angelica pressed on, innocent as to the implication of her question.
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Oh my God!
I am so happy that you are back!
I love your stories, i read them more than once over the years.
But i don’t have time to reread this story, have to work very early in the morning , but i hope to read it when i am back tomorrow. I am looking forward to it!
You are a incredible writer and i do hope that you will find the time to write more! For now, thank you again for returning!
I was so happy to see your name again, I love your stories, off to read now,, but please continue to post more stories.,, please post soon.
Thanks for the shoutout! You’re an incredible writer with a natural style that pulls the reader in and makes one sorry when the chapter/story ends. Your writing demands rereading many times. It’s just that enjoyable. :-)
Brilliant, thanks so much for this. 62 Pages of pleasure.
Enjoy your stories which are good to read more than once.
Look forward to keeping on swimming :-)
I love this story, as I always enjoy reading your work!
Loved it, thanks so much. You are such a good writer!
Glad you are back,I love your stories.
I certainly remember this story and I love it more now. Thanks for updating the language so the profane language is present. It’s not that I am a complete potty mouth but let’s be realistic. Several of the stories that have transferred over have blanks or asterisks instead of the actual language. In my opinion, when this happens, the stories lose some of their authenticity and the characters lose their edge. I realize that it takes effort to fill in the blanks especially in longer stories. So thanks for doing that.
I find stories harder to read with the asterisks inserted…it’s like a jolt of reality interfering with my escapism. I had to get to the task of editing them out. I do plan to work on more stories; some easier than others because of where the files are. This story was first posted almost 10 (!) years ago, so the digital file was more challenging to retrieve. I’m not much for cursing, but the occasional well placed F-bomb can really get someone’s attention.
@JKS I can’t believe this story is almost 10 years old! It reads now as fresh as it did then. I really love your stories because they are so well written with realism, humor, sarcasm and authenticity. It also helps that for us ORs (Original Readers), it follows canon for the characters and storylines. :-)
WOW, what a fabulous surprise seeing you back here, JKS! So glad you found your way back here and have even edited! Let me know if you have any questions or need any help!
Wonderful story. Thanks for sharing again!
Thanks for your effort of editing and for giving us this wonderful story again.
It’s still as beautiful as I remember it from reading your story for the first time a few years ago.
Finally I managed to finish reading!
I was slowly reading this story.
And I confess that it was a great trip.
Pretty and wonderful.!
And to think that have passed since the 10 years, but
It remains very current.
The entire universe.
Don’t remember seeing this before and it was wonderful, took me back a ways. So great to have you back giving us something to read from you. Wish other former writers would come back to us, all of you are valued and missed greatly. So many of the stories are not completed, would be so nice if they were. Again welcome back, looking forward to more. Thanks.
Loved this! I love your writing. I’m so glad I’ve come across your stories, be it years later but better late than never lol