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”Do you want me to carry you sweetie?” Bette asked as she opened the door.
”I can Mom,” Angelica waved her off and took a step over the threshold. Each move towards independence softly broke Bette’s heart as it simultaneously filled her with pride. It was hard to let her be anything but her little girl.
Bette removed her sarong and then fastened a life jacket around Angelica before they stepped down into the pool.
”It’s cool in the water today,” Bette observed with some consternation. ”Is it too cold for you?”
Angelica started splashing as soon as her hands reached the water, as a silent response to Bette’s question.
It didn’t take long before they’d both grown accustomed to the temperature. Bette let Angelica float on her back and pulled her through the water as she stared up.
”Looks like you two are having a good time,” Tina said from the edge of the pool.
”Mommy!” Angelica squealed as she struggled with the water to get upright. Bette helped her as she walked them both back to the steps.
”Did you bring a bathing suit?” Bette asked.
”I did,” Tina replied.
Once Angelica got to the steps, she made her way up them and threw her arms up to be lifted.
”Mommy still has her clothes on Angel,” Bette chided.
”It’s okay,” Tina said as she bent to scoop up the toddler. ”I have my bathing suit on underneath.”
Angelica rested her head under Tina’s chin and gave her a great big bear hug. Just as quickly, she struggled to get down again.
”Swim with me!”
”Yes, we’ll swim,” Tina laughed. She untucked her shirt and smoothly brought it over her head, revealing a jet-black bikini top that left precious little to the imagination. Her moves seemed to occur in slow motion as Bette watched. She quickly turned away and dove under the surface of the water as she felt her face flush. She came up to see Tina and their daughter walking down the pool stairs.
”God the water’s cold today,” Tina said as she stepped in.
”I think it just seems cold at first because it’s so hot out,” Bette said. ”It doesn’t take long before it seems warm.”
”Okay I’ll take your word for it.”
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Oh my God!
I am so happy that you are back!
I love your stories, i read them more than once over the years.
But i don’t have time to reread this story, have to work very early in the morning , but i hope to read it when i am back tomorrow. I am looking forward to it!
You are a incredible writer and i do hope that you will find the time to write more! For now, thank you again for returning!
I was so happy to see your name again, I love your stories, off to read now,, but please continue to post more stories.,, please post soon.
Thanks for the shoutout! You’re an incredible writer with a natural style that pulls the reader in and makes one sorry when the chapter/story ends. Your writing demands rereading many times. It’s just that enjoyable. :-)
Brilliant, thanks so much for this. 62 Pages of pleasure.
Enjoy your stories which are good to read more than once.
Look forward to keeping on swimming :-)
I love this story, as I always enjoy reading your work!
Loved it, thanks so much. You are such a good writer!
Glad you are back,I love your stories.
I certainly remember this story and I love it more now. Thanks for updating the language so the profane language is present. It’s not that I am a complete potty mouth but let’s be realistic. Several of the stories that have transferred over have blanks or asterisks instead of the actual language. In my opinion, when this happens, the stories lose some of their authenticity and the characters lose their edge. I realize that it takes effort to fill in the blanks especially in longer stories. So thanks for doing that.
I find stories harder to read with the asterisks inserted…it’s like a jolt of reality interfering with my escapism. I had to get to the task of editing them out. I do plan to work on more stories; some easier than others because of where the files are. This story was first posted almost 10 (!) years ago, so the digital file was more challenging to retrieve. I’m not much for cursing, but the occasional well placed F-bomb can really get someone’s attention.
@JKS I can’t believe this story is almost 10 years old! It reads now as fresh as it did then. I really love your stories because they are so well written with realism, humor, sarcasm and authenticity. It also helps that for us ORs (Original Readers), it follows canon for the characters and storylines. :-)
WOW, what a fabulous surprise seeing you back here, JKS! So glad you found your way back here and have even edited! Let me know if you have any questions or need any help!
Wonderful story. Thanks for sharing again!
Thanks for your effort of editing and for giving us this wonderful story again.
It’s still as beautiful as I remember it from reading your story for the first time a few years ago.
Finally I managed to finish reading!
I was slowly reading this story.
And I confess that it was a great trip.
Pretty and wonderful.!
And to think that have passed since the 10 years, but
It remains very current.
The entire universe.
Don’t remember seeing this before and it was wonderful, took me back a ways. So great to have you back giving us something to read from you. Wish other former writers would come back to us, all of you are valued and missed greatly. So many of the stories are not completed, would be so nice if they were. Again welcome back, looking forward to more. Thanks.